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Raven's Rest- Discontinued

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LaLaLuna's Avatar LaLaLuna
Level 31 : Artisan Architect
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Because of reasons I cannot go into, this project is discontinued.


A floating city I am building for a server I am currently building for. First time WE a tree. Feedback and advice appreciated.

City name: Raven's Rest
Tree's name: Oakenshade (may change for better name)

Will Include-

Farmlands (WIP)
Shops
Bar & Inn
Housing district
Library
Wizard's Tower
Gardens
Church
Trading Post
Fishing village below (WIP)
Boat docks (WIP)
Maybe sewers
Towers
Floating islands around it
Windmill (Completed!)
(maybe more to come)

La La Luna
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New pictures!!! : by LaLaLuna 09/03/2015 4:04:00 amSep 3rd, 2015

Just added new pictures of the tree and the garden around it. Did a lot of new work in that area. I wanted to make it look more natural and beautiful with dimmed lighting. I chose to take most of the pictures at night because the shaders look fantastic. I hope everyone likes the changes to the tree. I kept some of the old pictures for comparison. Please let me know what you think about all of this. Thanks for viewing!

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Archaea
08/19/2015 10:39 am
Level 19 : Journeyman Architect
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Absolutely love the tree! The design looks great and its not just straight up and down like more trees. I really like how it leans one way just to lean back the other. The brances are great too starting thicker and teparing off. However the leaves could leave a little to be desired. A little more variation in the layout of the leaves and maybe some drooping like a willow. Vines are good as well. 
And the lights are fantastiics as well! They sort of remind me of a futuristic setting but yet its blended with the medieval era. I think that these could go together well but maybe have stray glowstone blocks floating around the rings and these "chunks" could be of various sizes. Kinda like an asteroid field but miniature
I do understand this project isn't complete yet but just trying to offer the best constructive criticism I can. Tanks for sharing this build and am looking forward to seeing more of this amazing build! Good Luck!
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LaLaLuna
08/19/2015 8:51 pm
Level 31 : Artisan Architect
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Thanks for the wonderful advice and criticisms! I will definitely take your words into my work. I had some ideas of how to improve, but your suggestions really helped! I hope you will enjoy my completed project! :D

Rara
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Archaea
08/19/2015 9:36 pm
Level 19 : Journeyman Architect
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No problem! Glad I could be of service! :)
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GrayRemnant
08/16/2015 6:56 pm
Level 64 : High Grandmaster Senpai
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What a cool idea!  I love it so far!  :D
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Veils
08/16/2015 10:39 am
Level 36 : Artisan Network
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nice tree! great work)
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