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Me, Myself, and the Future (Short Story by me)
http://www.wattpad.com/story/9844033-me ... the-future
Feel free to give your feedback or suggestions!
Description of it:
When something in Ivan's life changes unexpectedly -BEEEEP- *BREAKING NEWS* One of America's Top Secret time machines have been stolen! If you know where Ivan is located please tell your local police. *BREAKING NEWS* -BEEEEP-
Or you can read it below:
Feel free to give your feedback or suggestions!
Description of it:
When something in Ivan's life changes unexpectedly -BEEEEP- *BREAKING NEWS* One of America's Top Secret time machines have been stolen! If you know where Ivan is located please tell your local police. *BREAKING NEWS* -BEEEEP-
Or you can read it below:
Me, Myself, and the Future
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Except a few grammatical errors, it is pretty good. Though, a bit more detail wouldn't kill...
Other than that, it looks good!
Other than that, it looks good!
It has a good plot, and you did a nice job, but make sure to check your run-on sentences and stuff and fix those.
Wow! That was crazy! I didn't know what was going to happen. It's incredibly dark, you should certainly write more.
I loved it
Moved to Your Creations
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Sorry about that...
Thanks!
funny bunnyI loved it
Thanks!
