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By C1ass1f1edKing
It all started 4 years ago when I took a vacation to New Hampshire. I saw many things there and went to see my cousin i havent seen in 6 years they are so much fun. We went golfing and when I got a hole in 1 one the 7th hole I heard a very weird noise. I then went to check it out...
I looked in the hole and saw SNAILS? They were on small computers typing some coding.They Looked up and saw me they quick shut the hole.(the one I was looking trough)I then asked the owner of the golf couse (which was called Golf Mine A pun on Gold mine) If he knew anything about it he said no.He gave me permission to dig where I had found the snails.
The snails were terrified when they saw me putting a shovel in the ground.I could hear their screams all the way on the surface. They were coding a game?!?!?! It was Called MINECRAFT! Yes the game we all now and love was made by snails.They were making the version we know as Minecraft : Classic. They took out mini snail guns and shot my leg. They then knocked me out and took me to a secret place...
I woke up Almost completely Naked The only thing still on was my boxers. then a mad scientist snail came in the room and has holding a big needle he then took it and inserted the needle in my arm. i screamed so loud i have heard some people thought an earthquake was happening.
The next thing I knew I was in my house on my bed. I felt suspicious so I called a Scientist. He said I had sounded like i had my memory erased...
He told me to Immediately come over. So i did, he happened to just have finished a prototype memory finder that brought back erased memories. He put it on my head and hit a button. I went immediately unconscious and woke up yet again in my bed. but this time I remembered everything the snails the minecraft the golf course and I got out my Laptop and began to write this story I just looked behind me to see a snail holding a gun... Boom.
If you tell anyone about this story you will die-The Snails. Ha Ha Ha
The End.
It all started 4 years ago when I took a vacation to New Hampshire. I saw many things there and went to see my cousin i havent seen in 6 years they are so much fun. We went golfing and when I got a hole in 1 one the 7th hole I heard a very weird noise. I then went to check it out...
I looked in the hole and saw SNAILS? They were on small computers typing some coding.They Looked up and saw me they quick shut the hole.(the one I was looking trough)I then asked the owner of the golf couse (which was called Golf Mine A pun on Gold mine) If he knew anything about it he said no.He gave me permission to dig where I had found the snails.
The snails were terrified when they saw me putting a shovel in the ground.I could hear their screams all the way on the surface. They were coding a game?!?!?! It was Called MINECRAFT! Yes the game we all now and love was made by snails.They were making the version we know as Minecraft : Classic. They took out mini snail guns and shot my leg. They then knocked me out and took me to a secret place...
I woke up Almost completely Naked The only thing still on was my boxers. then a mad scientist snail came in the room and has holding a big needle he then took it and inserted the needle in my arm. i screamed so loud i have heard some people thought an earthquake was happening.
The next thing I knew I was in my house on my bed. I felt suspicious so I called a Scientist. He said I had sounded like i had my memory erased...
He told me to Immediately come over. So i did, he happened to just have finished a prototype memory finder that brought back erased memories. He put it on my head and hit a button. I went immediately unconscious and woke up yet again in my bed. but this time I remembered everything the snails the minecraft the golf course and I got out my Laptop and began to write this story I just looked behind me to see a snail holding a gun... Boom.
If you tell anyone about this story you will die-The Snails. Ha Ha Ha
The End.
Credit | Monkeyy |
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The grammar and punctuation in it could use some work though.
Keep it up.
anyhow... how do you get this much views and diamond.
The story wasn't that good. Not even hating here guys, but seriously. I wish I could do this and get this much views/diamonds. D:
And
1: u r totally hating
2: it is good if you looked at it
3: maybe if you didnt spend 24/7 hating you could write a story with That will get over 300 views
4: you are awesome -The snails. Just kidding not even the snails could think such a jerk like you could be cool!
5: how about you try to write a story and btw I only joined 4 days ago.
6: sorry for all this hate it just is not cool being a jerk sometimes D:
And five others.
And I'm not hating, I'm just saying how you could get so much views, and I did look at it.
I should try to compliment your story, but for some reason that is hard.
so im sorry and a little way to make it better is welcome... in fact i hope u do
and ur story was not bad at all keep them coming