"Hi I'm TechnicolorDalek and I have a server. I'm good at redstone. Come join me at xxx.xxx.xxx.xxx:25565 if you'd like to see some of my stuff in action."

Not an advert

That's a rather short introduction wouldn't you say?

Also, this post is in the wrong section. Next time please post it in the servers section on the forums.

~Grave

welcome to the forums hayden XD seems as if this is your first post. So I'm assuming your new XD

Just a hint, having a roblox avatar on a minecraft forum site will get you... hated by most... just, it would be a good idea if you changed it

Saying 'The ip for my server if you're interested' is not begging for players.

And welcome, please take a look through our site and submission rules if you have not already done so:
official-site-rules-t1040.html
rules-submissions-t40929.html

Kid, as harsh as this may sound, this post is kind of a stupid move. Never, ever beg for players on your server. Get your friends to like your server so that they can tell their friends about how good it is. If you beg for players, that makes people think that your server is NOT good, which leads people away from it.
Keep that in mind.