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October Spirits

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And as I walked through the darkened halls, voices called; spirits mauled.
I could not stop, I could not speak; as if a new device was controlling me.

Nothing was the same, yet nothing different.
The voices in my head spoke softly of the night,

and other things I will not tell
For I can't lie.



The night is not my friend nor enemy.
The dogs howl at the poor, empty moon.

With grim faces we must carry on
Through the empty nights that are filled with song.....


October Spirits
By
Ozzie


I am not who you all think I am. Don't you see? These dim hallways have me trapped, something I can't deny. They follow me...all the time. I can't speak. I can't see. I can't feel. I am who I am, alone in this tiny world.
I--
Oh no!
Over there!
Help!
They're here!
They're
here!
The voices! The voices! They are in distress! They are calling! They are coming closer! ANd! I CAn't ERREOENOADC.!*R979
ERROR
ERROR
CODE RED
ERROR 95926
CODE RED
CODE RED
STIMULATION BREAKING...
...
...
Stimulation terminated. Testee has been put in dark error code 8897. Break lock. Break lock. Do not execute. Do NOT execute.
What just happened? Oooo... my head....
But...What? Where are the voices?
You cannot hear me
You cannot hear me
YOU CAN't heAR mE!
......
*inaudible sound.*
No! No! I can't! She falls to the ground.. Help! I can't stand it! It's gone! My only tangible thing... Was it even tangible, ever at all?
*inaudible screeching*
NO! Where? The ringing! The ringing! My head... She sinks lower...lower...onto her hands and knees...lying on the ground...curled in a ball of hate and... No...she is getting up, she runs.
YOU CAN'T RUN FROM ME!!!
Who... No! She keeps running... No! Stay away!! She thinks she speaks, but nobody hears her, it is her own thought. It is stuck in her brain. Her lips move slightly, as if she whispers. But nobody is home. Nobody will ever be home! *maniacal laughing* The spirits! They have abandoned me! Help me! Anyone? Anyone at all??
It is breaking!
The walls! They're closing in!
We don't like you anymore! We don't like you anymore! We don't like you anymore!
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10/12/2016 8:03 pm
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Xylia
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death (hades) is with us.
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10/12/2016 12:48 pm
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puddingeter1
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the faq
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10/12/2016 9:10 pm
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UNDERTALE_CREW
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Hey, leave her alone! She can post what she wants!
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10/13/2016 10:48 am
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puddingeter1
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nope
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10/13/2016 4:47 pm
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UNDERTALE_CREW
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Oh? Where in the rules does it say she can't? Or maybe you think you're important enough to make the rules? Oh my goodness, I'm so sorry your highness!
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10/15/2016 6:47 am
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puddingeter1
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yaaay i have a slave
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10/15/2016 4:03 pm
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UNDERTALE_CREW
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More of a mentor. Lesson one on becoming a better king- clean up your language.
Lesson two- Stop bullying people who work hard on their submissions
Lesson three- capitalize proper nouns and the beginnings of your sentences.
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10/12/2016 7:55 pm
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Ozziekitty
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I see why you might think that.
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10/11/2016 8:05 pm
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Nebulabeee
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Umm... wow... slightly confusing? But well-written :3
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10/11/2016 9:10 pm
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Ozziekitty
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Thanks! That's kinda the point.
Basically, there is a girl in a simulation where she is trapped inside a hallway that loops around, and there is one window where all the colors are greyscale. The simulators are speaking to her, hence, 'spirits'. The simulation has an error, and the girl goes completely berserk. The 'You can't run from me!' is where there is another voice, an evil presence, not part of the simulation. It comes in and thinks she is running from him, but really she is running from the ringing in her ears after the error. She can't speak, as they took away her ability, so she screams in her thoughts. Then she blacks out, and the last sentence is her hallucinating.
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10/12/2016 8:26 am
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Nebulabeee
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Oh.... wow, poor girl D:
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