FINALIST IN A FINALISTS JAM
This Blog is an entry in the completed Love Poem Contest.

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Bernie_F's Avatar Bernie_F
Level 46 : Master Kitten
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This is for my Son Jake who has recently been very ill.
He's doing well at the minute and I am extremely proud of his resilience and courage. I love him dearly. I sometimes call him Sunbeam.


SUNBEAM


When I could do nothing, it broke me.
When I cleansed your skin, it changed me.
When you laughed out loud, it raised me.
When you didn't cry, I did.


When I held your hand, it soothed me.
When I combed your hair, it failed me.
When you laughed out loud, it lit me.
When you didn't cry, I did.



When I left you behind, it crushed me.
When I returned to you, it drowned me.
When you laughed out loud, it warmed me.
When you didn't cry, I did.



When I didn't talk, it pained me.
When I raised my voice, it hurt me.
When you laughed out loud, it fixed me.
When your Mother cried, I did.
You never cried, I did.
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02/03/2021 6:19 pm
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Cardinal System
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I hope my future will bring me a child. Beautifully written, +2
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02/03/2021 6:44 pm
Level 46 : Master Kitten
Bernie_F
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I hope so too.
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