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"Malfunction" Creepypasta (PART 2)

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This is a continuation of a story I already did. Please click here to see it. Now without further a do, Malfunction Part 2!

  "I knew because I've had a hundred other calls about it today" said the man on the other side of the phone. "Why is this happening to so many people then?" I said. "Its something wrong with the new update, even though we didn't even try to add a mob." We talked for a little bit until he said he would hold a Mojang Meeting to try and remove the bug.

"Why have you called a Mojang meeting" said Markus Persson. "Theres a malfunction"said Jeb. "In what?" "Everything." Everyone in Mojang was working 24/7 to find why this bug even existed and how to solve it. After millions of computers breaking down, help from other companies and even one person from the CIA came about. Then one day, a man known as Grumm found something strange. The bug could talk in chat and was almost had a mind of its own. Grumm quickly became the head of research and named the bug Error 789. Error 789 was able to freely change the code of the game. Explaining why everyone saw him differently before what is now called "The red screen of death." After Grumm's discovery strange things started happening around the Mojang Offices. Once every week someone fell unconcious and their computers that they were working on dissapeared. When these people woke up they were almost crazy. They were constantly screaming "HES BEHIND ME!" "PLEASE HELP" Now, not only were millions of computers getting the red screen of death, but people were actually getting physically harmed. The U.S. government sent half of the CIA to go investigate and end Error 789. The smartest person in the world, with an IQ of 201, was also sent there. Then after a few months the investigation of Error 789 went completely private, only the people working on it knew the latest news. Then computers starting coming back on... people started to get their minds back. It was over. Now the only question is, Do you believe in Error 789?

Well thats it! I hope you enjoyed! Be sure to diamond and favorite if you liked it!
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Haydenjames
07/13/2014 5:39 pm
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this part was kinda short :/
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Cheezbergur11
07/28/2014 6:52 pm
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Agreed.

Next time I think you should make it more like Part 1.

(in the most constructive way possible):
This part was a bit rushed, and I felt like the end was a cliffhanger.
It seemed Part 1 was less rushed and had more of an on-the-edge-of-your-seat feel.

Other than that, this was pretty good. Diamonded.
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