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21st December 2012

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Level 40 : Master Pony
Posted 09/20/12 2:57:59 pm , last updated: 09/21/12 3:19:06 pm
09/20/12
21st December 2012.
I grab my mother's hand. The evacuation centre is mostly made of dull, cheap metal with thick glass windows letting in the orange light of raging fires. It's 5 in the morning. Our alarms had been set to 4am so we had time to get ready for today. We're in the long cue now. Our estimated evacuation pod is number 21. The date today, although the only reason I remember the date is because of our situation. I stare aimlessly out one of the windows at the thick steel doors which had locked us in this place for the past week. I wonder what it would be like on the new planet. We had received letters a few weeks ago containing the information about London Evacuation Centre. I can almost remember the whole thing off by heart. The shock of it was so much it would be impossible to forget. 
"Dear Orange family,
We are writing to you to inform you about a serious scientific discovery. 3 days ago, scientists at Bristol university discovered a large comet about half the size of the earth is forecast to smash into the atlantic ocean, destroying Earth as we know it. 
You are advised to come to the London Evacuation Centre on the 14th December 2012 - directions to the centre enclosed. Please note if you do not attend you will be incinerated. 
Packet food will be provided while staying in the centre and travelling in the pods. You may bring any food you have, however you will have limited fridge/freezer space in the pods so please ensure most of it is long-lasting food in no need of freezing/keeping cool. 
You will be allowed 2 bags per person + 1 day bag on the pods, so use your space wisely. Once we leave, the Earth will implode in a huge firey mess - there will be no going back. Please ensure your liquids and electricals are in plastic bags ready to display at check-in; there is no maximum limit to liquids and electricals.
Security for the journey will be taken very seriously. Each person and their luggage will be thoroughly scanned, checked and searched. No explosives, poisonous gasses, acids, weapons and other harmful substances will be allowed. Items such as these will be transported in their own pod under strict supervision. 
The planet we will be moving to is called Kepler 22b and is 3 galaxies away. Scientists have worked long and hard to create pods which will travel to Saturn where a wormhole has been discovered which will take us to one of Kepler 22b's moons. The journey will take approximately 2 years. You will be provided with free food, water, healthcare and hygiene facilities as well as family beds.
Thank you for reading this letter,
David Cameron"
And that was the day that changed my life forever. I peer down the queue. We're nearly there, just 2 families to go now. One skinny man with brown stubble and a dirty grey beanie and 1 bag had been stopped. We see him get taken away to one of the interview rooms by the security. I look down at my feet. I shuffle them along the shiny white, tiled floor. We're called to one of the check in desks. 
After about 45 minutes of them searching our bags and persons, we're led to our pod. We're led by a security officer clad in black protective clothes and a dark mask through a poorly-lit metal corridor to one of the pods. We're the last people onto pod 21. The security officer, followed by about 15 others, steps into the pod and keys in a code which makes the door close with a gentle whirring. I sit down on one of the metal benches in the corridor and listen intently, a tear rolling down my cheek, to the security officer in part J explaining what will happen. We're ushered into our room - room 21J50. There are about 1000 people on each pod, which adds up to 60000 pods in total! Each ship has 10 parts of 100 people each, we're the last people on so we're in part J. Our room is all a dull grey colour, grey metal walls, grey checkerplate floor, crisp, plasticy white beds, and by each bed, a small wooden chest of drawers. There's two more seperate beds in a small room - one of these is mine, the other is just spare. Next to my room there is a small grey room with a white toilet, a few rolls of thin scratchy toilet paper and a thin grey piece of cloth acting as a pedestal mat; a tiny white sink with a flavourless bar of soap and grey fluffy towel; and a small white shower with only a button to turn it on/off and a knob to adjust the temperature. In the main room there's also a small countertop space and a microwave, another tiny sink, a small fridge freezer with some ice cubes in and some cupboards. When we look inside the cupboards we find one is stuffed with packet food; a mix of microwave chicken and soup, bread, dried fruit and other dried goods. In another cupboard is a laminated sheet with instructions of the microwave, information about saving food and other information about the journey, pod and new planet; some crockery including 8 plates, 4 cups, 4 mugs, 8 bowls and other kitchen utensils; and a small selection of cutlery - 8 spoons, 8 knives, 8 forks and some other items such as ladels and spatulas.
I look out the window at the blazing ruins of Earth. Everything that mattered to me is now on this pod - or another pod if they're a friend. I can just see pod 20 taking off. An announcement comes through a tannoy in the corner of the room which I hadn't yet noticed, making me jump. 
"10 minutes till lift off. 10 minutes." I guess it's 10 minutes till lift off. I text my friend to see what pod she's on. After a while of staring out the window, I'm startled by a sudden "PING!" and a vibration.
"21, you?" Says the text. I let out a small smile. I text her back saying what room I was in, and before it even finished sending the text I heard the announcement.
"10 seconds till lift off. 9... 8... 7..." The butterflies in my tummy are awakened. I look around nervously. 
"4... 3... 2..." An ear splitting boom is heard. The whole room vibrates. I run to the window. I look down at Earth, my hand pressed longingly against the window. I couldn't even hear the number 1...





Thank you for reading my story! Part 2 coming soon!
And yeah, i'm doing a better picture tomorrow ._.
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Tags:23rd, December, 2012, Pod, Evacuate, London, Earth, Apocalypse, World, Ending, End, Story

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Update #1 : 09/21/2012 3:19:06 pm9/21/12

Updated to 21st of December because you're all fussy :3
Made nice-ish picture although I'm bad at pixel art.

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BoogyBear
Level 20
Expert Pixel Painter
September 25, 2012, 2:19 pm

This is awesome! This would be scary if this actually happened O+O, but I don't really believe the world will end on December 21st Or any stuff like that. Anyways, nice story :D

LoZ4ever
Level 7
Apprentice Narwhal
September 25, 2012, 3:04 am

The world will not end in 2012. Technically when the sun goes out the world will end. And since that won't happen in another 4.9 billion years, we're going to be ok.

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 25, 2012, 6:17 am

Guess what! Hogwarts doesn't exist!

LoZ4ever
Level 7
Apprentice Narwhal
September 25, 2012, 1:00 pm

Guess what! I don't care!

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 25, 2012, 1:12 pm

Why are you here then? -.-

MapleLemonade
Level 2
Apprentice Skinner
November 3, 2012, 4:32 pm

Hogwarts Exists... In Peoples Imaginations And In Movies :3

Blingdaddy1
Level 5
Apprentice Engineer
September 24, 2012, 3:44 am

I've wroten a short 8 page story based on this. Same idea, same pod number, but there is a twist here and there.

Midnightghost567
Level 28
Expert Pixel Painter
September 24, 2012, 1:27 am

Some people say that the world will end in 2012 but I do not think that. I believe it will go on for centuries and centuries.

The Micro Freak
Level 30
Artisan Wolf Whisperer
September 23, 2012, 3:24 pm

The world is going to end the day after my birthday. I'll never be able to drink alcohol. (Legally)

+Sheena+
Level 29
Expert Princess
September 21, 2012, 9:39 pm

Love it Orange. 

luke_chaos
Level 13
Journeyman Creeper Hugger
September 21, 2012, 2:56 pm

OMG OMG so good.

DogsRNice
Level 12
Journeyman Skinner
September 21, 2012, 2:51 pm

no the world will end around 10 trillion years from now

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 22, 2012, 12:35 am

*sigh* ever heard of a fictional story? Read the rest of the comments I've had to post.

vertigo101
Level 6
Apprentice Narwhal
September 21, 2012, 3:01 pm

and if we dont have interstellar travel or terraformaition by then rither religion kicked in again or we all got killed by something

 

Sabo
Level 49
Master Miner
September 21, 2012, 12:25 pm

All it takes is a few mad scientists with the idea of fame and wealth and a bomb or something  made of a deadly chemical to launch it into space to contaminiate the world with zombie-making gas on December 31, 2012

Just saying....

KnobleKnives
Chat Moderator
Level 50
Grandmaster Nerd
September 21, 2012, 11:39 am

You know, I wouldn't believe in something that was originally concocted by a bunch of sacrifice-our-children-to-gods-who-don't-even-exist Mayans several hundred years ago.

Good story by the way xD. +1 diamond.

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 21, 2012, 11:44 am

I don't believe it x3 we were just doing "creation of earth" in geography and then we got into this discussion about how the world will end this december but it probably won't and I thought it'd make a good story :3

KnobleKnives
Chat Moderator
Level 50
Grandmaster Nerd
September 21, 2012, 11:56 am

Haha, yeah. Some of my friends told me that some people at their school believe in "2012"

I think it's all just one big load of baloney xD.

crazeygrl
Level 18
Journeyman Unicorn
September 21, 2012, 12:33 pm

People only think that because the Myan calender ended in 2012. The Myans never said that the world WILL end in 2012. I think it's because they were smart enough to know we could keep the calender going by then. 

MapleLemonade
Level 2
Apprentice Skinner
November 3, 2012, 4:32 pm

THE MAYANS RAN OUT OF PAPER.

Coined_Panther
Level 39
Artisan Bunny
September 21, 2012, 11:23 am

I WILL NOT MISS MY FUCKING CHRISTMAS! I WILL BITCH SLAP WHATEVER THE FUCK IS TRYING TO STOP ME FROM GETTING MU PRESENTS. Bitch. Love the blog, juicy <3

Wolf King
Level 27
Expert Dragonborn
September 21, 2012, 11:53 am

And When it happens....Il will be right there next to you BITCH SLAPPIN IT!!!! CAUSE I MUST HAZ CHRISTMAS!!!
oh and wonderful story. I will be reading part 2 ;D

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 21, 2012, 11:28 am

IKR WE MISS BOXING DAY EVE.

SilentAero
Level 11
Journeyman Artist
September 21, 2012, 11:40 am

BUT I LOVE BOXING DAY EVE. IT'S EVEN BETTER THAN TURKEY'S GIVING.

Coined_Panther
Level 39
Artisan Bunny
September 29, 2012, 4:34 am

NUUUHHH! BABY JEBUS WON'T GET HIS TRUKEY LERFTOVERS!

crafter4ever
Level 35
Artisan Slime Tamer
September 21, 2012, 7:48 am

It is the 21st, not the 23rd. Not saying I believe it, just saying.

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 21, 2012, 7:50 am

yeah, I heard it as 21st, 23rd, 24th and 25th but the first time I heard it was as the 23rd :/ so yeah :3 I don't believe it, I just thought it'd be cool to write a story about death and explosions and fire :3

crafter4ever
Level 35
Artisan Slime Tamer
September 21, 2012, 7:52 am

It was the 21st because it is said to happen on the winter sostace.

Tairan
Level 48
Master Necromancer
September 21, 2012, 6:08 am

But its the 21st not the 23rd :/

Nice7
Level 46
Master Baconator
September 20, 2012, 10:56 pm

its meant to be the 21st

Mohammadtr
Level 11
Journeyman Creeper Hugger
September 20, 2012, 9:41 pm

LOLOL, GUYZ, WAKEZ UP... The sun will rise from where it usually goes done, THEN thousands of years later, world will end -___________________________________-

LOLDA
Level 46
Master Ninja
September 20, 2012, 5:47 pm

Is this for pixel art thing?

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 20, 2012, 9:25 pm

No, I just enjoy doing pixel art recently :3

Smasher200
Level 29
Expert Pixel Painter
September 20, 2012, 5:46 pm

I can totally see this being remade in Minecraft (a build)

sed11
Forum Moderator
Level 56
Grandmaster Creeper
September 20, 2012, 4:42 pm

The world isn't going to end this year though .__.

No-one knows when it will.They found an extension for the Mayan Calender anyway.

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 20, 2012, 9:24 pm

I know it won't actually end :P we just had this discussion about the world being created in geography and then people started talking about the planet found 3galaxies away and the world ending and it inspired me to write a story :3

FueledByMinecraft
Level 1
New Miner
September 20, 2012, 4:33 pm

They actually found more mayan calanders. Turns out that they thought that 2012 would be like a part in time. That's why it ended there!

The Micro Freak
Level 30
Artisan Wolf Whisperer
September 20, 2012, 3:11 pm

December 20 is my birthday.

harper123
Level 9
Apprentice Farmer
September 20, 2012, 2:46 pm

The world is supposed to end on the 21st.

sed11
Forum Moderator
Level 56
Grandmaster Creeper
September 20, 2012, 4:41 pm

But it won't....

171292
Level 1
New Crafter
September 20, 2012, 2:38 pm

Friggin' awesome!  Keep up the good work, man!  Diamond and favourite (Already subbed)!

MrMini
Level 33
Artisan Skinner
September 20, 2012, 12:36 pm

I Cant see nothing D=, but diamond for you for hard work, you are always doing good :).

TheAlmightyLemon
Level 21
Expert Dragonborn
September 20, 2012, 12:25 pm

i diamonded, favorited, and i've been subbed for awhile so....
*waits for hug*

juicy_orange
Level 40
Master Pony
September 20, 2012, 12:33 pm

*hug* :3

TheAlmightyLemon
Level 21
Expert Dragonborn
September 20, 2012, 12:36 pm

*hugs back* :3

MisterDartVader
Level 18
Journeyman Modder
September 21, 2012, 10:17 am

LOL? *stealthily hugging*

alexbeast12
Level 16
Journeyman Scribe
September 20, 2012, 12:21 pm

Fantastic! Diamond for you, good sir!

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