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I just came up with a random idea to upload my poetry from time to time in a random blog once a week. Question is should I ? I mean, I'm decent at poetry when I want to be or when I'm depressed. I'm deep when I contemplate life or the problems of the world. Here's a sample of one of my poems I've written (My poems are all ORIGINAL). You guys can tell me whether or not I should.
Poem:
We're all just hiding behind a false sense of comfort,
A fake identity in a fake world.
Faces are just masks,
that hide our true cruelty.
My mask though,
has been broken a thousand times.
Lol. I know my poem's at LEAST decent. xD But , leave me your feedback and tell me if I should or not. [:
Poem:
We're all just hiding behind a false sense of comfort,
A fake identity in a fake world.
Faces are just masks,
that hide our true cruelty.
My mask though,
has been broken a thousand times.
Lol. I know my poem's at LEAST decent. xD But , leave me your feedback and tell me if I should or not. [:
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I will react in rime back. But ill see that later i have got some lags.
No, but serious i would like it if you do that ill hope you do.