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Connor awoke. The sound of his friends outside building and mining had woken him. "Joe! Go and get that cobble!" Chris commanded. Connor got up, grabbed his diamond hoe from the chest and began farming. Pigs, cows, chickens and sheep roamed, as he grabbed the wheat, melons and pumpkins. Suddenly, a massive bang threw him off his feet, and knocked Joe, Chris and Joshua from the pillars they were building. "Uber-Creepers!" Joshua screamed, a zombie bursting out of the ground at him. Chris pulled out his dual swords, and began slashing at the oncoming horde of undead. Connor grabbed his hoe and beheaded a skeleton. An Enderman appeared out of nowhere, grabbed Chris, then dropped him from the sky. The sound of bones breaking echoed through the sudden night-time sky, and zombies swarmed Chris. He screamed as he was disembowelled by the zombies. A twitching Steve with white eyes began approaching Connor... Herobrine.
Chris broke the door down, and with Joshua and Joe, charged Herobrine. They flew through the window of the house, and stayed on the ground. Herobrine pulled out a diamond sword, then swung at Connor. He swung his hoe up, then began swiping, slashing and kicking, until a swift curve of both weapons hit each other. Connor's right arm fell from the elbow, and the scythe embedded itself in between Herobrine's eyes. "Oh..." Was all Connor managed before falling unconscious.
Connor lifted his arm, and saw the stitches on his elbow. "Oh, you're awake." The doctor said.
"What happened?" Connor asked.
"You did what the best warriors have tried and failed to do; kill Herobrine" He said.
"I did that?" Connor gasped, suprised.
"They're burning his bod-" The doctor suddenly went pale, before the pupils and colour in his eyes dissolved. "You're going to die a horrible death, Coonnnnoooorrr"
Connor stood, picked up a fire extinguisher, and swung it over the doctors head, smashing it instantly. Smoke crept from under the door. He looked out the window, and saw an army of mobs approaching. "Well" Connor mused "I'm going to need this."
Chapter 2
This had gone on for too long. Herobrine had ripped most big cities to pieces, and now there were organized patrols of zombies and skeletons. There had even been reports of silverfish digging trenches for the mobs. Connor, Joe, Chris and Joshua were scavenging through an old city, on the sign inwards it said: Welcome to Brickport! Connnor recognized the name, but couldn't remember from where. "Guys, it's getting dark!" Chris shouted. Darkness was bad, there was a penthouse they'd been staying in, it had plenty of food and gear, but too much for the three of them to carry.
Another day passed and creepers were swarming the streets. If they went down there, they'd be done for.
Chris broke the door down, and with Joshua and Joe, charged Herobrine. They flew through the window of the house, and stayed on the ground. Herobrine pulled out a diamond sword, then swung at Connor. He swung his hoe up, then began swiping, slashing and kicking, until a swift curve of both weapons hit each other. Connor's right arm fell from the elbow, and the scythe embedded itself in between Herobrine's eyes. "Oh..." Was all Connor managed before falling unconscious.
Connor lifted his arm, and saw the stitches on his elbow. "Oh, you're awake." The doctor said.
"What happened?" Connor asked.
"You did what the best warriors have tried and failed to do; kill Herobrine" He said.
"I did that?" Connor gasped, suprised.
"They're burning his bod-" The doctor suddenly went pale, before the pupils and colour in his eyes dissolved. "You're going to die a horrible death, Coonnnnoooorrr"
Connor stood, picked up a fire extinguisher, and swung it over the doctors head, smashing it instantly. Smoke crept from under the door. He looked out the window, and saw an army of mobs approaching. "Well" Connor mused "I'm going to need this."
Chapter 2
This had gone on for too long. Herobrine had ripped most big cities to pieces, and now there were organized patrols of zombies and skeletons. There had even been reports of silverfish digging trenches for the mobs. Connor, Joe, Chris and Joshua were scavenging through an old city, on the sign inwards it said: Welcome to Brickport! Connnor recognized the name, but couldn't remember from where. "Guys, it's getting dark!" Chris shouted. Darkness was bad, there was a penthouse they'd been staying in, it had plenty of food and gear, but too much for the three of them to carry.
Another day passed and creepers were swarming the streets. If they went down there, they'd be done for.
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"Grabbed his diamond scythe from the chest and began farming." Isn't that called a hoe?
"Uber-Creepers!" Yet again, aren't those called Electrified Creepers?
Make sure to know exactly what something is exactly at the right time when writing.
-Gonna or Going to -You're or You are -I'm or I am
Correct grammar and spelling has to be key for a good blog post.
The rest was pretty good. You were nice and descriptive in the actions and events. Have a diamond.