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The War That Never Happened [Story Contest]

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" Time for school Honey! " Mum yells from the kitchen.

" Coming Mum, " I mumble from my bedroom.

" Have you finished your science project? " She yells.

Oh no, the science project! I completely forgot about it! If I don't atleast get a B on it, I fail. Which means summer school.

" Mum, I don't feel so great, " I lie.

" Whats wrong? " She asks.

"It's my stomach, it's in alot of pain, " I reply.

" Ok, well you can stay home but i'll be gone all day ok? " She says.

" That's fine, " I say.

I start on my project. The effect of weight on falling speed.



2 hours past. I hear a sound, it sounds liike an explosion. I look outside my window.

"The street! " I scream.

Infront of me lies the remains of our road. I hear screaming. People screaming. I rush outside only to be greeted by soldiers. They grap me by the arm and throw me into a van. Out of one of the windows I realize that it's not only our street but the whole city. Dead people lie on the ground. Children screaming for their mums. Only to realize they are dead.

I get out of the van, the soldiers lead me to some sort of chamber. About 20 people are lined up against a wall. I see someone familiar. It's Mum! I don't have enough time to do anything before I hear a lod " bang! ". She falls to the ground, dead.

" You Bas.." One of the guards graps my mouth and shoves me into a wall.

" Who do you think you are? Killing inocent people like that! " The guard mumbles something to another guard and before I know it there is a gun pointed at my head. "No!" I manage to squeeze out before the world goes dark.



I wake up, in my bed.

" Time for school Honey! "

I run downstairs. Mum is in the kitchen. I run up to her and hug her.

"Your alright!" I yell out.

"Yes, I am" She says with a wierd look on her face.

" But the soldiers, the guns and you! " I say.

" I think you need to see the doctor, stay home today and i'll ring the doctor later. She says, she looks worried.

" Whatever you say, whatever you say, " I say with a happy look on my face.

I don't know how it happened or why it happened. I just know that it didn't happen. It was the war the never happened.

If you like this then please diamond or comment say " vote " Either one is one vote for me. Thanks guys
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Ocelot
04/04/2012 9:10 pm
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19-8 :C
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Lucifur_Macomb
04/04/2012 6:36 pm
Level 41 : Master Engineer
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Should be: The War That Never Was if you ask me...
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anonpmc232295
04/04/2012 6:26 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
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fishpop
04/04/2012 1:40 pm
Level 41 : Master Pegasus
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?
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VolIin
04/04/2012 7:39 am
Level 7 : Apprentice Miner
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Nice story :3
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1samuel411
04/04/2012 6:51 am
Level 7 : Apprentice Modder
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in the part- i here screaming. people screaming. it should be-i here people screaming- or -i here the wailing of dozens of innocent people.- and grap is grab other than that its good
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Jt9
04/04/2012 5:51 am
Level 68 : High Grandmaster Modder
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he should have kicked the soldier in his ***
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BlackDragon038
04/04/2012 2:53 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Architect
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this may be a dumb question, but is this story real?
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zachstar1998
04/04/2012 3:05 am
Level 41 : Master Turtle
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No it's not, I made it up. But no question is ever dumb.
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BlackDragon038
04/04/2012 4:15 am
Level 14 : Journeyman Architect
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Oh, ok. By the way you have awesome grammar and story. I like it. +1 for you :)
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