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Are my lyrics good?
So, it's almost 2 where I live, and of course, instead of going to sleep, I decide to listen to Imagine Dragon's "Radioactive".
Which caused me to write fan-made lyrics, based off a griefer trying to grief a server.
The lyrics are in the spoiler. Are they good? Does anything need to be changed?
I don't plan on making an actual music video or anything, I just felt in a song mood, and I want to see if it were an actual MC parody, if it'd be a good one.
Which caused me to write fan-made lyrics, based off a griefer trying to grief a server.
The lyrics are in the spoiler. Are they good? Does anything need to be changed?
I don't plan on making an actual music video or anything, I just felt in a song mood, and I want to see if it were an actual MC parody, if it'd be a good one.
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Oooooh~~
Oooooh~
Oooooh~
I'm waking up to dropped entinies
All of the dirt and cobblestone blocks I see.
I start to breath in the mornin' air
~Breath in~
~Breath out~
He's been breaking into
other's stuff
Then he leaves with no evidence
This is it,
the server's done with it
Wohoh
Players waking up
I start to trace his steps,
try to see where else he's been.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Wooooh
Wooooh
He's ready to grief you,
ready to grief you.
Wooooh
Wooooh
He's ready to grief you,
ready to grief you.
Admins raise their gaurd
for strange stuff.
There's trying hard to find him
I suppose.
They're adding grief protect
to fit right in.
Wohoh
He's breaking into
other's stuff
then he leaves with no evidence.
This is it,
the server's done with it.
Wohoh.
Players waking up
I start to trace his steps
try to see where else he's been.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age?
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
All server's leave,
some never die.
But this griefer's trying hard
to kill this server's insides.
Player's waking up.
I start to trace his steps
try to see where else he's been.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
Oooooh~
Oooooh~
I'm waking up to dropped entinies
All of the dirt and cobblestone blocks I see.
I start to breath in the mornin' air
~Breath in~
~Breath out~
He's been breaking into
other's stuff
Then he leaves with no evidence
This is it,
the server's done with it
Wohoh
Players waking up
I start to trace his steps,
try to see where else he's been.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Wooooh
Wooooh
He's ready to grief you,
ready to grief you.
Wooooh
Wooooh
He's ready to grief you,
ready to grief you.
Admins raise their gaurd
for strange stuff.
There's trying hard to find him
I suppose.
They're adding grief protect
to fit right in.
Wohoh
He's breaking into
other's stuff
then he leaves with no evidence.
This is it,
the server's done with it.
Wohoh.
Players waking up
I start to trace his steps
try to see where else he's been.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age?
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
All server's leave,
some never die.
But this griefer's trying hard
to kill this server's insides.
Player's waking up.
I start to trace his steps
try to see where else he's been.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Is this the server's new age?
Server's new age.
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
Woooooh
Woooooh
He's ready to grief you
ready to grief you.
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Moved. Please post your threads in the correct section, thanks
It's pretty good I sang it along with the actual song and just some minor parts don't fit in
lol i made a old person one of this song
Can I join?
What do you mean 'join?'
Uh.. I would kinda change the line where it says "Is this the server's new age? Server's age" to something like....... "Everyone starts to rage, They start to rage" And "Ready to rock you" to "Ready to troll you" I hope dis helped you, no hate plz
~Da Bear
~Da Bear
Well,could you tell me what parts I could change?
Uh, too much randomness.
As it is, it is indeed random. but just try writing down the lyrics of some recently popular 'songs'.
I think you should add a tune at the very least. try using Magix music maker or something similar.
I think you should add a tune at the very least. try using Magix music maker or something similar.
