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Story of the Stranded: Chapter Five

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Posted 01/12/12 7:31:28 pm
01/12/12

Sorry this ones a little short/boring. I've been extremely busy with school and photography.


Chapter Five


Back in Minecraft


"Meichrob!" A girl appeared out of the distance who had been watching, "Where'd he take that poor girl?" She panted. Meichrob shook his head and looked at the purple portal that had appeared. "I don't know, Lucky." She looked at the portal and back at him, "Let's go through, we don't have anything to lose." She smiled.


The Nether


"Herobrine?" I looked at Andrew as we drifted above the magma. His eyes glared and he turned his head just enough to look at me, "Yes. I believe that's what I said." I frowned, "Oh. Right." I couldn't believe what had happened to me over the past days. I remembered the dream, feeling desolate. 


Finally, he put me down and let me stand on my own two feet. I wobbled, feeling the sudden change of pressure. My heart sank as I peered over the edge, no escape. Just fires raging. Andrew put his hand on me, "He's not going to hurt you. He needs you." Anger caught my heart, "I needed him. I needed my daddy. Why did he change like this?"

"To get revenge." Andrew smiled, "Sweet sweet revenge. Isn't that what we all want?"

"Not me." Andrew looked shocked. I continued, "I don't have any enemies I suppose."

"Your odd. Are you from here?" He fixed his outfit. 

"No. I was on a ship. Something happened, I guess I fell over board." I smiled, my eyes glistening with tears.


Suddenly, a voice broke the conversation, "Hey! Stevette!" Meichrob waved in the distance. Andrew glared, "Hurry. Before they catch up. Your dad, Herobrine, needs you. It's urgent." I frowned, "You already said that." He yanked me and we continued on. "HEYYY!" Meichrob capped his hands over his mouth and shouted. Lucky did the same. Andrew lead me towards the end of the floating sand, "Andrew, stop, we'll fall!" I put my feet down and tried to stop him. He smirked, "Mortal." He tightened his grip on me as he floated over the gap. I dangled in the air.


The distance between the shadows continued to get smaller. White eyes gleamed through them. "Your home." The same shadowy voice pounded at my ears as it did in my dream.


Guest Stars- happygolucky1, andrewnguyner, Meichrob7


Please read my comic series before starting this one...


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Meichrob7
Level 3
Apprentice Crafter
February 13, 2012, 8:03 am

Is this the end of the story? I hope not. Please make more of them. 

breezter
Level 39
Artisan Blob
February 13, 2012, 9:45 am

Sorry.!!!! I have a lot going on right now. I've been helping plan bridal showers for my mom's friend. That and my mom's friend's friend just died recently. Very sad!


I'll try, I'm sorry!

Meichrob7
Level 3
Apprentice Crafter
February 13, 2012, 11:14 am

Im sorry your mom's friend died. I also know how time consuming weddings are (i have about 7 i am going to in the time of 6 months). take as long as you like, i just wanted to  make shure this wasn't the last one.

breezter
Level 39
Artisan Blob
February 13, 2012, 11:30 am

I'll try to have one made by saturday or sunday.

Meichrob7
Level 3
Apprentice Crafter
April 5, 2012, 7:09 am

when you do decide to stop making these tell me please? 

breezter
Level 39
Artisan Blob
April 5, 2012, 7:58 am

I'm sorry I'm sorry I'm sorryyy! I've been caught between EOCTs and my family! I'll post next one in a minute. Let me write it.

Meichrob7
Level 3
Apprentice Crafter
April 13, 2012, 10:33 am

if ur ever busy its ok, just say so some where DIAMOND :D 

happygolucky1
Level 8
Apprentice Dragon
January 15, 2012, 7:24 pm

:D I'm in the story *starts running around and runs into a wall* OW! How'd I miss this? :3

breezter
Level 39
Artisan Blob
January 16, 2012, 3:04 am

Hahaha(:

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