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NOTE: Yes i do know there are flaws in it with ., and what not please do not post hate comments with your writing sucks!
NOTE 2: After this story i will stop with writing stories ( i think) because it's much harder then i thought to write a good story
I was mining for diamonds!
i haven't been in the mine for too long, Maybe a hour
It felt like days, i decided to get out of the cave system to get some fresh air,
when i was out of the cave i got the chills like someone was watching me, But that was impossible i was all alone on the island. I walked back to my house where my pig was waiting for me,
BACON, Get of my bed!
uurgh Bacon made my bed all dirty, ow well i did not really care because i was really tired. I fell asleep.
Next day i woke up, and i made myself some breakfast.
I went to the farm to get some wheat to make myself some bread,
Normally Bacon would come to me to eat some of the bread, but Bacon did not show up
I shouted a few times but bacon was nowhere tobe seen,strange...
Maybe he'll showup later when i return from the mine, i walked back to the mine when suddenly i heard footsteps.
i went to investigate because i hoped it was a cow so i could get some leather for some armour.
but there was no cow, nor any other animal, maybe it was a creeaper still walking in the daylight?
Since i did want to explode i walked away and continued my journey when i turned around i spotted a pair of eyes
watching me from the bushes, those were not animal eyes, or the eyes of a monster, no... they were human, but there were all white! My heart stopped and i lost the ability to walk.
it's like i froze on my spot, i maybe stood there for a few seconds then the pair of eyes dissapeard.
My heart began to pound as fast possible when i realised that i was not alone.
I ran as fast as possible back to my house and closed the door
i went to the basement to get my diamond gear i was saving and put it on, that's when i noticed
there was blood on the floor leading the closet, i went closer and opend the door...
Bacon?
NOTE 2: After this story i will stop with writing stories ( i think) because it's much harder then i thought to write a good story
I was mining for diamonds!
i haven't been in the mine for too long, Maybe a hour
It felt like days, i decided to get out of the cave system to get some fresh air,
when i was out of the cave i got the chills like someone was watching me, But that was impossible i was all alone on the island. I walked back to my house where my pig was waiting for me,
BACON, Get of my bed!
uurgh Bacon made my bed all dirty, ow well i did not really care because i was really tired. I fell asleep.
Next day i woke up, and i made myself some breakfast.
I went to the farm to get some wheat to make myself some bread,
Normally Bacon would come to me to eat some of the bread, but Bacon did not show up
I shouted a few times but bacon was nowhere tobe seen,strange...
Maybe he'll showup later when i return from the mine, i walked back to the mine when suddenly i heard footsteps.
i went to investigate because i hoped it was a cow so i could get some leather for some armour.
but there was no cow, nor any other animal, maybe it was a creeaper still walking in the daylight?
Since i did want to explode i walked away and continued my journey when i turned around i spotted a pair of eyes
watching me from the bushes, those were not animal eyes, or the eyes of a monster, no... they were human, but there were all white! My heart stopped and i lost the ability to walk.
it's like i froze on my spot, i maybe stood there for a few seconds then the pair of eyes dissapeard.
My heart began to pound as fast possible when i realised that i was not alone.
I ran as fast as possible back to my house and closed the door
i went to the basement to get my diamond gear i was saving and put it on, that's when i noticed
there was blood on the floor leading the closet, i went closer and opend the door...
Bacon?
To Be Continued
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What I would have wrote:
The forest seemed to have a dark aura to it, my eyes dashed. For a second my heart skipped a beat, my mind didn't want to believe, but there they where. In the darkness of the shadows two eyes pierced my heart deeper than any sword blow. I wanted to run but I couldn't, it was as if it had control of my mind. They stared, thinking, judging, I didn't know. I shouted but no reply was returned, from the darkness they stared, as if looking into my very soul. They where like nothing I had ever seen, pale white but somewhat cloudy. As if there where a storm brewing in the very mind of that foul monster. I couldn't decide what monster could possibly have such a stare. Ià recognisedà them after what felt like hours, I didn't want to believe. They where the monster I was told about when I was young, it was him, the lost miner.
I enjoy making the stories (even if their bad)
and i hope enjoy reading them, there is always room for improvement,
Since this was my first story i actually learned alot while writing it and your feedback
So thanks!
I look forward to reading your future work.
Although it's very nice of you helping me but i didn't get much satisfaction writing the stories,
Maybe i'll stick with reading them
Thanks!
maybe i'll continue and write whole new stories!
But i will check your stories out since i do find the pleasure reading them,