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Mine - A short story of Herobrine

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Level 2 : Apprentice Miner
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September 25, 2009 - Steven (yes Steven) was tasked to mine the dangerous shafts of Mt. Minecraftia in search for the rarest block of them all, the emerald ore, this was a mineral favored by many villagers, including the city mayor William Long-nose MD.

"Find me 5 emeralds and I'll give you the rarest grass block of them all." he said.

Steven went mining for days.... He haven't seen the outside land for a while... Days turn to weeks and turn to months, we wouldn't say it's years because it's just bonkers.

Steven ate nothing but rotten flesh, he got pretty tired of it, he started getting hallucination from the hunger he have experienced for the past five months, but then he found something... It's a glowing block, a green one, he laughed with joy---

"EMERALDS!" he shouted

The last 15 uses of his iron pickaxe was useful, he had nothing else but 35 pieces of rotten flesh. It's time he can go up...

He kept shoveling and shoveling towards every dirt he encounters, his courage was taken little by little when he recognized something, a pair of eyes were hovering around him in the darkness, every sweat in his body came out until his heart pounded louder than the opening of iron doors. When he recognized that the eyes were going closer and closer, he ran.

After hours of running, he looked at his hunger bar, worried, he only have 2 bars left, meaning he cannot run, that's when he saw a person in-front of him, weeping.

"Hey friend... Are you lost?" he shouted

It looked at him

"Not you!" he screamed

It was a creature with white eyes, the eyes were sharp, like the scariest bats there is.

Steven recounted everything, this thing, the minecraft god Notch, when he noticed what he was looking for, it was too late.

"Herobrine..." he whispered

The creature held him by the neck and stare at Steven's face, it took about an hour or two, when it was about to kill Steven, a group of villagers ran in and attacked the creature, Steven blacked out...

-5 hours later-

Steven woke up in a villager's house

"Thank god you're okay." says the mayor

"What happened---" he whispered

"The demon, you encountered it." the mayor said

"What happened to the others?" Steven asked

"Sad to say but all of the rescue team died, they were all slain, but thanks to Jonathan, who survived, he dragged your unconscious body towards the light and we saw you two..." the mayor answered

Steven was near asleep again... He looked out of the window, outside was a man with pure white eyes staring at him wickedly.
CreditThanks to Minerjoe2000 for the picture.
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jakesoboy01
01/03/2014 8:34 am
Level 38 : Artisan Caveman
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Jeez although this bad paragraph organization that ending though scared the hell out me. >.< You sir earn a diamond and a subscriber! :D Keep on making stories but longer stories. *throws diamond and travels alongside you* That diamond should be much better than a fancy emerald ;)
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SoarynTheEagle
01/03/2014 6:26 am
Level 34 : Artisan Unicorn
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Bad paragraph setting up. Literally everything from "after hours of running" to the very bottom should be one paragraph. You need to elaborate on things and add detail to everything. Like when he hallucinates. What does he hallucinate about? All in all, I didn't like this one all that much. Just my opinion.
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auywf1st
01/03/2014 6:30 am
Level 2 : Apprentice Miner
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Comments are highly appreciated. I did this story in a hurry so I would expect a high number of comments about the paragraphs and grammars. Thanks for the comment anyway ^_^
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alvzebuilds
01/03/2014 5:47 am
Level 42 : Master Architect
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SCARY!
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