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I just made my first build which is close to being complete. I would really appreciate anyone who can give me some improvements before the download link is made available. I want this to be as good as it can! please help!
build here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/ ... n-2041221/
build here: http://www.planetminecraft.com/project/ ... n-2041221/
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Sure. Try making the inside more simple. Everyone starts out as a noob in a server, and often times they can't find their way around.
^ True that! I hate servers where the spawn is bigger than the map, or where you can't see which way to go.
well, it would definitely benefit from some landscaping. and it looks too rigidly symmetrical for what it is. I would stretch and compress some areas to make it less like that. add a wing or unique structural element here and there to make it more rambly and it will give it a lot more character.
It looks decent, but here's a few pointers.
You added some depth to your build, that's great, but there isn't all that much depth in the towers, they're also square, try to avoid that. Minecraft is composed of squares which makes square builds generally unappealing to the eye.
It's a very common build design, try to spice it up a bit.
Your block palette is tried and true, the only downside to that being that you see it commonly in builds as well. Don't be afraid to experiment with block colors and palettes to create more interesting builds.
Other than that, it's not bad.
You added some depth to your build, that's great, but there isn't all that much depth in the towers, they're also square, try to avoid that. Minecraft is composed of squares which makes square builds generally unappealing to the eye.
It's a very common build design, try to spice it up a bit.
Your block palette is tried and true, the only downside to that being that you see it commonly in builds as well. Don't be afraid to experiment with block colors and palettes to create more interesting builds.
Other than that, it's not bad.
That is wonderful! Nice job!
Too flat area, it looks like you just gave up on bonemealing it, not enough light, not minecrafty trees, some noob's probably gonna jump off an die, But over all Brilliant I'll keep my eyes on you.
very nice. kinda looks like herobrines mansion...
I like it, great job!
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Pretty epic build all in all. I'm no building expert but I would work more on detailing the outside walls a little bit and working on the interior. Good job!
That build looks epic, I just suggest that you get a lot more pictures of the inside.
Awesome!
Woh... that's pretty neat
but the inside torch placement is a little off, and the interior is sort of... empty. I recommend filling it and stuff :g
but the inside torch placement is a little off, and the interior is sort of... empty. I recommend filling it and stuff :g
I truly cannot come up with anything bad. Good job!
It's good, but i've just seen so many buildings that look very similar to what you've built, so I guess I'm not a fan of it.
wow... just wow, that is amazing.
This.
I can't wait to see what else you can build.
I can't wait to see what else you can build.