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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM NEEDED

ZuneCraft's Avatar ZuneCraft9/26/13 2:39 pm
9/27/2013 5:08 pm
MrFang's Avatar MrFang
I just made my first build which is close to being complete. I would really appreciate anyone who can give me some improvements before the download link is made available. I want this to be as good as it can! please help!

build here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/ ... n-2041221/
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ZuneCraft
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CPUNerd
09/27/2013 5:07 pm
Level 20 : Expert Pony
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Sure. Try making the inside more simple. Everyone starts out as a noob in a server, and often times they can't find their way around.
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MrFang
09/27/2013 5:08 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Hero
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^ True that! I hate servers where the spawn is bigger than the map, or where you can't see which way to go.
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Trydar
09/27/2013 4:51 pm
Level 75 : Legendary Architect
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well, it would definitely benefit from some landscaping. and it looks too rigidly symmetrical for what it is. I would stretch and compress some areas to make it less like that. add a wing or unique structural element here and there to make it more rambly and it will give it a lot more character.

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Phrontier
09/27/2013 4:00 pm
Level 6 : Apprentice Explorer
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It looks decent, but here's a few pointers.

You added some depth to your build, that's great, but there isn't all that much depth in the towers, they're also square, try to avoid that. Minecraft is composed of squares which makes square builds generally unappealing to the eye.

It's a very common build design, try to spice it up a bit.

Your block palette is tried and true, the only downside to that being that you see it commonly in builds as well. Don't be afraid to experiment with block colors and palettes to create more interesting builds.

Other than that, it's not bad.
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EmilyCH
09/27/2013 3:17 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Princess
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That is wonderful! Nice job!
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Adam_sharkman999
09/27/2013 3:02 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Skinner
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Too flat area, it looks like you just gave up on bonemealing it, not enough light, not minecrafty trees, some noob's probably gonna jump off an die, But over all Brilliant I'll keep my eyes on you.
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MrBoom
09/27/2013 2:24 pm
Level 15 : Journeyman Archer
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very nice. kinda looks like herobrines mansion...
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Tigertom28
09/26/2013 10:10 pm
Level 1 : New Miner
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I like it, great job!
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Dunlan_Willowbo
09/26/2013 10:07 pm
Level 42 : Master Sailor
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Pretty epic build all in all. I'm no building expert but I would work more on detailing the outside walls a little bit and working on the interior. Good job!
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MrFang
09/26/2013 10:01 pm
Level 62 : High Grandmaster Hero
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That build looks epic, I just suggest that you get a lot more pictures of the inside.
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Ninniy
09/26/2013 9:55 pm
Level 45 : Master Dragonborn
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Awesome!
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-Rusty-
09/26/2013 9:54 pm
Level 40 : Master Procrastinator
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Woh... that's pretty neat

but the inside torch placement is a little off, and the interior is sort of... empty. I recommend filling it and stuff :g
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Seivelath
09/26/2013 9:54 pm
Level 23 : Expert Network
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I truly cannot come up with anything bad. Good job!
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ASF
09/26/2013 9:53 pm
Level 71 : Legendary Pixel Painter
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It's good, but i've just seen so many buildings that look very similar to what you've built, so I guess I'm not a fan of it.
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MrAllyxx
09/26/2013 9:51 pm
Level 17 : Journeyman Zombie
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wow... just wow, that is amazing.
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Leeberator
09/26/2013 9:54 pm
Level 47 : Master Button Pusher
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This.

I can't wait to see what else you can build.
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