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I need some constructive critique for new song
MugBugMusic
Hey everyone, I made a new song using GarageBand. I need some (key word) constructive criticism on it. It is just something I made while getting my Wilderness First Responder certification, but I thought it sounded pretty cool.
P.S. use some good speakers, so that you can hear the lower baseline
Hope yall enjoy.
https://soundcloud.com/mugbugmusic/rapid-evac
P.S. use some good speakers, so that you can hear the lower baseline
Hope yall enjoy.
https://soundcloud.com/mugbugmusic/rapid-evac
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Sounds nowhere near "Rapid", but definitely a nice slow electronic song. It's not epic, but it makes very good background music for a game or movie. And yes, add a bit more unique parts; the whole song seems to be a nice repetition of melodies; keep them, but occasionally do some...one-time-only melodies.
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Ok thanks the advise ! I actually did have a movie situation/scene in mind when I made it, which was the reason for the title 'rapid evac'. I was thinking of a slow mode rapid evacuation. At least that was the idea
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What program do you use?
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Just GarageBand. It's like 8-12 bucks
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The music is pretty good! The beginning is a bit slow but besides that i really liked it!
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Thanks
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bump
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Good. Not amazing, but good.
7/10
Variety. More crescendos, more falls, more pizzazz.
7/10
Variety. More crescendos, more falls, more pizzazz.
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that's what I was afraid of. thanks
P.S. Pizzazz is a great word! Im glad Im not the only one that uses it
P.S. Pizzazz is a great word! Im glad Im not the only one that uses it
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Find Them CreepersSounded great.MLG_SkybeamIt isn't really as "intense" as you imply. You will attract a much bigger audience if you make dubstep/faster songs, if you ask me
I think the style is fine. Maybe a bit faster. I don't think he needs to switch to dubstep.
I didn't say he NEEDED to, I just said that I thought he might attact a larger group of fans if he did.
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Up until around 1:40 the entire thing just seems sorta bland. I would recommend adding more layers throughout the entire song. There seem to be only 1-3 things playing at once and they're either very similar or monotonous and sorta bland...or both. And the layers that are there don't sound like they're working together too well. They all sound similar like the sounds go together but they don't compliment eachother. They all just sorta stay independent of eachother and do their own thing.
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Note to self, add more layers,and sounds need to complement'. Got it. thanks for the imput Foxy
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Find Them CreepersSounded great.
I think the style is fine. Maybe a bit faster. I don't think he needs to switch to dubstep.
Thanks ^_^
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Sounded great.
I think the style is fine. Maybe a bit faster. I don't think he needs to switch to dubstep.
MLG_SkybeamIt isn't really as "intense" as you imply. You will attract a much bigger audience if you make dubstep/faster songs, if you ask me
I think the style is fine. Maybe a bit faster. I don't think he needs to switch to dubstep.
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It isn't really as "intense" as you imply. You will attract a much bigger audience if you make dubstep/faster songs, if you ask me
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This is true, I need to take the 'intense' off. I had more of a 'slow mode' scene in my head when I made it. Thanks for the input
