This is my story I am currently writing for a person I am helping out with his story, I just need to know how this story sounds, and I would like some feedback.

In the year 2025, after the first zombie appocolypse, the government is standing on shaky legs. The war had killed 10 billion people, and has caused many people to go insane. Crime is at an all time high and there is nobody to stop them, but there is a group of friends who want to make a change. These friends are nicknamed Mima, Muffins, and Wookie, they lost their familys during the war, and were forced to live out on the street.

They were hardened by all the crime and had learned to fight from various street brawls. Although they were given many opprotunities to become criminals, but their souls stood uncorrupted from everything. There is one crime group in particular that they oppose, Dr. Roboblock. They are a crime group who is made up of 1 person who has a robot army, they plan to recreate the zombies that almost destroyed the world. These vigilantes are the only ones who can stop them...

This is a work in process, and I will continue it if I get positive feedback.