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Hey PMC! It's Sid here, and I have started a story called "Humiliation", that will have a new chapter every other day!
"Humiliation" is about a girl named Blake, who- Heh, maybe you should just read the story yourself, Ha ha.
I hope you like this story, if you do, give it a Diamond, Favourite, and leave a comment and tell me if I should improve something in the story (Grammer, Punctuation, ect.), and if you want, hit that Subscribe button!
Oh! There will also be a new chapter, get this... Everyday!
It will be posted at around 3:30PM my time! (Canada)
Enjoy the story!
"Uh, hey... I'm Blake Clark. I'm 14 years old, and All of those 14 years,
Pure humiliation... In 1st grade, I tripped, spilled my milk onto the floor, and then did a faceplant into it... People called me "Milk Girl" for he rest of the year! And in 3rd grade, some moron tied my shoelaces together during class, then when I got up to go to the bathroom, I tripped and fell on my face... Thanks... Then in 7th grade, I was flirting with this guy, we were just talking, and then... I burped... Burped... And no, it was not one of those small, quiet, burps... It was a burp... I never talked the that guy again...
Now I'm in the 8th grade... I'm just waiting... Waiting, to see what happens next...
HuMiLiAtIoN
Chapter 1: First Day Of Awful
"Blake! Time to get up! It's the first day of school, and you don't want to be late!" My mom called out.
"Ugh... Great, another year of Humiliation... Whoo Hoo..." I say sarcastically.
I roll out of bed, as soon as my feet touch the hard wood floor, a shiver goes down my spine. I slip on my slippers (Haha puns), and I walk downstairs, through the Family-Room and into the Kitchen. I see two slices of peanutbutter toast waiting for me at the Kitchen table. I see my 1 year old sister Carmen in her highchair, eating her toast, crumbs falling onto the floor. I smile and give her a kiss on the forehead. She giggles and continues to eat her crumbley toast. I sit down and start to eat mine.
"So mom..." I say taking a bite of the toast. "How's work? Do you like it at the office?".
"It's... Good I guess." My mom said hesitating.
"You hesitated... What's wrong?" I say with the same blank face I've had since 6th grade.
"Oh... I-It's nothing, really." She replied with a fake smile.
"Mom, as your oldest daughter. Tell me what's wrong." I demand.
"Okay, fine... Blake, this stays between you and me. Okay?" She says pulling me away from my toast.
"Okay... So the truth is..." She started.
"Yes?" I say flatly,.
"I got-"
Chapter 2: Hurry!
"Okay... So the truth is..." She started.
"Yes?" I say flatly.
"I got-"
______________
"I got fired..." My mom says with disappointment.
"You WHAT?!" I yell. "Mom! What happened?! How did you?- Ugh..."
"I uhh... Kinda said a few things to my boss that uhm..."
"Okay... Mom... What did you say?" I ask demanding.
"Yeah... Not in front of your little sister honey..." She says giving a weak smile.
"Ugh... Mom!" I yell frustrated
"I'm sorry honey! He said things to me first! So I had to fight back!" She yelled at me.
"Not with that language though!" I snap back.
This went on for about 15 minutes, me yelling at her, her yelling back at me. It was not a situation I wanted to be in on the first day of school... Finally, at 8:10AM we stopped.
"Oh my god! I have ten minutes to get ready and make it to the bus!" I yelled as I ran up the stairs into the bathroom.
I open up one of the drawers, and get my toothbush at toothpaste. I brush my teeth in a hurry, then I quickly pull my hair up in a messy bun.
"Eh... Good enough." I say calmly.
I run into my room and get dressed.
White Converse Shoes,
Black pants,
Light gray sweater, Baggy... Very, very, baggy.
And then I finished the outfit with a Light pink Beanie hat.
I liked it, it was my style.
I hurry down the staircase, trying my hardest not to fall. I grab my bookbag off of a chair, give my mom and sister a goodbye, then I run off to the bus stop.
Chapter 3: A Popular Mess
I hurry down the staircase, trying my hardest not to fall. I grab my bookbag off of a chair, give my mom and sister a goodbye, then I run off to the bus stop.
__________________
I see the bus pull up to the bus stop. I speed up. I make it just in time. After the dusty bus doors open slowly, I step onto the bus and sit down in one of the free seats. I look to my left and see a new girl in the seat beside the one in front of me. Eh, may as well introduce myself.
"Hi." I say politley. "My name is Blake. Blake Clark."
"Why do I need to know that?" The girl shooted.
"Jeez..." I mumble.
"WHAT was that?!" She yelled at me.
"Nothing..." I whisper.
At this point, I was actually kind of frightened. This girl was not going to be one of my friends...
I take my headphones out of my pocket, and plug them into my phone. I play one of my favourite songs.
When the bus stops at my school, I get up out of my seat. But what I didn't see coming... Was the new girl. As I got up, the new girl stuck her leg out in the small, cramped aisle. As a walk forward a few steps, she trips me. I hear everyone burst out into laughter.
I can tell that me, and the new girl, will not get along very well...
I get up off of the dirty floor, and get off of the bus.
Chapter 4: Bus Girl
I hear everyone burst out into laughter.
I can tell that me, and the new girl, will not get along very well...
I get up off of the dirty floor, and get off of the bus.
_________________
I wipe the dust off of my pants and start to walk to the front doors of the school.
"Man... That new girl is just... Wow..." I think to myself.
"What's her problem? What did I do to her?"
I take a deep breathe and walk up the short staircase, and into the school.
One of the new staff members at the school hands me a peice of paper. It directs me and other people where the classes are.
"Excuse me Miss, what's your name?", The new staff member asks me.
"Blake.", I reply. "Blake Clark."
"Blake! What a unique name!", The staff member compliments me, giving a kind smile.
"Heh, thank you!", I say smiling back at her.
"Okay... So Blake Clark...", She mumbles to herself, digging through a pile of papers.
Then the woman pulls out a piece of paper with my name on it.
"Here you go, Blake!", She says, handing me the paper.
"Thank you!" I say as I walk away.
I look at the paper with directions, and search for my locker. It took me a few minutes to get to it, but I was patient.
"Okay... Now for the combination..." I mumble to myself as I stand in front of my locker.
I look at the paper again to get my combination.
"Ah, here it is..." I quickly put in the combination and open up my locker.
I see a slip of paper on one of the small shelfs inside my locker. I pick it up and read it.
"Meet me in front of the Janitors room at Lunch. Hope I'll see you there."
~TM"
"How did they know this was my locker? I literaly JUST got here!" It thought with confusion.
"Or did they think that this was someone elses locker? Maybe it's from last year? Ugh, whatever"
I put my beanie in my locker, along with my gym clothes, text books, and papers.
I close my locker, and standing behind the door... The new girl. Standing there with an evil smile on her face. She had three girls standing behind her, with the same smile on each of their faces.
"So hows your realationship coming along sweetie?" The new girl laughed.
"Realationship? What do you mean?" I ask, confused as to whats going on.
"Oh...Did you and the bus floor break up? Awh, I feel so bad for you!", The new girl and her little friends starting laughing, aong with some of the people who overheard.
I roll my eyes and slam my locker door shut. I swing my backpack around my shoulder and storm off. People walk by now and call me "Bus girl". It's like 1st grade all over again... I run into the bathroom and splash cold water in my face.
"I'll just have to deal with it..." I say under my breathe
"Deal with it..."
_________________
Chapter 5: Rebecca Johnsten
People walk by now and call me "Bus girl". It's like 1st grade all over again... I run into the bathroom and splash cold water in my face.
"I'll just have to deal with it..." I say under my breathe
"Deal with it..."
_________________
I turn off the tap, and push the bathroom door open. People point, and laugh at me. I walk by two girls and hear them saying with a snicker: "Man, bus girl doesn't look too well.". I roll my eyes, and make my way to the other side of the school. "Blake!" I hear a familiar voice call out. I turn my head, and I see my best friend, Jesse. "Hey, Jess..." I grumble.
"What's wrong?", he asked me with his concerned look.
"Nothing." I lie.
"Hey, bus girl!", an older student interrupted. "How are you taking the break up?", he snickered.
I glare at him as he walks away. "Hey, bus girl!" I mock him.
"Okay, now I know that something is wrong. What happened?", Jesse said, putting a hand on my shoulder.
"Have you met the new girl yet?", I ask him.
"Yeah, Rebecca Johnsten, she's pretty cool. She and I have alot in common." Jesse explained, with a smile that spread across his face.
I stare at him for a moment, and then I sprint off.
"Blake?! Where are you going?", Jesse calls out to me. "Blake!".
After I turn the corner, Rebecca walks up behind Jesse.
"What's wrong with her?", Jesse asks Rebecca.
"I heard that some moron tripped her on the bus. Why would someone do that?" Rebecca lied.
"Man, poor Blake. This has been happening since the first grade." Jessed mentioned.
"Ha!- I mean, poor Blake!" Rebecca caught herself.
Jesse gave her a questioning look, but shrugged it off, and went off searching for me.
Chapter 6: Nobody Cares About The Nobody
(sorry that this chapter is short, I'm really tired.)
"I heard that some moron tripped her on the bus. Why would someone do that?" Rebecca lied.
"Man, poor Blake. This has been happening since the first grade." Jessed mentioned.
"Ha!- I mean, poor Blake!" Rebecca caught herself.
Jesse gave her a questioning look, but shrugged it off, and went off searching for me.
_________________
I stop in my tracks at the end of the small, narrow hallway, and fall to my knees. I cry into my lap, for what seems like forever. "Hey... Blake?", Jesse calls out. "What's the matter?".
I don't answer him. I don't even want to hear him at this point. Yes, I know that I'm acting like a little kid, but I don't exactly care. I hear Jesse walking toward me. I look up. He was about to sit down next to me until: "Hey, Jesse!", I hear Rebecca call. We both look in her direction. "Are you coming with us this afternoon?". "Yeah, of course!", Jesse replies. He suddenly gets up, and joins Rebecca and her little group. "Great... The new girl stole my best friend.", I mumble. I jump to my feet as the bell rings. "Great... Now it's class time.". I wipe a tear away, and make my way to class.
Chapter 7:
"Humiliation" is about a girl named Blake, who- Heh, maybe you should just read the story yourself, Ha ha.
I hope you like this story, if you do, give it a Diamond, Favourite, and leave a comment and tell me if I should improve something in the story (Grammer, Punctuation, ect.), and if you want, hit that Subscribe button!
Oh! There will also be a new chapter, get this... Everyday!
It will be posted at around 3:30PM my time! (Canada)
Enjoy the story!
"Uh, hey... I'm Blake Clark. I'm 14 years old, and All of those 14 years,
Pure humiliation... In 1st grade, I tripped, spilled my milk onto the floor, and then did a faceplant into it... People called me "Milk Girl" for he rest of the year! And in 3rd grade, some moron tied my shoelaces together during class, then when I got up to go to the bathroom, I tripped and fell on my face... Thanks... Then in 7th grade, I was flirting with this guy, we were just talking, and then... I burped... Burped... And no, it was not one of those small, quiet, burps... It was a burp... I never talked the that guy again...
Now I'm in the 8th grade... I'm just waiting... Waiting, to see what happens next...
HuMiLiAtIoN
Chapter 1: First Day Of Awful
"Blake! Time to get up! It's the first day of school, and you don't want to be late!" My mom called out.
"Ugh... Great, another year of Humiliation... Whoo Hoo..." I say sarcastically.
I roll out of bed, as soon as my feet touch the hard wood floor, a shiver goes down my spine. I slip on my slippers (Haha puns), and I walk downstairs, through the Family-Room and into the Kitchen. I see two slices of peanutbutter toast waiting for me at the Kitchen table. I see my 1 year old sister Carmen in her highchair, eating her toast, crumbs falling onto the floor. I smile and give her a kiss on the forehead. She giggles and continues to eat her crumbley toast. I sit down and start to eat mine.
"So mom..." I say taking a bite of the toast. "How's work? Do you like it at the office?".
"It's... Good I guess." My mom said hesitating.
"You hesitated... What's wrong?" I say with the same blank face I've had since 6th grade.
"Oh... I-It's nothing, really." She replied with a fake smile.
"Mom, as your oldest daughter. Tell me what's wrong." I demand.
"Okay, fine... Blake, this stays between you and me. Okay?" She says pulling me away from my toast.
"Okay... So the truth is..." She started.
"Yes?" I say flatly,.
"I got-"
Chapter 2: Hurry!
"Okay... So the truth is..." She started.
"Yes?" I say flatly.
"I got-"
______________
"I got fired..." My mom says with disappointment.
"You WHAT?!" I yell. "Mom! What happened?! How did you?- Ugh..."
"I uhh... Kinda said a few things to my boss that uhm..."
"Okay... Mom... What did you say?" I ask demanding.
"Yeah... Not in front of your little sister honey..." She says giving a weak smile.
"Ugh... Mom!" I yell frustrated
"I'm sorry honey! He said things to me first! So I had to fight back!" She yelled at me.
"Not with that language though!" I snap back.
This went on for about 15 minutes, me yelling at her, her yelling back at me. It was not a situation I wanted to be in on the first day of school... Finally, at 8:10AM we stopped.
"Oh my god! I have ten minutes to get ready and make it to the bus!" I yelled as I ran up the stairs into the bathroom.
I open up one of the drawers, and get my toothbush at toothpaste. I brush my teeth in a hurry, then I quickly pull my hair up in a messy bun.
"Eh... Good enough." I say calmly.
I run into my room and get dressed.
White Converse Shoes,
Black pants,
Light gray sweater, Baggy... Very, very, baggy.
And then I finished the outfit with a Light pink Beanie hat.
I liked it, it was my style.
I hurry down the staircase, trying my hardest not to fall. I grab my bookbag off of a chair, give my mom and sister a goodbye, then I run off to the bus stop.
Chapter 3: A Popular Mess
I hurry down the staircase, trying my hardest not to fall. I grab my bookbag off of a chair, give my mom and sister a goodbye, then I run off to the bus stop.
__________________
I see the bus pull up to the bus stop. I speed up. I make it just in time. After the dusty bus doors open slowly, I step onto the bus and sit down in one of the free seats. I look to my left and see a new girl in the seat beside the one in front of me. Eh, may as well introduce myself.
"Hi." I say politley. "My name is Blake. Blake Clark."
"Why do I need to know that?" The girl shooted.
"Jeez..." I mumble.
"WHAT was that?!" She yelled at me.
"Nothing..." I whisper.
At this point, I was actually kind of frightened. This girl was not going to be one of my friends...
I take my headphones out of my pocket, and plug them into my phone. I play one of my favourite songs.
When the bus stops at my school, I get up out of my seat. But what I didn't see coming... Was the new girl. As I got up, the new girl stuck her leg out in the small, cramped aisle. As a walk forward a few steps, she trips me. I hear everyone burst out into laughter.
I can tell that me, and the new girl, will not get along very well...
I get up off of the dirty floor, and get off of the bus.
Chapter 4: Bus Girl
I hear everyone burst out into laughter.
I can tell that me, and the new girl, will not get along very well...
I get up off of the dirty floor, and get off of the bus.
_________________
I wipe the dust off of my pants and start to walk to the front doors of the school.
"Man... That new girl is just... Wow..." I think to myself.
"What's her problem? What did I do to her?"
I take a deep breathe and walk up the short staircase, and into the school.
One of the new staff members at the school hands me a peice of paper. It directs me and other people where the classes are.
"Excuse me Miss, what's your name?", The new staff member asks me.
"Blake.", I reply. "Blake Clark."
"Blake! What a unique name!", The staff member compliments me, giving a kind smile.
"Heh, thank you!", I say smiling back at her.
"Okay... So Blake Clark...", She mumbles to herself, digging through a pile of papers.
Then the woman pulls out a piece of paper with my name on it.
"Here you go, Blake!", She says, handing me the paper.
"Thank you!" I say as I walk away.
I look at the paper with directions, and search for my locker. It took me a few minutes to get to it, but I was patient.
"Okay... Now for the combination..." I mumble to myself as I stand in front of my locker.
I look at the paper again to get my combination.
"Ah, here it is..." I quickly put in the combination and open up my locker.
I see a slip of paper on one of the small shelfs inside my locker. I pick it up and read it.
"Meet me in front of the Janitors room at Lunch. Hope I'll see you there."
~TM"
"How did they know this was my locker? I literaly JUST got here!" It thought with confusion.
"Or did they think that this was someone elses locker? Maybe it's from last year? Ugh, whatever"
I put my beanie in my locker, along with my gym clothes, text books, and papers.
I close my locker, and standing behind the door... The new girl. Standing there with an evil smile on her face. She had three girls standing behind her, with the same smile on each of their faces.
"So hows your realationship coming along sweetie?" The new girl laughed.
"Realationship? What do you mean?" I ask, confused as to whats going on.
"Oh...Did you and the bus floor break up? Awh, I feel so bad for you!", The new girl and her little friends starting laughing, aong with some of the people who overheard.
I roll my eyes and slam my locker door shut. I swing my backpack around my shoulder and storm off. People walk by now and call me "Bus girl". It's like 1st grade all over again... I run into the bathroom and splash cold water in my face.
"I'll just have to deal with it..." I say under my breathe
"Deal with it..."
_________________
Chapter 5: Rebecca Johnsten
People walk by now and call me "Bus girl". It's like 1st grade all over again... I run into the bathroom and splash cold water in my face.
"I'll just have to deal with it..." I say under my breathe
"Deal with it..."
_________________
I turn off the tap, and push the bathroom door open. People point, and laugh at me. I walk by two girls and hear them saying with a snicker: "Man, bus girl doesn't look too well.". I roll my eyes, and make my way to the other side of the school. "Blake!" I hear a familiar voice call out. I turn my head, and I see my best friend, Jesse. "Hey, Jess..." I grumble.
"What's wrong?", he asked me with his concerned look.
"Nothing." I lie.
"Hey, bus girl!", an older student interrupted. "How are you taking the break up?", he snickered.
I glare at him as he walks away. "Hey, bus girl!" I mock him.
"Okay, now I know that something is wrong. What happened?", Jesse said, putting a hand on my shoulder.
"Have you met the new girl yet?", I ask him.
"Yeah, Rebecca Johnsten, she's pretty cool. She and I have alot in common." Jesse explained, with a smile that spread across his face.
I stare at him for a moment, and then I sprint off.
"Blake?! Where are you going?", Jesse calls out to me. "Blake!".
After I turn the corner, Rebecca walks up behind Jesse.
"What's wrong with her?", Jesse asks Rebecca.
"I heard that some moron tripped her on the bus. Why would someone do that?" Rebecca lied.
"Man, poor Blake. This has been happening since the first grade." Jessed mentioned.
"Ha!- I mean, poor Blake!" Rebecca caught herself.
Jesse gave her a questioning look, but shrugged it off, and went off searching for me.
Chapter 6: Nobody Cares About The Nobody
(sorry that this chapter is short, I'm really tired.)
"I heard that some moron tripped her on the bus. Why would someone do that?" Rebecca lied.
"Man, poor Blake. This has been happening since the first grade." Jessed mentioned.
"Ha!- I mean, poor Blake!" Rebecca caught herself.
Jesse gave her a questioning look, but shrugged it off, and went off searching for me.
_________________
I stop in my tracks at the end of the small, narrow hallway, and fall to my knees. I cry into my lap, for what seems like forever. "Hey... Blake?", Jesse calls out. "What's the matter?".
I don't answer him. I don't even want to hear him at this point. Yes, I know that I'm acting like a little kid, but I don't exactly care. I hear Jesse walking toward me. I look up. He was about to sit down next to me until: "Hey, Jesse!", I hear Rebecca call. We both look in her direction. "Are you coming with us this afternoon?". "Yeah, of course!", Jesse replies. He suddenly gets up, and joins Rebecca and her little group. "Great... The new girl stole my best friend.", I mumble. I jump to my feet as the bell rings. "Great... Now it's class time.". I wipe a tear away, and make my way to class.
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