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Wolf pup Chapter. 1

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"Hurry up! We're going to miss the naming of the new pup!" yelled a excited pup. Many wolves gathered the middle of a clan. They were all yelling and talking. "I wonder what the new pup looks like!" said a white wolf. "I hope the name I chose is the new pups name!" said another. A grey wolf walked out of a den and hushed the crowd. "Welcome everyone! I hope you're all excited." said the wolf. The crowd started getting excited. They knew that the pup was about to come out. "I am leader Firepelt. I would like to present to you, the newest wolf to the clan!" A black wolf carried out a white pup. The wolf set the pup down and looked at Firepelt. "If you didn't know, my wife gave birth to a beautiful girl pup. The naming ceremony will begin now!" The crowd yelled and roared with excitement. Firepelt walked over to a wood bowl with names in them. He picked up a name and walked over to face the crowd. The crowd hushed and smiled a bit. "And the winning name is, Karma!" The crowd cheered. The wolf pup opened her eyes and looked at the crowd. She yawned and stood up. She didn't fall, which was amazing. The mother looked at her pup and said, "This is amazing, she stood up when she isn't ready. She is extraordinary!" Firepelt took the wolf and put her in the den. The wolves went away and returned to what they were doing.

What do you guys think? I think I did horrible on it, so tell me if I should make the next chapter :P
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njaxnvtt1
09/03/2013 2:36 pm
Level 50 : Grandmaster Answer
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Yeah I don't know why but I subscribed to you just to see you make 20 subs! Bye :P
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icecream72
12/21/2012 9:22 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Artist
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Thanks. I'm still thinking of what if going to happen in the second chapters. I think it should just be sixteen years later and she gets captured by outlaws or something :P
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Gadenlock
12/21/2012 11:33 am
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I like it. It's simlear to the warriors series which I enjoyed. Please continue
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