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Ashfur4ever's Avatar Ashfur4ever
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I was inspired to write this from walking on the beach.
Story Seven: Broken Shells




Shells. They’re so fragile, so easily broken. They’re beautiful, but you almost never find them whole. They’re like relationships, so beautiful. So easily broken. The shells that stay whole are the rarest, the broken ones, and undesirable. No one wants a broken shell. Shells are so beautiful. Have you ever seen someone bend over to pick up a shell, then sigh and say “What a shame, it’s broken.” But you can tell they never really care, moving along easily. There shell hasn’t been broken yet. Then there are the clam shells, meant to be together, but they don’t appear broken if you only find one half. Those are the most painful kind of relationships, you know that that shell is broken, but they never stay together as long as they should, the most fragile kind.


The soft sand, where you find the smallest, most broken shells. Where they’re overlooked every day, walked over, broken more. Never admired, never even a pity to them. The soft sand, where the shells barely hurt, where it feels like you should be. But everyone must migrate to the hard, smooth sand. The sand that holds the most beautiful, broken shells. The broken relationships. Everyone thinks they will find a whole shell, but are miss leaded, never to find that one beautiful shell. Eventually the will find a dull shell, but that shell is whole, that shell is ok. They start to forget the beautiful shell they wished for.


The broken shells are so beautiful. They’re so sad, so amazing, you can’t help but admire what the shells could have been if they were whole, an entire, true, beautiful, relationship. That will never be.
CreditThe beach, for inspireing me, for showing the beauty of broken shells
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They're : by Ashfur4ever 07/21/2014 12:13:00 pmJul 21st, 2014

Fixed all 6 there to they're fails.
So sorry about that!

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MelodyBunny
07/24/2014 4:53 am
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This story is beautiful.. I have only found 2 full shells that aren't broken in my life time.. 
Suggestion: check out storybird.com 
lots of writers there and they could give u extra insperation.
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Ashfur4ever
07/24/2014 8:37 am
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
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Thank you! im so glad you liike my storys >///<
Also i might, sounds helpful!
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MelodyBunny
07/25/2014 4:00 am
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Okay. :D
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TheEnderCat5
07/21/2014 11:54 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Robot
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Wow, amazing! The next time I go to the beach, my hands will be overflowing with broken shells :P
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Ashfur4ever
07/22/2014 8:11 am
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hahaah thank you!
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Dabeasty
07/21/2014 10:28 pm
Level 21 : Expert Dragonborn
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Just a few grammatical errors, mainly with 'there' and 'their', but great story!
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Ashfur4ever
07/22/2014 7:57 am
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ok, i was told to writethis down because i had an idea, and i finished it. so ill revise it soon :) Thank you!
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Creative Anne
07/21/2014 4:06 pm
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Wow. I'm speechless. That was awesome. <3
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Ashfur4ever
07/21/2014 4:10 pm
Level 33 : Artisan uwu
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why thank you! i like to try to touch people with words, to make them think more...
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Creative Anne
07/21/2014 4:42 pm
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You're really good at it! Keep being awesome! :D
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