Total Rating: 9/20
Mechanics - 3
Detail - 2
Experience - 2
Challenge - 1 (specifically, Nonogram #2)
Progression - 1

BUG: Puzzle 13, Nonogram #1 is unbeatable - you did not give nether brick to the player, only netherrack

Things to be improved on
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You give NO directions with any of the puzzles. Some people may have no idea how to do them (e.g. Sudoku or
Nonogram). Also, it may be difficult to translate what you want them to do in MINECRAFT, to the simplicity of how
it's presented
There are not enough signs indicating what the buttons do; e.g. No alphabet signs by the buttons in puzzle #1
It is cumbersome managing an inventory full of letter blocks in some puzzles (e.g. crossword)
Barrier blocks prevent you from jumping up to get a better view of the puzzles. I believe you are trying to keep me
from seeing into other 'pages' of the book, but don't let form defeat functionality. (e.g. hard to navigate the
crossword, keep falling in holes) (e.g. getting blocked by glass in the word search). Recommend: raise walls/ceiling
1-2 blocks higher
Crossword: Arrows despawn too quickly. You should be able to set them to not decay when spawning them.
Word Search: Glass cubes get in the way - I would recommend using rails (like you do in the maze)
Mazes = waaaaaay to easy
what is a Nonogram?!?!?! Had to look it up online. Also was confused what "X" means (10).
Puzzle 14 (nonogram #2) is WAY too hard, because the values in each row/column are too small for such a large playing
field
Final puzzle (lava maze) is way too easy to follow puzzle 14
First parkour level was super hard, only because you couldn't see the height of pillars with black-on-black
Second parkour was easier than first - recommend swapping those two
You spelled "answer" wrong in every puzzle - and inconsistently too :)
Visuals: I could understand the 'book' theme, and could tell what you were trying to go for with the diorite blocks =
words on the page, but since your point of view is always so CLOSE to the page, you can't really appreciate it. Would
recommend some kind of teleport to a higher vantage point to really take in the scene.
Parkour really doesn't fit with the theme of the book. I know you tried to wrap it in 'corrupted pages', but I would replace this with more puzzles that simulate pen and paper games.

Things I liked
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Theme: reminds of 'rainy day fun books' that my sister and I used to make for each other as kids!
Crossword: I liked the difficulty overall on these
Crossword: use of arrows as number indicators that can be cleared
Maze: use of rails was visually appealing
Nonogram: I really liked the first one, because it was a new puzzle type to me, and once I realized it was a creeper,
I was able to quickly fill in the blocks without needing to heed the numbers (but see above for feedback)

I am completely stuck on the first puzzle (crossword) 19 across... help?

I wish I thought of this, this is one of the best ideas I have seen. I <3 it. Good Job ;)