1) Edits
You HAVE to have editing. That is an imperative essence in Youtube video production as it gives your personal touch to it (aka everyone has their own editing style and all that shxt). Without adding any edits, you leave your video 'raw,' leading to viewer abandonment and a somewhat boring vibe in said video.

2) Length
Not many people want to stick around for a really long time to watch a single video.

Some state that the average human attention span is approximately 5 minutes; others state that most healthy teenagers and adults are unable to sustain attention on one thing for more than about 20 minutes at a time, although they can choose repeatedly to re-focus on the same thing.

- http://www.brainrules.net/attention/?scene=1 , Dianne Dukette; David Cornish (2009)

3) Quality
There are two aspects to quality that I notice whilst watching a video: Technical and Emotional. Without technical adequacy, a video will not be tolerable. In your video the audio was extremely choppy, (personally) the buttons took up a lot of the screen, and the FOV was really low, despite it probably being at its default level.

Hopefully you take these words of advice into your own hands and make really good improvements to your content! I hope to see your work in the time to come

It wasn't too bad, but it wasn't very exciting either. Definitely look at some other way to capture the video outside of the tablet.

Just make sure that you go into the recording with a plan for what you want to accomplish. Also, if you promise a release schedule, stick to it. This was the only video in the playlist and it has been over a month since that was published.

I've subscribed. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you can do with this series.

Thanks for the replies so far. I would still like more people's opinions.

Is there I point in recording PE Minecraft. I mean some people want to see more YouTube videos on it because that is the only version they have but most things possible on PC are also things you can do on PE.

I don't usually find a lot of Minecraft PE videos so I'm not sure what to record on it?

I don't like roleplays so that won't be a series on my channel.

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it might just be me but from about 2:15 till the end of the video the audio especially your voice is very jumpy

Just play on PC, much much better

That PE community ia full of cancerous kids that make these roleplays that end up being a series

Anyone have an opinion about this?

Come on guys help me out here!