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Poem - ''Just a Regular Minecraft world''

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''Just a Regular Minecraft world''

When I opened my eyes -
I think I blinked twice -
I saw beautiful land,
It was really nice.
And then I saw a villlage.
''Should it get pillaged?''
''I should not do that, but, what to do?''
Then one villager gave me a mushroom stew.
So I said thanks, but he was gone,
I looked for him, but saw only one pile of bone.
But it was alive! It was some sort of monster!
Or was it only an imposter?
It was really weird, so I ran, ran for my life!
But then I saw more, there might be five!
I hid in one cave -
that wasn't really brave -
at least I was safe.
But then I realized - I'm not alone in there!
Even today it's giving me a nightmare!
It was a creeper, or maybe two,
and then I just saw, as one of them blew.
But I was alive, what a luck,
trust me, creepers really suck.
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NOTE: This is my first poem, and also english isn't my first language !
I accept any critique - possitive and negative too :)
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Happs
06/02/2014 3:05 pm
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Pretty good if english isn't your first language.
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Duck Community
06/02/2014 2:18 pm
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RAP RAP OMG LMG WOOOOAAAAAAAAAAA
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