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(Note: I am a really bad skinner but a really good story teller. I really don't think I'll win but it's a try!)
The Story of Jim - By: Sgt_Wikipedia
Chapter 1: Grief
Once upon a time, there lived a boy named Jim. He was a extraordinary boy. He washed cars, helped at the retirement home and made everyone happy. One day, he was walking across the road when a red car hit him. Since Jim was wearing a hoodie and the
man in the car drove away in guilt, no one knew it was Jim. When the man in the car got home, he told his wife the story. The man's wife said, "Have you seen Jim?". The man, who is Jim's father, fell to the ground crying. Jim's mother knew why he was crying and started crying. Jim's birthday was tommorrow and his 16th birthday present: a red brand new car.
Chapter 2: "It's O.K."
Five days since Jim's death, his mother and father where in debt. Without Jim, they had no willpower to work and quit their jobs.
That night Jim's father went into Jim's former room and sat there, one-fifteen in the morning, weeping over his loss. Then he
said "I'm Sorry Jimmy. It's all my fault." All of the sudden, the room was filled with the light of a thousand suns and Jim, dressed in a white robe, with a halo on his head, said "It's O.K. dad. I had a great time." He then vanished without a trace. Jim's father fell to the floor, overcome with sleep.
Epiloge
Every five days after Jims's birthday, a toy is placed in his room. So far he has 25 toys that total up to $20,000
The Story of Jim - By: Sgt_Wikipedia
Chapter 1: Grief
Once upon a time, there lived a boy named Jim. He was a extraordinary boy. He washed cars, helped at the retirement home and made everyone happy. One day, he was walking across the road when a red car hit him. Since Jim was wearing a hoodie and the
man in the car drove away in guilt, no one knew it was Jim. When the man in the car got home, he told his wife the story. The man's wife said, "Have you seen Jim?". The man, who is Jim's father, fell to the ground crying. Jim's mother knew why he was crying and started crying. Jim's birthday was tommorrow and his 16th birthday present: a red brand new car.
Chapter 2: "It's O.K."
Five days since Jim's death, his mother and father where in debt. Without Jim, they had no willpower to work and quit their jobs.
That night Jim's father went into Jim's former room and sat there, one-fifteen in the morning, weeping over his loss. Then he
said "I'm Sorry Jimmy. It's all my fault." All of the sudden, the room was filled with the light of a thousand suns and Jim, dressed in a white robe, with a halo on his head, said "It's O.K. dad. I had a great time." He then vanished without a trace. Jim's father fell to the floor, overcome with sleep.
Epiloge
Every five days after Jims's birthday, a toy is placed in his room. So far he has 25 toys that total up to $20,000
Credit | PMC (For making the contest, of course!) |
Gender | Male |
Format | Java |
Model | Steve |
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