Hi, I'm pale1 and I wanted to see if I could get some feedback on some builds that I have made. I am currently a builder for a server called guncolony and we have a bunch of gun related games on our server so I mostly am building fps maps these days.
Please tell me what you think!
Bonus points if you can tell what video game these maps are from ;)
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Please tell me what you think!
Bonus points if you can tell what video game these maps are from ;)
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I've started work on a new original map (not from any video game) and I added it to the pictures above. Please give feedback and note that it is a work in progress
The layout of the maps looks pretty good, but it is very lacking in detail. To add depth without constricting passageways, I would recommend adding stairs built into the walls. Also, you need to add a lot more block variation (cracked/mossy/stairs in stonebricks).
Also, I have been building a vanilla quakecraft game and some of these maps might work great for that if you wanted to publish them. If you do decide to release them, please send me a message so I can check it out! Thanks!
Also, I have been building a vanilla quakecraft game and some of these maps might work great for that if you wanted to publish them. If you do decide to release them, please send me a message so I can check it out! Thanks!
Thanks for the feedback! Unfortunately I won't be releasing these maps to the public as they are only meant to be playable on the guncolony server. I might have some other works that you may be interested in though! I'll post them in the future if you're interested
The maps provide great detail, but in a FPS, having some form of cover would be ideal. For instance, in an open field, put a hill here, a fence, or even a wall, to prevent campers from dominating, add ways to get up to the roof/other high areas, like collapsed buildings, and ways to flank, like a tunnel.
These maps are remakes of fps maps from a popular game haha! There's tons of cover do not worry. Speaking purely about gameplay these maps work perfectly.
First impressions are extremely good, I can't tell you what games they are from cause I don't play nearly enough shooters.
Maybe early call of duty?
Maybe early call of duty?
Not call of duty! Nice guess tho
Looks great I like the realism.
Looks good! I would recommend adding depth to the builds and more block variants as others have mentioned before, as I've noticed your builds are kinda square / boxy. Otherwise it looks great! Keep up the good work
Depth can be hard to add sometimes with these sorts of maps since adding depth to a wall removes space from the interior. If the interior is too small it's bad for combat. I hope that makes sense. I do agree though, if I could add more depth to my builds I totally would.
Depth can be hard to add sometimes with these sorts of maps since adding depth to a wall removes space from the interior. If the interior is too small it's bad for combat. I hope that makes sense. I do agree though, if I could add more depth to my builds I totally would.
I would recommend simply building in different shapes. Instead of a box, why not go for a T-shape? or something like that. As for depth, simply making the depth between 2 blocks adds a good portion towards it. If space is an issue, simply making a larger area could be a resolution. If you'd like I can send you some examples of what I've built if you're confused on what I mean. Simply throwing out suggestions, feel free to do whatever you feel is right!
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Looks quite good, keep up the great work!
ThatTonyboo has a point, but besides that they really are some great builds! The only thing that bothers me is, why is the car made out of wood? xD I'm kidding.
We have a resource pack on guncolony that makes jungle wood look more like a stone texture lol. Sorry if it looks weird!
No no it looks fine!
They look nice, maybe add some variations in block usage and some "noise" (I believe its called that, I'm a crap builder). Otherwise, nice!