I wish you had an NA account ;-;

oh god the old version

You should create an adventu8re map that lines alittle bit close to the storyline :p

The shading on the face seems backward. I'd recommend having the center of the face be lighter than the outside. It also needs a lot more contrast. A Shadows tend to be a drastically darker shade than the highlights... if the skin exposed to light is at a value of like... 3/10 then the shadow of the skin would maybe be close to a 7.