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robotmonkey5's Avatar robotmonkey5
Level 12 : Journeyman Engineer
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This is the first ship I actually completed on Minecraft; although I never got around to naming her, I am nonetheless proud. She's very small, only 5 decks, but has a few weapons, water lifts, and some rooms to explore; 3 senior command rooms, a briefing room, lounge, medical area, armoury, crew barracks and engineering areas.
Rate, comment, critique and enjoy!
-Robot

5/1/12- added many new features and changes. New schematic, too.
Will be working on a "damaged" version, as they are fun to make.

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Should mention it looks best with Plaff656's Sci Fi texture pack.
So use it.
(Find it here: texture pack)
CreditPlaff656
Progress90% complete
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Update #1 : by robotmonkey5 01/06/2012 5:04:47 pmJan 6th, 2012

Added a name, new piston functions, improved hull symmetry, performed a couple of glowstone alterations, and added a few new hatches.
Perhaps more, but unsure, but opinions would be nice :)

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robotmonkey5
01/09/2012 12:09 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Engineer
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There is a temptation to double or triple the size of this, as I like it, but I want it to be more... long distance travel-like. So more decks, more realistically divided barracks, bigger bridge, more functional engineering (Because I like to play with switches and see stuff happen, dammit all!) And any ideas for new rooms/features would be wonderful, you beautiful people.
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Cygnus656
01/07/2012 2:14 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Mage
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I messed around with your hull design, and made it more sleek. I can upload the world file if you want me to. A ship of that size does NOT need a hanger that large. Even my USS Zenith's hanger can't fit a shuttle. I removed it, and the struts supporting the nacelles, then I elongated the neck of the ship. I didn't have the time to make the "arrow" bit longer though.
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robotmonkey5
01/09/2012 11:56 am
Level 12 : Journeyman Engineer
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World file would be great!

Cheers, I do appreciate the feedback, even though this is older, skills haven't improved much, but it's good to know that there's at least something to work on in there :P

The hanger was more an experiment, in honesty, to see how high I could get water to fall and redstone in a piston system for on/off, too.
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Cygnus656
01/09/2012 3:35 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Mage
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K, I'm working on it. Also, I haven't made many changes to the inside, so you may want to work on that when I get it to you.
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robotmonkey5
01/09/2012 5:53 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Engineer
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Will do!

Any particular thoughts on an addition to add?
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Cygnus656
01/09/2012 9:31 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Mage
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The armory is very large for a crew that size, so unless you have room for an army, you shouldn't have ammo for an army (warship regardless). I didn't check to see if you had a transporter room, and that's always a good thing to have. Also, the alarm should trigger a noteblock, although the piston thing was cool. Overall, you just need to maximize space, and reorganize the layout a bit to have the most rooms with a purpose as possible. (Also, for weapons systems, (if you are into them, I'm not so much) you could try lava beams activated by pistons (actually I don't recommend that, it's not my style).
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Cygnus656
01/07/2012 1:51 pm
Level 52 : Grandmaster Mage
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I suggest elongating the "arrowhead" design. She seems to be a fine craft, but her saucer section/arrowhead section should really be extended for a much fuller look, and it would supply more space. I'm about to download it to check out the interior.
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salapalmer
01/07/2012 11:59 am
Level 33 : Artisan Ranger
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Is it okay if i use this in a "SpaceWorld" project i am working on, its a collection of space stuff you and many other have built! so if you could vertify it would be great! I will give diamonds! The creators of the procekt will be wrote in the project!
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robotmonkey5
01/07/2012 12:13 pm
Level 12 : Journeyman Engineer
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Absolutely! It would be great to have some publicity :P But yes, you are welcome to use it so long as there's credit.
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salapalmer
01/07/2012 2:57 pm
Level 33 : Artisan Ranger
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Thanks for that!
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