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Meeting the Mailman

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avatar Baron_Von_Random
Level 26 : Expert Blacksmith
Posted 05/30/12 10:58:33 pm
05/30/12

If this doesn't touch you. YOU HAVE NO HEART! Jk. I wrote this on my moral lessons for English plus we were doing poems kill two birds with one stone right? Here goes.

I was reading by the window,

Glare came across my eyes.

I looked up and saw him

A mailman to my surprise.

I notice him every day,

Yet I do not know his name.

I made a goal to learn it,

Even if it might be lame

Every day I try to catch him,

Every day he skirts away.

Then one week later,

He decided to stay.

He was very timid,

And didn’t say a lot,

He said his name was “Carl Yount,

And I have to go to the pot.”

His excuse to get away comical,

But I wanted to know more

He seemed like a nice guy,

Even if his job was a bore.

I got the mail every day,

And timed it exact,

So I could meet him,

When his light would refract.

We became friends quickly,

And he likes my presence.

Every time I got the mail,

He would turn around at my essence.

Two weeks later,

When he was at my court,

He looked so glum,

An unhappy kind of sort.

I asked him, “What’s wrong?”

With a worried tone,

“My mother’s dead,”

He said so prone,

“No one’s left,

My life is amuck.

My house is foreclosed,

I’m waiting to be wonder struck.

 

“I’m so sorry,”

I said out the gloom,

“If you need a place

 You can have my room.”

 

“That’s ok,

I have a motel,

But if I need help,

I know someone to go tell.”

 

He left on such a sad note,

I didn’t know what to say.

I went back inside

Pondering of the day.

 

The next day I saw his light,

I ran out to talk once again,

But it was not him,

It was another mailman.

 

I asked where Carl was,

The mailman looked and said,

“I’m so sorry he is…

At the hospital, almost dead.”

 

“What happened!”

I stood there shouting.

“He was in a horrible wreck,”

The mailman stated pouting.

 

I told him stay here,

And I gave him ten dollars cash.

He said, “Ok.”

And I was back quick as a flash.

 

In my hands were two cards,

One a condolence for his mother,

I teared up writing it,

And a get well soon in the other.

I forced the mailman

To drive me to him.

I felt bad,

And wanted to make him grin.

 

I saw Carl,

His heartbeat fading.

I gave him the cards.

And he sat there grading.

 

“Thank you so much,

Life is worth living

When someone cares,

And they are giving.”

 

He stayed alive,

With those cards.

He persevered,

When life is hard.

 

Learn about someone,

Even by name

Feels good inside

Makes someone have fame.

Hope You liked my poem!! I thought it was fantastic. Check out my other blog/story! http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/james-and-the-curse-of-love---la-project-must-read

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Teckhe
Level 20
Expert Unicorn
March 9, 2013, 8:02 am

That's sad. But made me feel good inside. This is the best poem I have eve read.

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
March 10, 2013, 6:52 pm

Thanks!  I tried my best! :D

ColdCocoa
Level 27
Expert Electrician
March 4, 2013, 4:49 pm

EPIC

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
March 4, 2013, 5:27 pm

Thanks!!

ColdCocoa
Level 27
Expert Electrician
March 4, 2013, 5:42 pm

Welcome

Dralyona
Level 41
Master Dragon
December 12, 2012, 1:57 am

:O Nuuu  what happened to the MailMan? How did Carl have to go to hospital?

BTW epic poem! Loved every bit!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
December 12, 2012, 3:07 pm

It's up for you to decide! Thanks :D

Trident3
Level 20
Expert Pixel Painter
December 4, 2012, 6:07 pm

Oh... you wrote this! This was one of the first blogs I ever read! (I think...)

I couldn't remember what it was called, but now that I found it... SUBSCRIBE!!!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
December 4, 2012, 6:15 pm

Aww thank you!!

Mr_Inquisitive
Level 1
New Miner
December 4, 2012, 5:39 pm

I love poetry!!

cinn33
Level 34
Artisan Ninja
September 19, 2012, 9:00 am

that was crap AND I ONLY READ THREE LINES

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
September 19, 2012, 6:09 pm

Not only was that rude, but you had no point in your silly little accusation. You really have nothing to prove anyways. This post got 40 Diamonds and a lot of raves, I would suggest reading the entire thing. How would you feel, if because of your flame, someone killed them self? Oh wait, I know, nothing. It was the last straw and a poor kid, showed off his terrible skin, and wanted to show his achievement. NOPE. It wasn't good in the eyes of some random, who in all turn makes terrible skins themselves. You make me sick. Do something good with your life. Get off your sofa and make someone happy. Otherwise you see yourself rotting away and you will never become someone good. Or if you do make it big, you will know you made your success off of scum. Think about it.

cinn33
Level 34
Artisan Ninja
September 27, 2012, 6:55 am

??? what the hell

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
September 27, 2012, 1:16 pm

What is it that you didn't understand? Using a dictionary may prove worthy of being helpful.

Kuvon
Level 45
Master Bunny
June 22, 2012, 9:24 am

Loved it! 

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 22, 2012, 9:33 am

Thank you so much! Did you see it when it got on the popular reel? :D i was soo happy!!

Kuvon
Level 45
Master Bunny
June 22, 2012, 9:38 am

No ):


I took a huge break from PMC, and only recently came back. I might of seen it. Can't remember :p 


Amazing poem! 

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 22, 2012, 9:40 am

Oh well thank you!! :D

Kuvon
Level 45
Master Bunny
June 22, 2012, 9:40 am

I subbed to you :D 


and LOL 
"When I do the dishwasher I think the worst when I'm carrying silverware... (Including spoons)"
Same for me!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 22, 2012, 9:48 am

Realy? Lol :P You actually read that entire profile? I have to add some more stuff... :D

poopers111
Level 1
New Miner
June 13, 2012, 6:06 pm

Sweet!!

[+]_DR34M_[+]
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
June 4, 2012, 10:16 pm

*crying* Poor Mailman...I wonder where is he now...JK.It's just a story right? Or is it based on a true story?

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 5, 2012, 4:59 am

THis is all Fiction :)

[+]_DR34M_[+]
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
June 5, 2012, 4:52 pm

...Hahahaha... LOL! I didn't know WTF is happening to me :/

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 6, 2012, 4:35 am

As did everyone else :P

[+]_DR34M_[+]
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
June 6, 2012, 4:08 pm

hehehehe ^.^

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 6, 2012, 5:18 pm

So did you like it? Or was it just sappy :P

[+]_DR34M_[+]
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
June 6, 2012, 5:40 pm

Bit sappy BUT! Liked It :D

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 6, 2012, 6:08 pm

My other story is very sappy :P

[+]_DR34M_[+]
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
June 6, 2012, 6:14 pm

It's fine dude!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 6, 2012, 6:18 pm

Did you read the other story?

[+]_DR34M_[+]
Level 17
Journeyman Dragonborn
June 6, 2012, 6:30 pm

nope I didn't but I just think it's fine! :)

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 6, 2012, 6:32 pm

Ok :D You have to read the other one if you cry alot, you will :P

terreen
Level 23
Expert Pixel Painter
June 2, 2012, 10:39 am

is this a true story?

Tde555
Level 2
Apprentice Explorer
June 2, 2012, 2:21 am

I am not going to lie I teared up a little at the end.

Mikeman24
Level 6
Apprentice Artist
June 2, 2012, 1:35 am

wow it's wunderfull i'm sure you would get a 10 for it if it was for a number ;D

mygelz
Level 9
Apprentice Taco
June 1, 2012, 7:50 pm

Nice

tankerman9
Level 20
Expert Zombie
June 1, 2012, 5:33 pm

Beautiful story. Its so inspirering. Everybody so mean to others. You know like bullying and war and stuff. I just want to stop all that. I wish i could stop all that right now in like 1 second. Anyone else agree.

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:48 pm

I agree! I'm not bullied, but I have an understanding of acceptance so I chose to write this.

IsaiahHacker
Level 3
Apprentice Skinner
June 1, 2012, 12:26 pm

i almost cried

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 1:31 pm

Alot of people did :P Look at my other story it's in the link, THAT is a crier.

thergomas
Level 1
New Explorer
June 1, 2012, 7:37 pm

Me too.

-Hawk-
Level 9
Apprentice Archer
June 1, 2012, 12:23 pm

i read this on the toilet. Very moving.

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 1:31 pm

Great place to read?

-Hawk-
Level 9
Apprentice Archer
June 1, 2012, 1:56 pm

hell ya. Keeps your mind of the smell.

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 2:20 pm

Lol and that's great?

-Hawk-
Level 9
Apprentice Archer
June 1, 2012, 8:35 pm

hellz ya!

ThK
Level 10
Journeyman Pokemon
June 1, 2012, 12:18 pm

tl:dr...
jks, it was nice, i liked it

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 1:32 pm

Cool thanks :) I want to publish more, apperently there's a demand out.

kagejin101
Level 15
Journeyman Pony
June 1, 2012, 11:08 am

Beautiful 

_DioM_
Level 11
Journeyman Scribe
June 1, 2012, 5:24 am

Haha! Very nice! It could use a bit of polishing, but still!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:29 am

I have a edited version I'm thinking of releasing it :P The spots that really need improving are the verses, "It was another Mailman," and "I just wanted to make him grin."

JoJo850
Level 12
Journeyman Ninja
June 1, 2012, 5:00 am

Really good. Your a good poet/writer!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:08 am

Thanks :) You should check out my art as well

Paperboy99
Level 1
New Miner
June 1, 2012, 3:03 am

:D I loved it!

 

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:09 am

What part did you like the most?

Paperboy99
Level 1
New Miner
June 1, 2012, 3:45 pm

Probibly the stanzas 11 and 12 (I think thats right) Because it shows the main chareccter conecting with Carl as a good friend.

 

 

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 4:33 pm

That's a good point, I really like the ending stanza cause it enforces my poiint.

Danifix123
Level 35
Artisan Scribe
June 1, 2012, 2:53 am

Diamond sub fave the whole lot :D


Please do not stop writing 
They'll be sure to stop fighting


I realy like your rhymes 
I would read them all the time


Your shure to do good in school
You wont make that teacher drool


I enjoyed this many
From dear old Dani

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:09 am

Beautiful rhyme scheme :P

Danifix123
Level 35
Artisan Scribe
June 1, 2012, 6:50 am

I love your blog it inspired me :)


Wrote this http://www.planetminecraft.com/blog/i-met-this-girl/


True though


Pls do keep on writing more :D
~Dani

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 1:33 pm

I'll look at it :)

terreen
Level 23
Expert Pixel Painter
June 1, 2012, 2:53 am

thats awesome due! u got the life of a poet ahead of u :D

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:09 am

In all reality I don't want to be a poet :P

amars1545
Level 17
Journeyman Architect
June 1, 2012, 1:47 am

umm the poem is kind of meant to rhyme a bit

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:09 am

It did rhyme...

yigitusta9
Level 39
Artisan Miner
June 1, 2012, 12:11 am

i singed this in teamspeak  :P

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:12 am

Lol :P

Ocelot
Level 13
Journeyman Pokemon
May 31, 2012, 10:12 pm

Your stories are always awesome!

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
June 1, 2012, 5:13 am

Did you read my other one? I added the link to the bottom of the poem ;)

TehJadeGam3r
Level 7
Apprentice Dragon
May 31, 2012, 7:55 pm

This was really good :D

Baron_Von_Random
Level 26
Expert Blacksmith
May 31, 2012, 8:09 pm

I'm glad you thought so! :)

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