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"Agh... my head..."
I had just woken up on a strange shore, with no memory of what happened, or how I got here. As I looked around, I saw the shore is VERY strange... everything seems to be made of... blocks. Except for the tall grass here and there. Well, the sun had just come up, so I decided I would do some adventuring. But then I remembered, "I have no food!" I needed to do some things, and so I scribbled them down in a notebook I found in my pocket.
TO-DO:
Fresh water [_]
Food [_]
Shelter [_]
And so, I set off. It was a nice place, had a few trees, lots of flowers. And I decided I wou- *BOOM*
"WHAT THE HECK" I said, as I flew a few meters through the air. After the explosion, I felt very weak. Then as I turned around to brace myself for the next explosion, "Nobody is here. Hmm. That's strange." I walked over to the gigantic hole in the ground, and looked down. Nobody. But there were a few small square dirt block things spinning in circles. As I approached them, they flew up and into my pockets. They we're about maybe a foot tall each, yet they all fit into my pockets without me even feeling it. "What would happen if I took one out of my pocket, and put it down..." and so I put it on a tree, jus tto see what would happen, and it didn't fall. I learned two rules of this strange land.
RULES OF THIS STRANGE LAND:
When you take a small block out of your pockets and place it, It gets bigger.
Everything seems to defy gravity here.
I also saw a tree all of twenty feet from me. And so, I tried pulling it, pushing it, and all other things. Then, I got so angry, I just punched the tree over and over an- "Wait, the wood came out! YES!" So I tried the same with the others. Five logs. So I put them in my pocket, and off in the distance I saw more trees. "Maybe I can cut some down for my shelter!" The sun was going back down towards the horizon. Better hurry, I thought, It's almost night. But before I did, I added another rule.
RULES OF THIS STRANGE LAND:
When you take a small block out of your pockets and place it, It gets bigger.
Everything seems to defy gravity here.
The day lasts around ten minutes.
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And so that's my story! If anyone has some suggestions or creative criticism, feel free to leave a comment below. I will read as many as possible. Next part comes at 5 diamonds, or tomorrow. Thanks guys!
~Steven
I had just woken up on a strange shore, with no memory of what happened, or how I got here. As I looked around, I saw the shore is VERY strange... everything seems to be made of... blocks. Except for the tall grass here and there. Well, the sun had just come up, so I decided I would do some adventuring. But then I remembered, "I have no food!" I needed to do some things, and so I scribbled them down in a notebook I found in my pocket.
TO-DO:
Fresh water [_]
Food [_]
Shelter [_]
And so, I set off. It was a nice place, had a few trees, lots of flowers. And I decided I wou- *BOOM*
"WHAT THE HECK" I said, as I flew a few meters through the air. After the explosion, I felt very weak. Then as I turned around to brace myself for the next explosion, "Nobody is here. Hmm. That's strange." I walked over to the gigantic hole in the ground, and looked down. Nobody. But there were a few small square dirt block things spinning in circles. As I approached them, they flew up and into my pockets. They we're about maybe a foot tall each, yet they all fit into my pockets without me even feeling it. "What would happen if I took one out of my pocket, and put it down..." and so I put it on a tree, jus tto see what would happen, and it didn't fall. I learned two rules of this strange land.
RULES OF THIS STRANGE LAND:
When you take a small block out of your pockets and place it, It gets bigger.
Everything seems to defy gravity here.
I also saw a tree all of twenty feet from me. And so, I tried pulling it, pushing it, and all other things. Then, I got so angry, I just punched the tree over and over an- "Wait, the wood came out! YES!" So I tried the same with the others. Five logs. So I put them in my pocket, and off in the distance I saw more trees. "Maybe I can cut some down for my shelter!" The sun was going back down towards the horizon. Better hurry, I thought, It's almost night. But before I did, I added another rule.
RULES OF THIS STRANGE LAND:
When you take a small block out of your pockets and place it, It gets bigger.
Everything seems to defy gravity here.
The day lasts around ten minutes.
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And so that's my story! If anyone has some suggestions or creative criticism, feel free to leave a comment below. I will read as many as possible. Next part comes at 5 diamonds, or tomorrow. Thanks guys!
~Steven
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Update #1 : by Stevenleonon 01/06/2012 9:26:56 amJan 6th, 2012
Sorry, forgot some credit. :S
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