Backfire (PMC Contest; Lego Minecraft Cave Hanger)

Published Sep 9th, 2015, 9/9/15 11:07 am

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Numbskull
Level 26 : Expert Nerd

Backfire

Steve continiues to mine the stubborn ore block he so desires. The somewhat idearistic Zombie and his arachnid counterpart decide to play a startegical plan; remove the option of safety...

Besides, they're not locked in with Steve...

Steve is locked in with them...

As they approach their pixelated prey, the zombie lets out an unexpected GROWL, alerting the stunned Steve.

With secounds away from the dreaded RESPAWN button apearing and a full inventory disapearing, Steve had to act fast. Armed with only his flame bow and arrow, he spots his oppritunity.

A stray peice of TNT, from last time he went caving, under a cluster of gravel above the mobs. He takes the shot...

ssssssssss...BOOM!

Beautiful shot, followed by a beautiful sound of two dying mobs. Relief, he though, until IT showed up.

Vlip-KLUNK!

The Enderman took the block below Steve's feet, the only block with lava below it

Why is caving so hard?

Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Ow! Fizzzzz....

Even to this day, Steve has neither found that cave again, nor has he mined that single stubborn ore.

The end....

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09/30/2015 10:08 pm

Level 64 : High Grandmaster Senpai

GrayRemnant

I'm honestly surprised this doesn't have more diamonds. Really well written. ;)

09/30/2015 11:59 pm

Level 26 : Expert Nerd

Numbskull

Thank you!

09/09/2015 1:18 pm

Level 30 : Artisan Artist

Roulle

You use too many advanced words. I have nothing against them; just saying that it might be too hard to understand for some people.

09/09/2015 1:30 pm

Level 26 : Expert Nerd

Numbskull

Yeah, I understand your point. I do alot of writing in my English studies, so the odd complex word get tossed in. I know that this site includes all ages but I would rather have an older group of people read and enjoy than have a younger group read it and not understand and misinterparate. If I were it simplify the story I would overshoot the wordcount and not feel happy with the outcome. I hope the judges share my point of view.

Thanks for your great input!
(I enjoyed your entry!)