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Barbarians,Steve please help!

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Our great adventurer Steve just got a message from his friend Andy,the enderman

"Steve please help,
Barbarians are destroying everything in the land.I'm they're next target.Please come as fast as you can to my valley.Come with materials.We need to build.A LOT!"

Steve,didn't wait one more second.He put a saddle on his horse and he took two chests full of materials with him.He was very excited for this new adventure,but in the same time he was worried about his friend,so he's got on the road and made a trip to Andy's house.
When he's got there,Andy already started building a wall.He was so happy to see Steve again that he totally forgot about the wall,dropped the materials and ran to Steve.
[-Steeeeve]
[-Hey Andy]
[-Go make a bunker under your house ok?bgcolor=rgb(153, 153, 153)]I will take care of everything else...]
[/bgcolor][-Ok...]
And with that said they started working.
Andy went to his house and started to dig down inside.After he digged to a low enough level he started putting down some anvil and started expanding the bunker.The bunker Ended up to be really pathetic.
Steve just called Andy:
[-Hey come up.I finished]
[-Already?!]
[-Just come up,will you...]
[-Ok i teleported.So what did you,,,]

Andy was speechless.In the time he made the bunker,Steve made a huge fortress...but the fortress was really weird.It was made in a really ancient and not symmetric way.Weird...

[-What the heck is this build?Sorry for the language but...it seems just a bit....weird and ancient.]
[-Well i learnt this from...well it's not important.Let me show you everything.]

Andy followed Steve but he was really not understanding.From what he knew Steve was no great architect,nor a mystery guy.Steve showed Andy all the traps and things.So let me explain:

-My house was completely changed:Made out of bricks,iron,ender rods and even a beacon.
-The walls were made out of iron,Gold and diamond.
-There was only one entrance and one exit:a one block entrance with pistons on top so the enemies get suffocated when we hit the lever.
-My house was surrounded with lava and anvils.
-In the front of our fortress the barbarians gathered.

Wait what?Ok I didn't notice that.

[-Well,here they come.Ready Andy?]
[-Not really...]
[-Well you better be.They just started charging to us.]

The barbarians went to the gate.It was an iron gate and it was hard to break.10 of them fell from Andy's arrows before they broke it.

[-Chaaaaaarge!]

Yelled the chief.But it was a bad ideea.All Steve had to do was flick a lever.And bup!Pistons down.Just like another 7 barbarians.There were still like 25 left.They broke the pistons so Andy teleported himself and Steve over the lava gaps.From that safe spot they fired arrows.Some of the barbarians fell in the lava as well.Some got trough including the chief.Andy and Steve got inside the house where they were kinda safe.Only 8 barbarians left.Sorry 7...a clumsy one fell in the lava.

[-Ok we go kamikaze style,Andy?]
[-Kamikaze style it is]

The two of us charged outside.One small problem...:
[-Ve surrendar!]
[-Seriously?]
[-Yas man.]
[-You can go...]

The remaining barbarians left in a hurry.

[-Glad I could help.Gotta go now.]
[-But you just came!]
[-Well...I have a message from...color=rgb(255, 255, 0)]Herobrine.
[/color][-Whaaaaaaa?!From THE Herobrine?That HEROBRINE???]
[-Yeah...]
[-Wait...the build...you being mysterious....are yuo a friend of Herobrine??]
[-No!I mean...ok he is my friend.But he is not Evil.You will see soon enough...]
[-What do you mean.Steve!Wait!]

But Steve already left.He was worried:
"What did you do this time Herobrine...it seems serious...I better hurry...Hya!"

Steve urged his horse to go faster as the rain started and the lightning struck the ground and the spirits have shaken.Something big was coming.Something real big...

"Steve dissapeared in the night"
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Change : by CrazyChicken1 07/13/2016 10:10:58 amJul 13th, 2016

Completely changed the build and story...well sorry,but i built the fortress in the wrong spot.xD

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06/02/2016 12:33 pm
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CrazyChicken1
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610 Views!WOW!Thank you guys so much!I really didn't expect this much
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05/24/2016 10:38 am
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CrazyChicken1
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Hey guys!
Well sad news....I had to make a whole new build and make a new story....So this just doubled my work...
Good news tough!This might be better!Also go read my Herobrine's truth stories so you find out what is this whole Herobrine thing,ok?
Thanks for all the support!
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05/09/2016 3:25 pm
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CrazyChicken1
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Guys my starting point was not set near Steve's friend house and i accidently protected something else.Now that i entered my world again it brought me to his house.What should i do?Help.<br><br>
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05/09/2016 11:33 am
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CrazyChicken1
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what house?
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05/09/2016 11:00 am
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Daddy_Cage
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You do know there is already a house with Steve's friend in it right? Did you protect both of them?
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05/09/2016 3:45 am
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taine281
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herobrian griefer report ez ban
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05/19/2016 6:26 pm
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lol
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05/08/2016 5:12 pm
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Thanks everyone I appreciate the comments:)
It's very nice of you guys.
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05/08/2016 12:46 pm
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mitchcharley
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Awesome backstory! Good luck
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05/08/2016 12:09 pm
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Naarek
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Awwww, this is cute! :))))
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