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The Story of Steve, Chaper 2

Published Oct 14th, 2011, 10/14/11 11:46 am
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DestinyBrookes's Avatar DestinyBrookes
Level 29 : Expert Creeper Hugger
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Steve woke up and looked around confused, Where was he??

This didn't look like his house... Most of it was missing, "Oh No!" Steve shouted

"I've been griefed!" Steve collapsed on the floor head in hand's, crying... He tried to collect what was left of his house so he could rebuild elsewhere...

He went under the hidden blocks in his floor and found his secret chest the one he kept his valuables in, his only most precious items. There was something above the chest, a sign maybe?

He gasped! the sign read "LOL, Owned" He desperately opened his chest looking inside. Steve collapsed on the floor crying, in a curled up ball.

And all that could be heard from the hole underground was, "My Diamonds... no! how could they take my diamonds...

Chapter 3 Coming soon! (Steve Moves House)

Please post any constructive criticism or encouragement below, also if you want submit some ideas for the next story!

PLEASE 1+ this so more people can see my story series! thanks!

Thanks, Destiny!
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10/16/2011 6:04 am
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Phoenician
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maybe you can make a movie with it???

it doesn't have to be good like The legend of hobo, but just a video to make it more exiting????
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10/15/2011 8:23 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Pixel Painter
leopard_paw2
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Wow, this is well written, but please use good grammar. Because I wasn't sure if the last sentence of the story is or was still in progress. xD
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10/15/2011 1:20 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Architect
Calvoto
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10/15/2011 1:20 pm
Level 16 : Journeyman Architect
Calvoto
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get revenge on the greifer?
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10/14/2011 7:44 pm
Level 30 : Artisan Goblin
Flin_Jager
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Enter Herobrine!! >:D
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10/14/2011 6:47 pm
Level 2 : Apprentice Miner
notch_ate_herobrine
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very cool :-)
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10/14/2011 4:52 pm
Level 29 : Expert Creeper Hugger
DestinyBrookes
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Part three soon anyone?
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10/15/2011 8:26 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Pixel Painter
leopard_paw2
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In part three he should find out that Herobrine destroyed hs house and he goes looking for the sword called Tresmonia. xD Then in chapter 4 he tries to learn the secret move, Scar Slash. That would be awesome. And if you use my idea please give me credit, or I will tell a moderator. xD Lol just joke, if you don't give me credit I will just down vote.
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10/15/2011 8:27 pm
Level 32 : Artisan Pixel Painter
leopard_paw2
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Oh I forgot, 1 UP!
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10/14/2011 2:45 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Technomancer
Vital_D4N_
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i like your idea of puting real minecraft situations in the story. :D good work

check out my adventure diary im working on. maybe to give some ideas.:D

p.s. cant wait for chapter 3.
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