Raborg (Contest, 99? or 97?) (Thumbnail is fixed {again}) Minecraft Skin

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Raborg (Contest, 99? or 97?) (Thumbnail is fixed {again})

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Punkamoar's Avatar Punkamoar
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This skin is pretty much a rabbit morphed with a robot, ergo a Raborg

WARNING: LONG STORY, READ AT YOUR OWN EXPENSE
Story!!!

In a world not so far away, robots thrive, turning any living thing into a cyborg, they also did full transformations sometimes when they felt they could be useful. They do this with a mind parasite, which ironically is also a cyborg, they stuff it up a living organism's nose/ear and it crawls its way into the brain through the nasal cavity/eardrum. This allowed them to take control of the Earth in just months, just they missed one, Hazel the rabbit, a plucky little bloke, survived their terraforming by hiding in an old rabbit burrow, while the rest of his kind suffered and died, he made his abode deep in the tunnels, living off of bugs and roots.

Though one day when the robots had their scans scanning, they picked up a small heat source, they sent a drop force of cyborgs to see if they had missed something. They started drilling down in the volcanic ash (which was all that was left after the terraformation) and eventually found the network of tunnels.

"Do you know what this is Mark 54.76.51?" the leader of the cyborgs asked the sciency cyborg.
"Acessing databank... it appears to be a rabbit burrow, but the supreme robots have destroyed the entire race of rabbits" the cyborg replied
"The signs of heat are stronger now, Mark 54.76.51, the supreme robots have missed something.

Hazel heard drilling above him, which he shrugged off, he had heard the nuclear embargo, and it sounded a lot like that. But as it got closer, he thought he should run "No" he thought, this was home to him, running from home was a sign of cowardliness in rabbits (running from people is not cowardliness, that is their way of life)

Hazel remained underneath the drilling, nibbling on his droppings from that morning (they do that ^_^) the cyborgs had gotten right above him, and drilled right into his tunnel. Hazel started to get worried, he decided to run down the tunnel, but as he got about halfway down the corridor the ground in front of him burst down, blocking the hole. A robot hand then reached down and picked up the cowering rabbit and put him in Mark 13.96.08's hollow stomach (they only eat oil)

When they had reached the robots main basecamp thing, Hazel was dropped into a pen. The robots then reached into a tube, and pulled out a small, metallic worm thing, and proceeded to drop it into Hazel's pen. It quickly found its way into Hazel's quivering nose, and within hours, Hazel was now a Raborg, charged with cleaning the base.

Hazel, the Raborg, was the last known living thing on Earth, when he fell, all of the living fell with him, now, the Earth is completely controlled by Robots, which will soon conquer all the other planets, and rule the galaxy with a Metal Hand.


NOTE i'm mixing CuteMurphy's hair for the head, PotatoLogic's body, and the face is pillow shading (I know, but it was the only thing that looked good)

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ANOTHER NOTE I attempted to make his robot head parts into the helmet layer, but it didn't work, so please do not nag me on putting it into a helmet layer

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CreditChromeBattleAxe, CreepinAtMyDoor, The Masked Bandit, cocoabunny13, Richard Adams, PotatoLogic, Yuki, CuteMurphy
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Update #4 : by Punkamoar 10/12/2013 6:02:23 pmOct 12th, 2013

redid the top of the head
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10/05/2013 9:11 pm
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-Baron
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Nice!:D I loved how you improved and such. Very nice job sir!:D
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10/05/2013 9:13 pm
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Punkamoar
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thanks! the only thing i had troubles with was the face
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10/08/2013 7:15 pm
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DmitriPlaysMC
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y did u subscribe to me Pikamoar2121?
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10/08/2013 8:36 pm
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Punkamoar
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um, why?
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10/05/2013 9:16 pm
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-Baron
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One thing I like is the red lights around the arms. They seem to pop out, but one thing you could do is make it actually look like light by spreading the red around areas it is near.
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10/05/2013 9:22 pm
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Punkamoar
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that would be awesome, but i'm already in the finals, so i can't update it >:(
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09/30/2013 11:02 am
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Rakqoi
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It's a pretty good skin! My only complaints are that the shading (most notably the head) seems odd, and doesn't follow the general rules of form and shadow. The other complaint is that the grey everywhere makes it seem drab and boring, almost. Overall, though, the skin is good! The shading on the body and limbs is well done!
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09/30/2013 11:07 am
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Punkamoar
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i mixed 2 shading styles for the face, a little pillow shading for the front, and the rest is cutemurphy's hair for the fur of the rabbit (and the robot too...)

but i am really please with how this turned out, but the grey is kinda redundant, any ideas to upgrade before the reviewing process starts?
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09/30/2013 11:13 am
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Rakqoi
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The only thing I can think of to improve the grey is add areas of a darker color, perhaps, or add "glowing" parts in a neon color, for a more futuristic look. But that's up to you; whatever you want to do to break up them monotony.
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09/30/2013 11:16 am
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Punkamoar
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like a nuclear power source thing on his chest? i also tried a jetpack, but since the skin was grey, i couldn't figure out what color it should be
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