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Set Fire to the Bridge

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Giancarlovan's Avatar Giancarlovan
Level 42 : Master Technomancer
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by Giancarlo N. H. Gonzaga

Set fire to the bridge crossed lickety-split
Set fire to the bridge creaking under your feet
Set fire to the bridge swaying beneath you
Set fire to the bridge making you stumble too
Set fire to the bridge left for years unused
Set fire to the bridge you built anew
Set fire to the bridge needed to be rebuilt
Set fire to the bridge where blood was spilt
Set fire to every bridge so
And you are left all alone, with no one to go



As one walks through nature, walks through life, obstacles are encountered. They may be silvery streams or raging rivers, little cracks or a gaping ravine, moments of disappointment or deep-set loneliness.

It is in our nature to need bridges as we walk through life. Bridges across obstacles, bridges with people, bridges with the flora and fauna in the biosphere we share. Bridges to culture and tradition, bridges to the seasons, bridges to humanity itself.

We are born with bridges to our nature, and we build bridges to what we love.

And yet we burn them. Burn them with a passion. Mire ourselves in loathsome derision as we hew away and fell scores of trees, scathe those we hold dear to us, act against humanity for self-serving gains. And we are left all alone, with no one and nowhere to go to for comfort, shunned by nature and humanity alike. We have been warned.
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Uknownymous
05/06/2020 4:26 pm
Level 54 : Grandmaster Architect
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The meaning here is brilliant. I mean- negative and completely pessimistic so a bit more than is reasonable however it's brilliant even so, and perhaps partly because of the extra impact the exaggerated view of it provides. I like this because I don't like it- in a sense. Like, I don't like the meaning since it's sad but I like the effort put in, the meaning constructed, the thought and so on, as it's good - a sad good creation. However one describes that. Nice job.
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Giancarlovan
05/07/2020 6:03 am
Level 42 : Master Technomancer
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Thank you for your thoughtful response, and I'm glad to have stirred up some deeper thoughts through the poem :)
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Uknownymous
05/07/2020 6:06 am
Level 54 : Grandmaster Architect
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You're welcome for the responses. ^~^ And, it's nice to see you're glad for that. :) Being glad about the outcomes of your own creations and the positive or deep or intricate impacts they may have on people is nice, so- yeah. :) I like the gladness.
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Algeusia
05/01/2020 4:50 am
Level 20 : Expert Artist
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A sad thing indeed when we leave our relationships to burn :'(
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