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The SubLiving

Stones... Bricks... Guards...
They are all that I can see...
My eyes won't reach further than the walls supposed to keep us in and the rest of the world out...
I am Michael, a 22 year old robber, wherefor I am in this awful place!

The ground becomes yellow and orange and begins to become a fluid. I climb up the wall and hang half outside of the small opening to fresh air. Then cracks appear in the ground and a white light shines through the cracks!
I hear an explosion-like sound and fall down in the lower crack...

2 days it might've been? I don't know. The time I've spent in this stupid red barried car is atleast not my greatest worry;
How the piggy do I get outof here? Everywhere I look I see stones, bricks, guards... AGAIN! However the guards are dead, I'm still afraid one of their grenades might explode. I climb outof the window and pull one of the guards outof the hole. I grab his guns, grenades and his sandwich. Then I poop, I eat the sandwich, grab my assault rifle and climb into the hole. Now I'm not really much further... Again, I see stones, bricks and guards... But now I see light coming through a tiny hole. I remove the small stones and the light shines into the space. I dont know what is happening to me, it feels like my soul made a fire in my brain and heart... like it became all that I can feel. I jump onto a small dark stone place and fall knock-out. 

Not much later I wake up. I realize that I can't go to the surface, but still have to survive... I try to search more holes, but there is none I can reach right now. I go back into the car and take the lights and start the engine. I walk to the guard-hill and start searching for food and guns. Then I find something remarkable.. A book called 'End of May 23' shows up in the pocket of a guard. It is the month and year this all happened! I grab the book and start reading it:
In may, the end of 2023, humanity will die, just because them thinking this is a lie.
Water will burn, Earth will break apart and Fire will rule. The living will die and join the other deaths. 
No one will fear, nor be as strong as a bear. The humanity will fail, as this never-read tale.

I began thinking about what could of have happened... But I can't get any information outof this message besides everything I already know. And that it was something kept secret from the prisoners and probably also the biggest part of humanity.
Then I hear gunshots. It sounds like it is close. It is an automatic rifle, probably an AK-47 of 1 of those terrorists prisoned in this place. I hold my assault rifle in 1 hand and a knife in my other hand. Then I run to the hole to the place the sound is coming from and I see a body without a head and a hill of bones and blood. I also see a new hole in the room. A big wide hole. There is a small light coming from the room at the other side. I throw a small stone to the light and it becomes dark again. Then I turn on the night vision of my assault rifle and slowly walk into the room. Then a big fell light turns on and everything turns white. Then I see 2 men jumping on me and pushing me to the ground. I see my own assault rifle coming to my head in slowmotion. 

When it almost hits my head Im suddenly in another room. I've probably been knock-out for just a couple minutes, as the place they hit me became a small hill of pain. I lie on the ground, my hands and feets tied to the ground. I look around me and see this looks like a mansion. A nice looking one too! A man starts talking to me

I am Mr. Greepy, but you can call me Greepy. I am pretty much the man this all started with, and also the one who is going to fix this. I can't fix the billions of people that are dead, but I can let everyone left live a happy life. At first I'll tell you what happened. I became theleader of the new company 'Earth Defending Systems'. We were working on clean atomic bombs to attack and/or defend with. There were lots of things we had to change at the atomic bombs, so you understand it wasn't without a risk. We took a big atomic bomb of 15 Gigaton and started working on it in 2018, the same year as it was made. In 2022 we were done with the bomb. And started splitting it up into 15 thousand bullets of 1 megaton. What we didn't know, is that the radiation was stored in Afghanistan, because that was the cheapest, appearantly. We wanted to move the radiation away of there, but it was too late. People died all over asia and the middle east. And then the worst possible thing happened. Our own creation would bring us all to our graves. America decided to 'clear' our terrain, so did Osama Shaders. The mighty king of what was ever the middle east. They went all living in Japan where they decided to get our bomb and claim up stuff they wanted. 
On the terrain there began a war, which wasn't that rare, but then there was a grenade thrown to the bomb. The bomb, lying in pieces, exploded and whole Brazil, where our lab was, became one big hole. we could just escape outof there and fly with our plane to the building next to the prison you were in: A supermarket. We gathered what we could and the police followed us and then the shockwaves came and we went into the shelter where we went expanding, together with the police, shoppers and many other people. We searched more people and got a group of 100s of people. I am not the one with the biggest imagination here, so don't blame me for this name, but we call ourselves: The SubLiving.
I'll give you your roomnumber, job and then I'll untie you. 
Your roomnumber is 37, your job is to search for new people to join us, food and other useful stuff. 
Don't ever let the power of the sun touch your body, because it is stronger than all of us. 

Then the Greepy intied me and I stood up. I looked around and saw everyone just working further. And some other people who came here at the same time as I did. I walk to my room and see it is already tidied by... Someone. I search for food and not even 10 seconds later I see a 2 meter tall cooling box standing next to the furnace. I open it and it has everything in it:
Cheese, bread, meat, wine, bear, ice cream, normal ice, lemonade and alot of other food and drinks!
I take a slice of bread and put some cheese on it. I walk to my bed and let myself fall into it. 
I sleep for ages, dreaming about what my new life could become. I dream about the open grounds where kids play. 
And then my dreams become black. Black forever. 
Never ever since I will wake up. 

"Never touch your greatest love of the life,
as it will turn you outof life."
Credits:
Story writers: 
Dasrafa
EdwinDaBuilder

Image Makers:
Dasrafa

Story Thinkers: 
Dasrafa
EdwinDaBuilder
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10/12/2015 5:30 pm
Level 27 : Expert Nerd
j_0anna
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This is great! I really loved your description of the lava (at the beginning), and how you ended it with mysterious dialogue. Despite a few spelling errors/grammar errors here or there, it's really good! (Sadly you're up against Chron, so...)

I felt the "then I poop" bit was a bit random and unnecessary, and yeah.




CHRON WILL MURDER YOU ALL
lol good luck!!


~jeje, the judge
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