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Colorful Panama

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BuildingBrute's Avatar BuildingBrute
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Colorful Panama
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After traveling, traveling, traveling
on the wide wide ocean
Steve found a new land, after traveling, traveling, traveling
that occasioned bright emotion!

The sea, every tree, every bee
an untouched nature devisee.

Everything painted in every color,
there is no natural color anymore.
The landscape seemed to be constructed of light,
that was a beautiful sight!

A new world without rain.
A new world without zombies,
cause it's a world without enemies.
Humans never feel pain!

Mountains overlaid with green vines,
plains covered with flowers of different kinds,
colorful birds flying.
Everything seemed to be so mystifying!

Touched of this world, Steve discovered,
he doffed his weapons, armor and stuff,
for this piece here a shirt is enough,
and left his boat and entered the new fantastic world!

After traveling, traveling, traveling
On the wide wide ocean
Steve entered a new World, after traveling, traveling, traveling
That occasioned bright emotion!

This Land was really a beautiful paradise,
Oh, that world was so nice!

To enjoy these moments
Steve strained his ear,
Steve opened his eyes.
That he had discovered a paradise
was now really clear!

He cut a red palm tree,
what was easy as never before.
He felt so free
and there is so much more
he could explore!

So he grabbed the wood
and decided to start off a new beginning!
"Everything will be good
with a first house“, he was thinking.

After traveling, traveling, traveling
On the wide wide ocean
Steve built on a World, after traveling,traveling, traveling
That occasioned bright emotion!

After building and working, he was very ambitious,
he became very hungry to something delicious.
As he was thinking,
it suddenly started raining
cornflakes, sweets, cakes and meats!

After traveling, traveling, traveling
On the wide wide ocean
he found a colorful paradise to live in.

Steve decided to stay there forever
and will leave this paradise never!
Because of his discovery he was so lucky,
he called this new world „Colorful Panama“, so ducky!
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04/14/2017 6:38 am
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LStarri
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Hi, this is a great poem. This definitely deserves a diamond! Keep up the good work! :D
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04/14/2017 3:16 pm
Level 54 : Grandmaster Scapegoat
BuildingBrute
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Thank you very much :)
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04/11/2017 2:28 pm
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HornlessNarwhal
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i think for a poem this is good especially if English is your second language. i myself would've loved to enter this contest but i just finished school and i missed the deadline for entry. but i think your doing great keep writing poems! ^-^
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04/11/2017 8:09 pmhistory
Level 54 : Grandmaster Scapegoat
BuildingBrute
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Thank you :)
Next time you won't miss the deadline and post a very nice poem too. I am sure you will do
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