I might adjust the position of the drum roll but just remember this is only a preview and not the full track, I was just looking for some quick feedback before I start editing again, I plan to go back and add more to the bass drop and fix the build along with a new verse after the drop.
I used Abelton Suite, and no I will not be using Virtual DJ to edit my tracks I'm guessing what you mean is have the build up synth go longer? because as it goes on it gets much faster.
but what pieces do you suggest I loop. Give time marks (Example. 45 - 1:15)