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Poem of the Week #1 - Poem Series.

Published Jan 20th, 2013, 1/20/13 7:06 pm
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neneki's Avatar neneki
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So, I'll be trying out my idea of doing the weekly poems. Here's the first one, please leave constructive feedback. And please do not leave hateful comments or messages if you do not like it. if you don't like it, feel free to not read it.

My Perspective of Beauty:

Beauty is the sensation of your heart skipping a beat,
when eyes full of mischief glance at you...
Beauty is the smile which appears on your lips, when you think of the way he smiles at you...
Beauty is in the heart which touches another
Beauty is tender hands holding each other
Beauty is strong arms holding you warm
Beauty is in water, beauty is in weather,
beauty is in air, beauty is in life
Beauty is in love, beauty is in wind...
Beauty surrounds you days and nights
yet no one knows beauty's heights...

Now, ALL of my poems are 95% if not 100% ORIGINAL. I'd prefer them to stay that way.

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riverius
• 01/21/2013 6:24 am
• Level 27 : Expert Artist
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Your poems are amazing i wish i could make such good poems.
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neneki
• 01/21/2013 4:07 pm
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Eh, they're good but I wouldn't say amazing. Also, I'm pretty sure if you tried hard enough you could create even better poems than mine. Mine are still amateur. c:
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riverius
• 01/22/2013 2:53 am
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Thx do you know what. I send the next poem to you and maybe give me a tip.
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neneki
• 01/22/2013 10:42 pm
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Of course. I'd love to give you tips on poems and what you can do to improve. Message me anytime.
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riverius
• 01/23/2013 7:02 am
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THX
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