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I am making a book at the moment, i will update it when i finish every 2 pages.

here it is so far

Chapter One



The Charred Remains






Jaime walked in the burnt out room which she had spent the first 10 years of her life in. Her best friend Eloisa walked beside her as if to comfort her in her misery. They walked through to the Play room were they used to play with the all other children at that time. The ground scattered with the sooted remains of Eloisa and Jaimeo s favourite toys in the school. When there teacher Mrs Sherman walked in behind them to walk them outside Jaime refused, but found her self being dragged out by the teacher. They sat outside on the park bench outside there class room staring at the burnt out remains of there favourite room. o It has all been losto thought Jaime. o Well I guess were going to have to build this again and in the mean time just find a different room, I would like it to not be close to this building, for it holds so many memories that may bring the fear back from when I was a childo . Said Jaime Firmly. Chandler, one of her many few friends sat the other side of Jaime. She told Jaimeo everything is alright there is nothing to worry about it is just a mishaps that this occurred today if we knew it was going to happen Io m pretty sure we would of gotten everything out, but we didno t know it was going to happen.o Explained Chandler.o How can you say that, all the memories we have had in there - o Actually Jaime Chandler is right we cano t get too comfortable over one building there is plenty of buildings that are the same around here.o Eloisa butted in. The firemen and women told them to go to another room, Jaime always wondered why women would be in the Fire-fighters, but she never got the chance to, and she certainly wouldno t now. Their teacher walked the girls and the rest of the class back to the schools hall, which they spent the rest of the day there playing games and reading books. After school Eloisa went home with Jaime, Chandler went to her own place after being asked to come to Jaimeo s. When the girls got home Eloisa and Jaime went to Jaimeo s room and started to play a game on the computer, later mum had called them for tea. They went down and mum asked how hungry they were. After tea they went back into Jaimeo s room and started reading. A few minutes later Eloisao s mum arrived with clothes after she had called to see if she could stay at Jaimeo s the night. While Eloisa, Jaime and Jaimeo s mom were sleeping little did Jaime know she was about to be transported by her soon to be formed enemy Cyrene into a different realm. A realm of fighting, slavery and punishments.




















Chapter Two



Woken Up



Jaime heard some different sounds that almost sounded as if there were people she didno t know in her room.o Fine kultra, ill go wake her up. At least Io m not scarred of bad luck she will bring us, according to the boss she is meant to bring good lucko . A new voice muttered.o I know what the boss said but I still think she is bringing bad luck with her from her other realmo . Snapped one of the men. Jaime felt one of there hands touch her, she thought the touch was familiar but she soon found out it wasno t a familiar touch, it was actually a totally new touch. She tried to remember the name of the man who had woken her, because she heard them talking about it. After the man had woken her and given her a dress that was a pale dark green, they told her to put it on. As soon as she put it on it was much too small, it was too tight. She walked out from behind the screen, and the man named Kultra was Jaime with his hands behind her neck, as if to say. If you try to get away ill wring your neck. After what seemed a long time of walking, Jaime found her self in a church that had its walled painted a dark green, and the angel statues were replace with a statue of a kind of man, it looked badly done. They went inside and there was a long wooden table in the middle of the church and chair surrounding it, and at the back there was a big armchair were a tall, broad but skinny man sat. When Jaime walked in he stood up and walked down the side of the table and went over to Jaime and his two men that had gone to fetch her. o Ah, Jaime. Io ve heard lots of things about you.o He said as he nodded to the way of his men to tell them to go. o Wait how do you know me?o Jaime snapped back at him. o Oh, hasno t your father told you?o he asked. o Told me what?o snapped Jaime. o Your father started the fire that burned your classroom yesterday. It was quite something to watch as well, we could all see it.o Explained Cyrene.o Now you better go get something to eat from our eating hall.o Said Cyrene before Jaime could say anything. The two men that had brought to this church wereno t taking her to the hall this time. It was two women they looked only a few years older then her. While she was being taken to the eating hall she was watching the other side of her were there was a vast ocean with some children playing in it beyond the walls of this sorrow place she was now in. She walked inside the eating hall and was told to sit down. She was immediately given food to eat.

















Chapter Three



Worried Mother






After that night had passed Jaimeo s mother came into the girlo s room to get them for breakfast, she found that Eloisa was already awake, but staring at Jaimeo s bed in horror and sorrow. When her mother heard that Jaime was gone, she started to cry. She then raced out to the phone and called the police. But before Jaimeo s mother could call them Eloisa found an old parchment with words written on it in curvy text, she went out to Jaimeo s mom and showed her the parchment. As soon as she finished reading it she asked Eloisa if she had heard anything last night. Eloisa just replied with no. o Why?o Asked Eloisa. Jaimeo s mother explained that it was a man that had once taken her father away, he had said that he could tame fire and create it out of thin air, but I was so shocked i collapsed, and when i woke up i was at home by my self and your mother was there next to me trying to wake me. After i did wake up i told your mother about the man. He was a wearing a teal coloured suit and a black under-shirt. He had two other men with him. If I can remember their names were Kultra and Heyron, Io m not sure. But I think that they have taken her with there mastero s ability to summon anyone and anything into his realm or anothero s realm with a few wordo s being read. I just hope she is alright.








Chapter Four



Jaimeo s Test






After Jaime had finished eating, she was taking to a room inside a house, that she though was the big man called Cyreneo s house. It was his house but the room she was put in wasno t very welcoming, the bed was a small bunk with thin blankets and a wardrobe that looked as though it had been made in the early 1800o s. There was also a table with a box of matches, a candle and a book. Jaime asked why they were in there. o They are in here for you to practice, as for the book its too keep you busy so you dono t get bored.o Replied Kultra. o If you need anything just ask one of my maids or one of these two.o Cyrene replied nodding his head in the directions of his two men. After Cyrene had nodded in his meno s way they walked outside and closed the door of the room she was in. When she heard the foot-steps die away she opened the wardrobe and she found three dresses two tops and a skirt inside it. She closed the wardrobe door and went over to the bench. There was vase that had a pretty blue pattern on it, with what looked like a bunch of fresh roses in the vase. Later that night one of Cyreneo s maids had walked in with a plate of thin sausages, mashed potatoes and some peas and beans. She didno t really like peas and beans, her mother new that and she had never put them on her plate when they had it. But this time she ate them, she thought what would happen if she didno t. She didno t want to think what would happen, remembering Cyreneo s face scarred her so she ate them. The maid came back later to get the plate. Jaime at the time had just opened the book. The maid looked at her with a frightening gaze, but she knew the maid was scarred of Cyrene more then Jaime. After Jaime had read the first two chapters she was interrupted by Kultra who slammed open the door and strode into the room and told Jaime to come with him. o What dose he wants with me now?o asked Jaime. He wants to see if you can do something your father can do, if you can he will be very happy and you will be asked to do other things. When they had gotten to the church, there were maids, Cyreneo s men. She saw the two statues of him and though. How bad the person who carved this was. Then just like anything the men in the green suits walked out, and the maids went down the stairs and outside to finish what they were doing before they were summoned. Even the two men called Kultra and Heyron left even though you could tell that they wanted to watch what would happen. As soon as everyone left Cyrene asked Jaime to do a few simple things. She was asked to snap her fingers really strongly to see if they would light on fire. That didno t work. Next he had asked her say a few words and put her hands over some dry grass to see if it would light. It did catch alight. Cyrene was pleased, o Thank you Jaime.o He said pleased.o Now the clicking your fingero s you need to practice on, ill get Kultra to get you something to practice on. But right now you need to rest. You have a big day tomorrow.
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Update #1added more to the story : by Xcermide1X 03/08/2012 5:46:48 amMar 8th, 2012

added a whole new chapter to the story

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