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The Creeper Who Did'nt Explode And Who Became Friends with Steve " A CREEPER A PLAYERS BEST FRIEND"-Story

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One Day in The World Called Demo_World
There was a player called Steve,Steve got lots of Diamonds and Sticks and he can make lots of swords he made 64 Swords and He Did'nt waste any sword when steve went to his crafting table.He Looked Out of the window and saw someone in a hill, Steve saw a Very sad Creeper,Steve looks at the creeper and when people pass by him he dose'nt explode so Steve went out to the hill to visit the creeper "Hello Why are You so Sad?" said Steve"Im just sad because im the only creeper in this world that wont Explode thats why people can pass by me"Said Creeper "Would you like to be friends?,I Have a Double Deck Bed but i only use the down part of the Double Deck bed and im also lonely so wanna be friends?" Yes,!" said the creeper with a smile, It started to rain ..."Quickly lets get in the house!" said Steve "Wow This House Looks Amazing
how long did it take you to make it?"said the creeper "I made it like for a month but it was hard because i had to get wood everyday thats why this place has just bare leaves like a grassland with some hills"said steve. "well lets see the bed!"said the creeper "sure here it is" said steve" "you built this?"said the creeper
"yes"said steve"but who was using the upper part of the bed?"said creeper "Nobody but i beleive that somebody would come someday and i think today it just happend"said Steve "Can I Live here?" said creeper "yes please" said steve "Thank You Steve"
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10/12/2013 5:22 am
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You need to pay attention to grammar, punctuation and paragraphing.

You also need to make your stories longer.

It's not called a double deck bed, it's a bunk bed.
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10/12/2013 5:28 am
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10/12/2013 5:32 am
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... well it's supposed to be a bunk bed.
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10/12/2013 5:33 am
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Hey vikki just relax and chill because i dont want to talk about BEDS the whole day with you okay Just,Chill!!
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10/12/2013 5:42 am
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I'm lying on a bed while typing this doe!
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10/12/2013 6:01 am
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Not my fault you're getting disturbed on your'e bed YOU STARTED THE SITUATION VIKKI!
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10/12/2013 4:43 am
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And im also very sorry if you think its just a short story.
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10/12/2013 4:34 am
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If you can review this story please review it on a Blog or Here in the Comments (more appreciated when in blog)
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10/12/2013 4:29 am
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If you liked the story please Diamond

"NOTE: THIS IS AN ORIGINAL STORY CREATED BY ChopMinecraftGaming or His MC Name (MClight)
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10/12/2013 5:31 am
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No shiz.
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