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**Before I start this is Copyrighted by me, as I will be using this in the future. The reason I have this up is for feedback.**
The following is the plot of a game I plan to make called Despretnia. I have entered the magnificent world of video game making, and I'm still a noob at it..... But this project is something I plan on doing over time.
Names to know before you read
I really do plan on doing so these ideas are personal but since I need feedback here you go:
The following is the plot of a game I plan to make called Despretnia. I have entered the magnificent world of video game making, and I'm still a noob at it..... But this project is something I plan on doing over time.
Names to know before you read
Names to know before you read
Jounds-Differ- The jounds are the sick rulers of Depretnia and step on all under them. It was very common for them to hold events that envolved burning down small towns and screaming/killing/stealing from the poor.
I really do plan on doing so these ideas are personal but since I need feedback here you go:
Despretnia
A bit of basic history:
Despretnia was one of the largest cities of what is now Italy. The full 'Italy' land was called Firand, also known as the grass that shines at noon (means full of vegetation). Firand is also known for the most feud between it's cities and outsiders of Despretnia are not usually accepted. Despretnia is not a new place in the world. It has been there for centuries, only ruled by differing groups. At the time Guiseppe was alive the rulers were known as Jounds. They would walk the streets and take money from the people who opposed them. Chezarina however, was found of the Jounds and got special treatment which was how Guiseppe managed to survive as a child.
Guiseppes' Story:
Guiseppe was abandoned at birth and never met his parents but he's told they were killed. Chezarina adopted him and took him in to her society. He did not suspect much of it, but lived a very lonely childhood as Chezarina was never there. It was one night when he heard swords outside that he noticed the true Chezarina. He witnessed her killing swarms of Firand guards until being disarmed and captured as prisoner. Guiseppe ran away and ran into Benevuto who took actual care of him. Chezarina escaped from the prison and quickly found Guiseppes' hideout. In front of Guiseppe, Chezarina killed Benevuto and scratched Guiseppes ear after he tried to stop her. Later in his life (when the player begins the game) a lost relative named Theodore that was badly injured by Chezarinas army. When Guiseppe finds him, he dies right before he tells Guiseppe who killed his parents. Guiseppe (being very angry) tracks down Chezarina and attempts to murder her. But of course he being unprepared is only captured by Jound men who leave him in his cell to rot.
What to expect as far as gameplay:
*Despretnia is going to be a third person game that goes by a long story.
* Later in the game Guiseppe is taken to be publicly executed after being framed by one of Chezarinas allies.
*Chezarina eventually develops an army to rule over Firand and the Jounds, which leads to Guiseppe gathering his own army to fight Chezarina
*The Jounds not being destroyed by Chezarina eventually fall on their own.
*The story will have two endings.
Ending #1
To get to ending #1 you do not leave Chezarinas' house after watching her fight the guards. This will lead to Guiseppe losing the war to gain control of Firand, and eventually death at peace.
Ending #2
To get ending #2 you leave Chezarinas' house and live with Benevuto develop your army and keep Chezarina from taking over Firand. This leads to a painful death at battle.
Either way Guiseppe dies at the end but once he dies a hint to the next game appears which will not be revealed for obvious reasons.
MORE COMING AFTER THE REST OF THE STORY IS DISCUSSED WITH MY 'OFFICIAL' TEAM
If you have questions about any part of the story line, development of the game, feedback, or anything else feel free to comment and I will respond as soon as I can.
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Update #1 : by ImaLittleCreeper 06/14/2013 2:10:06 amJun 14th, 2013
*A lot more plot
*More Characters
*Changed Characters to Characters/Groups
*More gameplay
*More history
*Fixed typos/grammer
*More Characters
*Changed Characters to Characters/Groups
*More gameplay
*More history
*Fixed typos/grammer
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