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Dewilcho
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Here is some information about my story !
I was born in 1998 , as everyone knows .. My mother and father lived happily until his right great-grandfather did not they screwed up the relationship and not the orders of my father what to do .. My parents split up after I was born , I do not Tolk years .. My mother , my grandmother and my grandfather took care of me barely barely .. In this life of each family their child learns everything ready , and I mean that there are 2 persons and parents have difficulties and almost no problems , at least not as much as our Well, dear folks .. I am in this life I've learned how to stick a nail in a -snip- board .. And -snip- , and will say ? ? Not only , but -snip- to tell you except to go -snip- yourself and get out of here .. Thus, after time passes , I 've been in the situation 1-2 grade, my mother began a new life with another man were happy .. happy until he showed his horns My mother entered the hospital before giving birth to my sister , as safe methods of birth does not happen earlier .. So I go to my grandmother , and a friend of my mother stays in our house .. Pass the time in which to be born to my sister , she was born .. We return to the house, going to the store and see kfo .. 400 lev versions for guys michove etc. (alcohol) .. My mother , from where to get the money out in the first place if not for my sister who was born , whether it is alcohol that her father drank ? ? But not only that .. Behind the doors throughout the house , his mother was superimposed cents and red thread for kfo ? Well to this day I wonder .. Apparently magic! One of the biggest injuries are my memories of my great-grandmother and my uncle how the ghost of a word to me .. Terrible is not it? I was only six years to say this injury ! We continue with a life- line to call it ... My sister became a little golyamka began to walk, so I had fun .. that does not give dust to fall on it in one word ! But one day ... Big man , the father of my sister .. Took scolded by my mother from Tolk great power, that dude is big and manly , split mouth and took my mother .. All that I've seen from a stupid lock , opened the door and kfo to hear ? Get inside -snip- not to uchistya and you Hah ... My mother realized he left .. After a while my other great-grandfather died ... Do you wonder kfa connection has 3ma man in my childhood? Well, 2004,2006,2008 - these are the years in which they died - uncle , grandmother, grandfather .. How so? hmm .. Curses perhaps? or destiny! After a while , the father of my sister and mom were reunited , but at that moment that I had little children's excitement and excesses .. It nettles winter and I nudged her -snip- and around the body, and made me sit on his knees with hands dignati . Hmm, interesting that it? Well, no, many times even I had prespivanya in the woods because our house was near the slope of the forest, in pajamas to 6 years in the woods? Super kfo . Next attempt to show man as the father of my sister was as a daily discipline me , beat , maltratirashe and more .. Time passed , my mother finally realized again and wanted to live with my sister and my grandmother ( mother's mom), wished happiness and not ruin her life , watching the beating her child in front , and how it almost kill her .. Well, get to - grade 5 , in which I began to hallucinate and not be afraid of the dark, as any small child and I , but rounded to 6 class , I think not overcome , still out there hang this fear , and still unlocked .. Reached the point where I was already a big start to communicate with more people to go a lot of places with a lot of people .. But not right .. Pretty patina about them , but that's another topic Well, you still think that this is a status that make up or just Chamomile it to I mean that? It was just a status before, but you made me pour out my soul and tears as I write this ..All i wanted to say.. In this story is.. I were a big fan of video games, today i am a big fan too.. I have a youtube channel.. But all in my life is broken, so as the story so and the youtube channel ... I hope you're happy , good night !
I was born in 1998 , as everyone knows .. My mother and father lived happily until his right great-grandfather did not they screwed up the relationship and not the orders of my father what to do .. My parents split up after I was born , I do not Tolk years .. My mother , my grandmother and my grandfather took care of me barely barely .. In this life of each family their child learns everything ready , and I mean that there are 2 persons and parents have difficulties and almost no problems , at least not as much as our Well, dear folks .. I am in this life I've learned how to stick a nail in a -snip- board .. And -snip- , and will say ? ? Not only , but -snip- to tell you except to go -snip- yourself and get out of here .. Thus, after time passes , I 've been in the situation 1-2 grade, my mother began a new life with another man were happy .. happy until he showed his horns My mother entered the hospital before giving birth to my sister , as safe methods of birth does not happen earlier .. So I go to my grandmother , and a friend of my mother stays in our house .. Pass the time in which to be born to my sister , she was born .. We return to the house, going to the store and see kfo .. 400 lev versions for guys michove etc. (alcohol) .. My mother , from where to get the money out in the first place if not for my sister who was born , whether it is alcohol that her father drank ? ? But not only that .. Behind the doors throughout the house , his mother was superimposed cents and red thread for kfo ? Well to this day I wonder .. Apparently magic! One of the biggest injuries are my memories of my great-grandmother and my uncle how the ghost of a word to me .. Terrible is not it? I was only six years to say this injury ! We continue with a life- line to call it ... My sister became a little golyamka began to walk, so I had fun .. that does not give dust to fall on it in one word ! But one day ... Big man , the father of my sister .. Took scolded by my mother from Tolk great power, that dude is big and manly , split mouth and took my mother .. All that I've seen from a stupid lock , opened the door and kfo to hear ? Get inside -snip- not to uchistya and you Hah ... My mother realized he left .. After a while my other great-grandfather died ... Do you wonder kfa connection has 3ma man in my childhood? Well, 2004,2006,2008 - these are the years in which they died - uncle , grandmother, grandfather .. How so? hmm .. Curses perhaps? or destiny! After a while , the father of my sister and mom were reunited , but at that moment that I had little children's excitement and excesses .. It nettles winter and I nudged her -snip- and around the body, and made me sit on his knees with hands dignati . Hmm, interesting that it? Well, no, many times even I had prespivanya in the woods because our house was near the slope of the forest, in pajamas to 6 years in the woods? Super kfo . Next attempt to show man as the father of my sister was as a daily discipline me , beat , maltratirashe and more .. Time passed , my mother finally realized again and wanted to live with my sister and my grandmother ( mother's mom), wished happiness and not ruin her life , watching the beating her child in front , and how it almost kill her .. Well, get to - grade 5 , in which I began to hallucinate and not be afraid of the dark, as any small child and I , but rounded to 6 class , I think not overcome , still out there hang this fear , and still unlocked .. Reached the point where I was already a big start to communicate with more people to go a lot of places with a lot of people .. But not right .. Pretty patina about them , but that's another topic Well, you still think that this is a status that make up or just Chamomile it to I mean that? It was just a status before, but you made me pour out my soul and tears as I write this ..All i wanted to say.. In this story is.. I were a big fan of video games, today i am a big fan too.. I have a youtube channel.. But all in my life is broken, so as the story so and the youtube channel ... I hope you're happy , good night !
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Umm... Do you speak English? I really can't tell, it looks like you just ran this through a translator or something... Not trying to be mean, but seriously... Oh, and from what I can understand, how does this have anything to do with Minecraft? (not like I'm the first guy to say that, but its still valid)
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its in the general disscousion section witch where you can post stuff not minecraft related or noting that goes with the other sections
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Personal issues should be kept personal.
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wwhhaa?
sorry, I couldn't read this.
I don't think this the sort of writing to put on a minecraft site. Maybe tumblr or deviantART?
sorry, I couldn't read this.
I don't think this the sort of writing to put on a minecraft site. Maybe tumblr or deviantART?
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This isn't just a minecraft site, you know.
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My attempt at making it grammar-like and punctuating it:
Here is some information about my story!
I was born in 1998, and as everyone knows, my mother and father lived happily until his great-grandfather didn't like my mom. They screwed up the relationship and ordered my father what to do. My parents split up after I was born, I didn't talk for years. My mother, my grandmother and my grandfather took care of me barely. In my life, each child needs to be ready, and I mean that. There are 2 people and most parents have difficulties and almost no problems, at least not as much as my parents. Well, dear folks, I am in this life I've learned how to stick a nail in a board, and well, what will be said? I was told to go screw myself, and get out of there. After time passes, I'm in the 1st - 2nd grade, my mother began a new life with another man. They were happy... happy until he showed his horns. My mother entered the hospital before giving birth to my sister, and safe methods of birth did not happen earlier. So I go to my grandmother's house, and a friend of my mother stays in our house. Pass the time in which my sister was born. We returned to our old house, going to the store and seeing alchohol. My mother had no idea where to get the money out in the first place, and my sister was born, but it was alcohol that her father drank. But not only that. Behind the doors throughout the house, his mother was superimposed cents and red thread for alchohol? Well to this day I wonder .. Apparently magic! One of the biggest injuries are my memories of my great-grandmother and my uncle how the ghost of a word to me .. Terrible is not it? I was only six years to say this injury ! We continue with a life- line to call it ... My sister began to walk, so I had fun .. that does not give dust to fall on it in one word ! But one day ... Big man , the father of my sister .. Took scold by my mother from talk, it did great power. That dude is big and manly, split mouth and took my mother .. All that I've seen from a stupid lock , opened the door and drank alchohol. Get inside, my mother told me... My mother realized he left.. After a while my other great-grandfather died ... Do you wonder how alchohol connections has men in my childhood? Well, 2004,2006,2008 - these are the years in which they died - uncle , grandmother, grandfather .. How so? hmm .. Curses perhaps? or destiny! After a while , the father of my sister and mom were reunited , but at that moment that I had little children's excitement and excesses .. It nettles winter and I nudged her in the ass and around the body, and made me sit on his knees with hands dignati . Hmm, interesting that it? Well, no, many times even I had prespivanya in the woods because our house was near the slope of the forest, in pajamas to 6 years in the woods? Super kfo . Next attempt to show man as the father of my sister was as a daily discipline me , beat , maltratirashe and more .. Time passed , my mother finally realized again and wanted to live with my sister and my grandmother ( mother's mom), wished happiness and not ruin her life , watching the beating her child in front , and how it almost kill her .. Well, get to - grade 5 , in which I began to hallucinate and not be afraid of the dark, as any small child and I , but rounded to 6 class , I think not overcome , still out there hang this fear , and still unlocked .. Reached the point where I was already a big start to communicate with more people to go a lot of places with a lot of people .. But not right .. Pretty patina about them , but that's another topic Well, you still think that this is a status that make up or just Chamomile it to I mean that? It was just a status before, but you made me pour out my soul and tears as I write this ..All i wanted to say.. In this story is.. I were a big fan of video games, today i am a big fan too.. I have a youtube channel.. But all in my life is broken, so as the story so and the youtube channel ... I hope you're happy , good night !
I gave up halfway through, sorry.
Here is some information about my story!
I was born in 1998, and as everyone knows, my mother and father lived happily until his great-grandfather didn't like my mom. They screwed up the relationship and ordered my father what to do. My parents split up after I was born, I didn't talk for years. My mother, my grandmother and my grandfather took care of me barely. In my life, each child needs to be ready, and I mean that. There are 2 people and most parents have difficulties and almost no problems, at least not as much as my parents. Well, dear folks, I am in this life I've learned how to stick a nail in a board, and well, what will be said? I was told to go screw myself, and get out of there. After time passes, I'm in the 1st - 2nd grade, my mother began a new life with another man. They were happy... happy until he showed his horns. My mother entered the hospital before giving birth to my sister, and safe methods of birth did not happen earlier. So I go to my grandmother's house, and a friend of my mother stays in our house. Pass the time in which my sister was born. We returned to our old house, going to the store and seeing alchohol. My mother had no idea where to get the money out in the first place, and my sister was born, but it was alcohol that her father drank. But not only that. Behind the doors throughout the house, his mother was superimposed cents and red thread for alchohol? Well to this day I wonder .. Apparently magic! One of the biggest injuries are my memories of my great-grandmother and my uncle how the ghost of a word to me .. Terrible is not it? I was only six years to say this injury ! We continue with a life- line to call it ... My sister began to walk, so I had fun .. that does not give dust to fall on it in one word ! But one day ... Big man , the father of my sister .. Took scold by my mother from talk, it did great power. That dude is big and manly, split mouth and took my mother .. All that I've seen from a stupid lock , opened the door and drank alchohol. Get inside, my mother told me... My mother realized he left.. After a while my other great-grandfather died ... Do you wonder how alchohol connections has men in my childhood? Well, 2004,2006,2008 - these are the years in which they died - uncle , grandmother, grandfather .. How so? hmm .. Curses perhaps? or destiny! After a while , the father of my sister and mom were reunited , but at that moment that I had little children's excitement and excesses .. It nettles winter and I nudged her in the ass and around the body, and made me sit on his knees with hands dignati . Hmm, interesting that it? Well, no, many times even I had prespivanya in the woods because our house was near the slope of the forest, in pajamas to 6 years in the woods? Super kfo . Next attempt to show man as the father of my sister was as a daily discipline me , beat , maltratirashe and more .. Time passed , my mother finally realized again and wanted to live with my sister and my grandmother ( mother's mom), wished happiness and not ruin her life , watching the beating her child in front , and how it almost kill her .. Well, get to - grade 5 , in which I began to hallucinate and not be afraid of the dark, as any small child and I , but rounded to 6 class , I think not overcome , still out there hang this fear , and still unlocked .. Reached the point where I was already a big start to communicate with more people to go a lot of places with a lot of people .. But not right .. Pretty patina about them , but that's another topic Well, you still think that this is a status that make up or just Chamomile it to I mean that? It was just a status before, but you made me pour out my soul and tears as I write this ..All i wanted to say.. In this story is.. I were a big fan of video games, today i am a big fan too.. I have a youtube channel.. But all in my life is broken, so as the story so and the youtube channel ... I hope you're happy , good night !
I gave up halfway through, sorry.
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Oh boy, run-on sentences! MY FAVORITE!
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I read the first two sentences, noticed a forum mod had already swooped and removed a fair amount of profanity, then stopped reading because it's a single block of text.
Proper punctuation and paragraphs, please.
Proper punctuation and paragraphs, please.
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I read the first sentence "Here is some information about my story !" then I stoped reading.
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You could just make a draw my life and link it here. It would be so much easier to understand.
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true that.
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I feel like I just read a f-in novel god damn.
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DewilchoHere is some information about my story !
I was born in 1998 , as everyone knows .. My mother and father lived happily until his right great-grandfather did not they screwed up the relationship and not the orders of my father what to do .. My parents split up after I was born , I do not Tolk years .. My mother , my grandmother and my grandfather took care of me barely barely .. In this life of each family their child learns everything ready , and I mean that there are 2 persons and parents have difficulties and almost no problems , at least not as much as our Well, dear folks .. I am in this life I've learned how to stick a nail in a fucking board .. And kfo , and will say ? ? Not only , but kfo to tell you except to go fuck yourself and get out of here .. Thus, after time passes , I 've been in the situation 1-2 grade, my mother began a new life with another man were happy .. happy until he showed his horns My mother entered the hospital before giving birth to my sister , as safe methods of birth does not happen earlier .. So I go to my grandmother , and a friend of my mother stays in our house .. Pass the time in which to be born to my sister , she was born .. We return to the house, going to the store and see kfo .. 400 lev versions for guys michove etc. (alcohol) .. My mother , from where to get the money out in the first place if not for my sister who was born , whether it is alcohol that her father drank ? ? But not only that .. Behind the doors throughout the house , his mother was superimposed cents and red thread for kfo ? Well to this day I wonder .. Apparently magic! One of the biggest injuries are my memories of my great-grandmother and my uncle how the ghost of a word to me .. Terrible is not it? I was only six years to say this injury ! We continue with a life- line to call it ... My sister became a little golyamka began to walk, so I had fun .. that does not give dust to fall on it in one word ! But one day ... Big man , the father of my sister .. Took scolded by my mother from Tolk great power, that dude is big and manly , split mouth and took my mother .. All that I've seen from a stupid lock , opened the door and kfo to hear ? Get inside bastard not to uchistya and you Hah ... My mother realized he left .. After a while my other great-grandfather died ... Do you wonder kfa connection has 3ma man in my childhood? Well, 2004,2006,2008 - these are the years in which they died - uncle , grandmother, grandfather .. How so? hmm .. Curses perhaps? or destiny! After a while , the father of my sister and mom were reunited , but at that moment that I had little children's excitement and excesses .. It nettles winter and I nudged her in the ass and around the body, and made me sit on his knees with hands dignati . Hmm, interesting that it? Well, no, many times even I had prespivanya in the woods because our house was near the slope of the forest, in pajamas to 6 years in the woods? Super kfo . Next attempt to show man as the father of my sister was as a daily discipline me , beat , maltratirashe and more .. Time passed , my mother finally realized again and wanted to live with my sister and my grandmother ( mother's mom), wished happiness and not ruin her life , watching the beating her child in front , and how it almost kill her .. Well, get to - grade 5 , in which I began to hallucinate and not be afraid of the dark, as any small child and I , but rounded to 6 class , I think not overcome , still out there hang this fear , and still unlocked .. Reached the point where I was already a big start to communicate with more people to go a lot of places with a lot of people .. But not right .. Pretty patina about them , but that's another topic Well, you still think that this is a status that make up or just Chamomile it to I mean that? It was just a status before, but you made me pour out my soul and tears as I write this ..All i wanted to say.. In this story is.. I were a big fan of video games, today i am a big fan too.. I have a youtube channel.. But all in my life is broken, so as the story so and the youtube channel ... I hope you're happy , good night !
I like your grammar, also thanks a dozen for letting us all know your insanely interesting life story.
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Thanks for sharing your life story with us, I know some people would like to get it out. It seems you have a tough life.
But as everybody said, I would've read it completely past the first 10 sentences if there was punctuation. It was too hard to read, so I skipped half of it. Sorry.
But as everybody said, I would've read it completely past the first 10 sentences if there was punctuation. It was too hard to read, so I skipped half of it. Sorry.
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Euhm, dont know what to say...
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SuperPurplePersonI feel like I'm trying to read a dialogue script from Boomhower of King of the Hill.
Oh how I laughed at this, it could not be more true or relevant, how wonderful.
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This was god-awful to read. There's a spelling error every other 'word', followed by majestic grammatical screw-ups. Could you even understand that yourself? If someone were to hand you that, could YOU even read it?
I feel like I'm trying to read a dialogue script from Boomhower of King of the Hill.
I feel like I'm trying to read a dialogue script from Boomhower of King of the Hill.
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'u' Is a more than acceptable re-wording of 'you', when used on the Internet. Just like all the acronyms and stuff.
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It was funny that when talking about becoming an engish teacher they said u instead of you. It is funny.
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tl;dr
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Descheemaeker Tomofficial minecraft fan site
This is not official site. This was made by fans of MC, not Mojang themselves.
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Punctuation is key.
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Nice, but I cant really read it properly, but I get the Idea.
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I read the first 5 lines, and then I stopped caring about it.
This shouldn't be on the official minecraft fan site, because it's a minecraft site...
Besides, swearing words are not appropriate.
This shouldn't be on the official minecraft fan site, because it's a minecraft site...
Besides, swearing words are not appropriate.
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If this is a sincere post of how difficult your life was, the lack of punctuation makes this difficult to read. Very difficult. 3 lines is as far as I got.
The lack of punctuation makes it seem like you are trying to appear like some sort of tough guy.
The whole thing is confusing.
Have a good day.
The lack of punctuation makes it seem like you are trying to appear like some sort of tough guy.
The whole thing is confusing.
Have a good day.
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I agree with you!
I'm currently applying to be an English teacher, and let me just say, that would fail u in my class. In third grade.
I'm currently applying to be an English teacher, and let me just say, that would fail u in my class. In third grade.
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That grammar would give an A- instead of an A+! you, not u.
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I like how you say that you are applying to be an engilsh teacher, and you would fail him, yet you still use "u" instead of "you". made me laugh a bit.
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I was just thinking the same thing.
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I blame the interwebs
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Curse you interwebs!
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Make a tumblr account, thats probably a better place to post this;)
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That was uh, nice... But I have 2 things...
1: why did you post this here... on a Minecraft site?... *faceearth*
and
2. Because of number 1 no one will read half of this story...
So... No
1: why did you post this here... on a Minecraft site?... *faceearth*
and
2. Because of number 1 no one will read half of this story...
So... No
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You are some kind of stupid, aren't you?
This is in general discussion, where you can post about whatever you want. Doesn't have to be related to minecraft.
This is in general discussion, where you can post about whatever you want. Doesn't have to be related to minecraft.
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Why did you post this, no one really needed to know...
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okkkkay....... How does this relate to minecraft again?
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It's in general discussion, you can talk about anything you want.
I honestly hate when people say this, it's really annoying..
I honestly hate when people say this, it's really annoying..
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-Rusty-That was uh, nice... But I have 2 things...
1: why did you post this here... on a Minecraft site?... *faceearth*
and
2. Because of number 1 no one will read half of this story...
So... No
Its under general discussion... people its everything not related to minecraft...
And i read whole story
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Well that's uh. Well.
