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the story of the heroic Brandidge and Liza

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the story of Brandidge: in the jenszanian kingdom, on the island of aphrodon, there was a family... the family of drippinson lived in a little, cozy and nice house. it was a great day in the village, one that day was the festival of konsuns (conpareble with "god" "jehova" or "allah"). on this day they worshipped konsuns, and the storys of him were reanact by local actors. when everybody was buzzy with the festivitys, the drippinsons were buzzy with their recently born baby.--------------------------------------------------------------the baby was healthy, amd the drippinsons were very happy with him. "what should we call it?-i don't know, lets look if he is a boy or a girl" after they looked if it was a boy or a girl, they found out he was a boy. "well... what should we call him?- let's name him Brandidge" after they desided his name, they went to the priest for the birth ritual. the birth ritual was very important for the people of Aphrodon, it was celebrated by the whole village. nomatter who was born, the whole village was happy.------------------------------the parents of Brandidge couldn't find the priest in the chruch, so they went to the square of Aphrodon. the priest was preparing the small stage where he would sings of the holy jenszanian songs. "priest, why are you here and not in the church?-because i need to prepair the stage!-but we have a born child- oh, congrangulations! i will do the ritual amidietly!-thank you so much priest!" the drippinsons and the priest went to the church to do the birth ritual.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ in the church the priest gathered everything he needed to do the birth ritual, it was a big secret what he really used to make the birth ritual complete. he used all kinds of things, some DO are known, like: rose leaves, wine mixed with water and red paint. first he washed the baby with the wine/water (letting him start his life clean) then he dropped one by another, all the rose leaves on him (letting him begin life beutifull) and then the priest mixed up all kinds of stuff (including the paint) and marked him with "ummi"-- after the birth ritual, the Drippinsons carried the baby outside to the square (as tradition) they let all the people touch his fore/head (also as tradition to let him start his life with wisdom) the priest started to sing the national athem, and all the citisans started to sing with him (also as tradition) the anthem sounded full of courage and compassion, the anthem was over 3000 years old and still used. in a nutshell it was the perfect day, a birth and a festival it could not get better!-------------------------------------------------------------- as the years passed by, Brandidge became older. he was not only older, but also stronger, braver and handsomer. he had a lot of friends, they were all very nice and kind. Brandidge likeed to play with them in the old ruins or on the town square. but at home things were not so nice. his parents fought a lot, and they scared the hell out of brandidge (12) and his little sister (8). he and his sister always made up plans on how to escape, but they never really escaped. "one day..." was how the plans always ended.-------- after their parents had another fight, Brandidge and Liza were sick of it. this fight was as always about nothing. all the fights were always about nothing, mostly about stuff in the house that are lost or moved. Brandidge and Liza heared this story so many times. "we don't fight, we just argue" but they KNEW it really was a fight. so they decided this was the last time to say "one day" this was the night they decided wich plan they were going to work out.-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Brandidge and liza waited untill their parents were sleeping so they wouldn't notice their escape. when their parents finally where asleep, they opend the door of their room and walked out. they walked out of the house, leaving everything behind (exept for the things they kept in their bags) they walked to the other side of the island, to the port where all the in/export products were kept. they jumped on one of the deks to a boat, this was it THEY FINALLY WILL ESCAPE. after they pulled up the anker they went a way with the ship. they flouted to open sea, nothing but waves and wind. and Brandidge and Liza were never seen again.------------- many storys have gone trough the island where they are now. dead, on another island, in paradise or something else? nobody will probably ever know for the build version go to: www.planetminecraft.com/project/the-island-of-aphrodon-jenszania-series/
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03/15/2013 5:48 pm
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Nice story, but you should get grammar mistakes out!
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03/17/2013 4:21 pm
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That_guy2000
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if you say where they are, i will change them
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03/18/2013 2:16 am
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TheBigEnderGuy
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Nah, I am to lazy to go and find all your mistakes again, but if you find and correct them it will be a better post!
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03/18/2013 2:28 am
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That_guy2000
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hugh, maybe i let ms muysers check it for me xD
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