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The Love Within

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MoonAstraea's Avatar MoonAstraea
Level 51 : Grandmaster Magical Girl
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My heart is full of love;
Of happiness and joy;
All things that are pure;
The things that matter most;

This love I feel is true;
My heart beats for only you;
Does your heart beat for me too?
Love from you that is new;

Will this love exist forever?
Or will it fade away;
Will it feel like it is better?
Than the flowers in May;

My heart longs to meet yours;
Every night and day and hour;
When we meet;
Will our hearts bloom like a flower?

Is this love as true as it seems?
As hard as steel, as pure as light;
Is this love truly real?
Or only in our dreams;

I want to feel like this is true;
This love between me and you;
But I can't help doubting;
What you've said to me;

What if I'm not the one?
Or you find someone else;
Will my love still matter?
If the heart holding it is broken;

The love within my heart;
Reaches far with no end;
If my heart were to break apart;
It would be my job to mend;
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Hello! :)
This poem is my entry for the Love Poem Contest!
I tried my best to fit the theme, hopefully you guys enjoy it.

Fun Fact: The thumbnail I used is "The Heart Nebula."
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VxnChxn
02/13/2021 11:31 am
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So Cute and amazing for the month, i love it
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Wannabe Technoblade
02/03/2021 10:20 am
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moon, i would like to know, how long did you spend on this?
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MoonAstraea
02/03/2021 10:24 am
Level 51 : Grandmaster Magical Girl
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Hmm, considering I wrote it all last night, I would say about 30 minutes or more, to an hour. I also had to go find the picture I used in the thumbnail, so yeah, about an hour more or less.
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Gamenight999474
04/28/2021 1:44 pm
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OMG......... wow......... your insane......
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Kingslayerc
02/03/2021 5:17 am
Level 19 : Journeyman Skinner
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lol should have not made my poem if I saw this. I lost
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MoonAstraea
02/03/2021 9:08 am
Level 51 : Grandmaster Magical Girl
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Aww, I really loved your poem. :)
You didn’t lose, you made your poem about something you loved, and that’s all that matters.
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Gamenight999474
04/28/2021 1:43 pm
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I agree
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Cardinal System
02/02/2021 11:05 pm
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Wow Mooniichan, this sounds like something straight out of my private collection! Great choice of powerful and subtle words. The questioning theme, mix of joy and sadness, it takes me right back to high school. +1
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MoonAstraea
02/02/2021 11:12 pm
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Aha, thank you so much Cardinaldo! :) I kind of tried to make something not too on the romantic side, but not too on the heartbroken side, either.
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