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I might not finish any of theese storys; I might finish them!  I just thought that you might be interested! These are not NEARLY as well writen as my other storys..... please no hate! enjoy! Dimonds/comments/Subscribs are greatly appreshated! (The wolf story is in the updated part of the blog) 








  

    Chapter 1


     Comet


“Rain?” She called. A lonely eco followed her back to her spot on the white tile ground. “RAIN?!” She was shouting now. “RAIN!!!???” The screams faded back to absolute silence. Rains NEVER on. And I’ll ALWAYS be here. The complaining thought entered Comet’s mind. She flattened her russet ears down and hissed out of annoyance.


Her violet eyes swept the surrounding area. White. It was all white. A few lines of black text flew above her head, and she sighed. Being in a computer was boring when no one was there. She lied down and wrapped her russet tail around her face, its black tip resting on her nose.


***


    Sometime later, Comet woke up. She was grumpy. And Rain isn’t on. STILL. Thoughts like this one bounced through her mind as she glided to the search bar on top of her favorite window, the ‘Randome’ Google drive.


“I want to see…” Bing opened, and waited for her request. Comet sighed. What DO I want to see? Another wandering thought. “Schoology.” The website started to load, and Comet opened a new tab with a thought. She moved to that one, and told it to go to a favorite; “Eet, by Regina Spektor.”


Comet listened to it, thinking of the lyrics. “It’s like forgetting…. the words, to your favorite song. You can't believe it… you were always singing along. It was so easy, and the words so sweet.”  She sighed. The loneliness was the enemy, she, the knight. Comet had trained herself to be strong, to never let the consistent enemy win. She would prevail. “Someone’s deciding, whether or not to steal, he opens the window, just to feel the chill” The last melody of the song faded away and Comet stared up at the forever white top of the computer.


“Bing, open new tab. Search, ‘Starry night sky gif’ put it above me” She said. After finding a pretty gif of the sun setting, she watched it: The sun was bleeding onto the blue ocean, staining it orange. A comet streaked across the now dark bluish night sky, the stars were pinpoints of white, shining through the dark, and Comet wondered at them. There so little… and the dark hasn't swallowed them up. They are everlasting.  Then, she realized her music was off, and with one last glance at the beautiful scene, she switched tabs.


“Go to my favorites bar. Chose ‘Burry me, By: 30 Seconds to Mars’” The song was sad, about a man who was desperate. “Come...break me down, bury me, bury me!  All I wanted… was you! I tried to be someone else… but nothing's changed, I know now. THIS IS WHO I REALLY AM!!”  She sighed for what seemed to be the 1,000,000 time. “Look in my eyes, you're killing me, killing me. All I wanted was YOU. Break me down……...What if I wanted to break…… what if I, what if I, what if I, What if I…. (Bury me, Bury me)” This song was so pitiful. Comet was getting angry now. Whoever he was singing about abandoned him! She shouldn't have done such a thing!! Loneliness is The Enemy.  The sneaky sly thoughts twined themselves deeper into Comet’s mind and armor. Her armor was made of so many other people’s feelings. It was a protection of The Enemy, Loneliness.  Other people’s feelings tricked Comet’s state of mind to believe she wasn't alone. She was really burying herself deeper into void. Comet’s violet eyes snapped into a fiery image of purple flames, and she abruptly shut off the starry sky tab. unsheathing her claws, she wished she could rake her claws down something. There was nothing real here. If there’s nothing real here… am I real?      


Chapter 2


 


Comet


There was a brief flicker of green, and Comet’s heart leaped. Running frantically toward it, she flicked to the Skype tab. Rain was on! Violet eyes met grey and blue stormy eyes, and Comet tried to play it cool. “Hi, Rain!” she meowed to her. She felt the presence of The Enemy began to leave. Victory!  Comet thought. But deep within her pixels, she knew that unless somecat else was actually with her, The Enemy would be here forever.


After the conversation, Rain left. Feeling lonely again, Comet searched for any more people she knew on Skype. The green dots that signaled presence, were eluding her, taunting her to no end. She would try each, with no luck.


She finally came upon the last, a profile that was always settled onto “Do not disturb.” It was called ‘Zack.’ She preferred to talk to either Rain or Zack, each entertaining her and killing the enemy. However, the “Do not disturb” was genuine this time, each of her screams and wails falling into the void of dark, feeding her enemy.


Comet floated sadly to the internet explorer, searching for ‘Cat and wolf in love’ finding nothing on interest, she went back to her planet, planet Minecraft. The tab was plastered with advertisements, but she easily ignored them, surfing the posts and subscribing to new hopefuls that she found. She finally switched back to her gif only tab, and searched for ‘Ocean gifs.’ A few beautiful gifs were available, and Comet decided she liked the one where the sun was setting into the sea, drowning its beautiful colors. The purples and blues, the pinks and greens. All mingling to create the master piece that was the sun-drown place, the ocean.


The soft Regina Spektor music played softly in the back ground, “Hey open wide,, here comes original sin… it’s all right, it’s all right, its all, it’s all right it’s all right… no one’s got it all… no one’s got it all, no one’s got it all, all all!” …… “I’m the hero of this story, don’t need to be saved, I’m the hero of this story I’m the hero of this story I don’t need to be saved…..it’s all right…it’s all right….” And with that song ending, Comet sighed, wondering what the ocean really looked like.


 


 


 
CreditRain, for all her support
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Warrior cats fan fic : by Ashfur4ever 06/10/2014 8:47:01 pmJun 10th, 2014

I quietly repeated the warrior code to myself, coming to the last one, my voice rose;


“And prey is caught only to be eaten. Give thanks to Starclan for its life.”


My name is Cometstrike. I and the deputy of our clan, Skyclan. You all know of the large fandom the warrior cats have; we are the unmistakable fans. We have formed the clans out of our imagination. We’re not cats, so our traditions have changed slightly.


Raising my spear to the blue black sky, I yowled;


“We will not lose this battle! We do not need to kill to win, but win we will!” the shots of my determined climates surrounded me and I knew that we would win the upcoming battle. Each fan had their favorite clan, and we made them a reality. We have the five clans, and we will not lose Skyclan like the warrior cat’s past.


“What you speak of is the truth.” Sheanstar noted. “Not all of us will be fighting, however. Falconpaw, Featherswoop, and Fawnstripes. I need all of you to stay with the clan to protect them.” Each of them diped their heads respectively, but Falconpaw looked angry.
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09/22/2014 12:33 pm
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atabler
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xD Comet should advertise on PMC! That'd take the lonlyness away!
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09/22/2014 4:20 pm
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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haha xD 
Thanks for reading!
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06/03/2014 3:50 pm
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eyeless_jack_slender
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I like your storey, er, story, (=^ ◡ ^=) it's a good concept, original too.
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06/05/2014 11:38 am
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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also, hte other wolf one is in the update bog
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06/03/2014 4:15 pm
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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Thank you! i tried to do fanficktion... but eahhhh
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06/03/2014 6:19 pm
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eyeless_jack_slender
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Yeah, it reminded me a little of Warrior cats, but still, it was very different at the same time.
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06/03/2014 8:41 pm
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
Ashfur4ever
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im a HUGE fanof warrior cats... as you can tell. ASHFUR FOR EVER!!!
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06/03/2014 8:47 pm
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eyeless_jack_slender
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XD Ashfur is pretty cool … argh I can't remember him exactly but I kind of remember him *annoyance* … I read most of the books like two years ago. They're fantastic stories.
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06/03/2014 8:54 pm
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Ashfur4ever
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i will message you; dont want to give off spoilers!
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