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Descendant of Herobrine (part 1)

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Part one

"Thanks Matt for helping me cover up this up for me."
"No problem Haley, Now, um, what about that one over there?" Matthew said pointing to a tunnel near by.
"Um not yet I think I might want to explore that one." Looking at the tunnel, as I was turning to look back at him I saw a shadow in the tunnel. "That was weird."
"What was?"
"Never mind its not important. Why don't we start on my house now, I have the blue prints right here." I said pointing a workbench. "Well I did have the blue prints, I wonder what happened to them."
"Are those them?" He said as he was running off towards the tunnel to grab them. He got them right before they hit the stone of the tunnel. "Um, here." Matthew said as he handed them to me. We started on the base. The bottom of the walls is dark wood, The floor made up of wooden planks.

"It's getting late why don't we finish the rest of this tomorrow." I said while putting my stuff up in a chest next to the workbench.
"Okay, well I guess I'll talk to you tomorrow then. Why don't we meet here at about 9 o'clock?"
"Yeah that will be good. Do you think you could bring some extra wood and cobble just in case we run out?"
"Yeah sure." He said as he started walking off towards the village. Our village was a small place only about 25 residents.
Graduation was coming soon and as a present my dad bought me a little lot for me to build myself a house. It was right next to a mountain. It has been that it was an old mine where my grandpa worked. He was killed while working, there was a cave in, my grandpa was crushed by the rocks. He was never seen again. His name was Herman Oscar Brine. People called him Hero Brine, Her from Herman, O from Oscar, and Brine from well Brine, our last name. He had 6 children, two girls, 4 boys. My father was one of his children. His name Herman Oscar Brine, he goes by Oscar. And then there's me Haley Olivia Brine. Everyone on my dad's side of the family have the initials HOB.
I sat for a minute looking into the tunnel, wondering what it was that i saw. I finally convinced myself that it was nothing, just a figment of my imagination. Right as I was about to head back to the village I saw them. Bright glowing eyes. Eyes that were just as bright as the sun, bright white eyes......

( This is my own made up story of Herobrine, It is not following the normal story line of Herobrine. It is made up. Got it? Its made up. Also if you think i should make a second part please tell me.)
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06/25/2012 2:49 pm
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KillerScytheable
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I nearly shitted mah pantz
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06/04/2012 8:20 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Architect
brodimus
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make more NOW
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06/04/2012 8:18 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Nerd
J_S_T_N
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grammarrrr!!!!!
no jk, that doesnt matter. nice story!
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06/04/2012 7:17 pm
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Honeybunz162
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That was very cleaver on how you
made the names with the initials H.O.B.
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06/04/2012 6:21 pm
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StBrahmintippa
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I'm so sorry to say this, but I don't really like it. It wasn't that long, and the best part (in my opinion) was you describing Herobrine. The names were clever, but you didn't introduce anyone. Who is Matt? What is your relationship with him? Stuff like that. I like the base for the story, I just think it needs more details and more of a personality. Check out my blog and tell me what you think. Thanks.
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06/04/2012 4:16 pm
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BigLeague
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Civilization!
That was actually pretty sick for a blog.
If you want to make a video I could either help you with it or maybe do it for you with some friends, it wouldn't take too long :)
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06/04/2012 2:21 pm
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battlealex
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you shoud make a video
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06/04/2012 8:11 am
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LOLDA
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Uhh, who's matt, and what does he look like? Read my comment on your part 2 blog.
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06/04/2012 1:24 pm
Level 14 : Journeyman Pokemon
Civilization
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Um Matt is Matthew, I don't know what he looks like yet, I haven't decided on what he will look like.
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06/04/2012 5:18 pm
Level 49 : Master Ninja
LOLDA
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Ok, cool
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