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K, this is a teaser of a story i want to write. But i dont know if its good. So i tought lets post a teaser and wait for the comments!
Here it comes:
Warlife book 1: Dawn of war.
Harvey Johnson, a nightguard at The national gallery. "Honey, i'm heading to work'! 'Bye sweetie"! Harvey stept in his car and drove of. After several minutes of driving he saw Buckingham palace in all it's glory. "Ah, Buckingham palace, one of the most beautiful building in the world". Then he heard the engine of a plane. When he looked out of the window he saw a man jumping out of the plane. Harvey stoped and looked at the man. The man was carrying a object. Harvey grabbed his phone and called the police. "Hello..hello, this is Harvey Johnson, i'm standing at here Buckingham palace and a man with a parachute is trying to land on the roof!
This is the teaser! I hope you liked it and feedback is very apreciated!
Here it comes:
Warlife book 1: Dawn of war.
Harvey Johnson, a nightguard at The national gallery. "Honey, i'm heading to work'! 'Bye sweetie"! Harvey stept in his car and drove of. After several minutes of driving he saw Buckingham palace in all it's glory. "Ah, Buckingham palace, one of the most beautiful building in the world". Then he heard the engine of a plane. When he looked out of the window he saw a man jumping out of the plane. Harvey stoped and looked at the man. The man was carrying a object. Harvey grabbed his phone and called the police. "Hello..hello, this is Harvey Johnson, i'm standing at here Buckingham palace and a man with a parachute is trying to land on the roof!
This is the teaser! I hope you liked it and feedback is very apreciated!
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