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Shadow the hedgehog....? (CREEPYPASTA)

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So im a sonic fan like others but i settled with dreamcast and above but i got a glitchy or hacked Shadow the hedgehog being curious i put it in my xbox and it loaded normally,untill i got to see the save select,he wasnt there there was SONIC,SILVER and Dr Eggman,As i chose sonic he loaded in green hill remastered but the title said `BLOOD HILL` i got creeped out and played but then text appeared saying `BIG MISTAKE LUKE` `What the F--K is going on?` i yelled but played  as sonic and got to shadow who covered the goal,then it was a boss fight but shadow i got to see his face it was mangled,bloody,had blacked eyes and red pupils. However shadow overpowered sonic and he shot him i could`nt make out what was happening but i saw the gun,Then i got straight back to the save select even though i had 3 sonics (lives) i then chose silver whos level read `Crisis City` I was kicked into crisis city,Silver telling me to run by SPEAKING `Luke get me out of this hellhole` i moved him but shadow then HOVERED towards silver but the ring was`nt there i was stuck! then more gunshots were heard and i was booted to the save select,the only character was eggman in his mech,His level read `....die` i walked eggman through the level then shadow shot him! then a screen saying all hail shadow was shown...
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lobie10
06/12/2014 8:36 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Artist
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Sorry to break it to ya, but this is kind of a rip-off of Sonic.EXE.
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The GolemCrafter
06/11/2014 4:21 am
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Caveman
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could be a good creepypasta, although, I find that you rushed a lot. One being the introduction and most of the "action". Most creepypastas have a slow, tension-filled build up to something shocking. but otherwise it's okay.
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iamjustarock123
06/12/2014 8:16 am
Level 3 : Apprentice Narwhal
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i agree. it is a great creepypasta but it seems more of like an action story. however, i like your work and continue like this writing them. then i am sure you will write great ones soon.
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Sonicthehedgehog33
08/12/2014 11:43 am
Level 9 : Apprentice Skinner
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Well this is my first one and the fact that i had little time to do it in
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[KING] Xaftos
06/11/2014 3:34 am
Level 22 : Expert Toast
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The autism is real.
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