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Clatterbones - Contest - Long Backstory

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avatar WillFrost
Level 50 : Grandmaster Pixel Painter
Posted 06/11/12 10:36:32 am , last updated: 06/14/12 11:06:28 am
06/11/12

My skin for the skin contest, it took about 1 hour to make.

 

BACKSTORY

There was once a boy called Jim, who's father was a pirate. Jim wanted to become a musician, but unfortunately his father made him become a pirate.

 

In his third voyage, his ship was attacked by another group of pirates, who captured all the crew, before sinking the ship. Jim found himself locked in a small cell, his hands in manacles.

 

Years of being a pirate had made Jim strong though. Slowly, over the next few days, he cut off his own hands, then broke out of his cell, and snuck through the ship to the captains quarters.

 

On the way, he found some hooks used for hanging up nets, so he broke them off the walls, and attached them to his wrists.

 

When he got to the captains quarters, he peered in through a hole in the door, and he was shocked. Before him was his father. He broke down the doors, leapt at him, and knocked him to the ground.

 

"Why would you attack and lock up your own son!" he shouted at his father, crouched over him. "Let me explain" pleaded his father, glancing desperately about. He tried to pull himself up, but he couldn't.

 

Jim looked down at his father. His father looked back up at him, then smiled. Jim was shocked for a second, suddenly, his father rolled to the side, knocking Jim towards the large windows in the captain's quarters. With one kick, his father pushed him through the glass, and into the sea.

 

Jim should have died that day, and technically he did, but as his flesh was eaten away by the fish, his skeleton came to life. He stood up, now under the sea, and smiled, as best as a skeleton could.

 

He then looked up, an saw the hull of a ship above him. Swimming upwards with difficulty, he reached the hull, then used his hook hands to scale the outside, wielding then like ice picks.

 

Once up, he snuck through the ship, tapping away a tune on his ribs in an absent minded sort of way. Smashing through the door of the captains quarters, he saw a man, not his father, standing before him.

 

This was not the right ship. Oh well. He killed the captain, threw him out of the window, then leapt back into the sea, and set off, walking along the seabed.

 

He has now become a myth, a legend  , whatever you care to name him. He wanders through the sea, seeking boats and captains, playing tunes on his ribs. Captains across the seas grow fearful of the tuneful clacking, lest they be the next victim of Clatterbones.

 

One day, he will have his revenge...

 

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UPDATE #1: I redid some of the shading, brightened the skin up a bit, and made the colours a little more interesting.

UPDATE #2: I recoloured all the bone parts of the skin, redid the underneath part of the head layer, and made the coat a bit lighter and less red.

UPDATE #3: Redid the metal on the hooks and belt. Made the center of the trousers a bit darker.

UPDATE #4: Gold trimmed clothing :D

Additional Details

Progress:
100
Gender:Male
Tags:Clatter, Click, Bones, Skeleton, Skele, Skull, Pirate, Jim, Musician, Tapping, Musical, Evil, Bottom, The, Sea, Ocean, Animal, UPDATED, Shiny, New, Gold, Trimmed, Clothes

Update #3 : 06/14/2012 11:06:28 am6/14/12

GOLD!

Update #2 : 06/13/2012 9:08:18 am6/13/12

Made nice shiny new hooks

Update #1 : 06/12/2012 6:55:47 am6/12/12

Colours Updated a second time

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Comments : 92

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captaincharisma
Level 32
Artisan Pirate
July 7, 2012, 5:34 am

I think it's a great skin and am still using it 'till now :D Don't think I'll be changing it in a long time :)

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
July 7, 2012, 1:29 pm

thanks :D

I'm glad you like it so much :)

cb46688
Level 21
Expert Ranger
June 28, 2012, 4:33 pm

Could i plz use your skin for my top ten skins blog im making? It could make you even more popular!

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
July 3, 2012, 10:32 am

That would be really good, go ahead :D

w5prime
Level 22
Expert Creeper
June 24, 2012, 10:55 am

I wont this skin to win

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 24, 2012, 11:45 am

I hope I do :)

Honestly, I don't think I will win this one though, but hopefully top 10?

w5prime
Level 22
Expert Creeper
June 29, 2012, 8:29 am

You have come 12th welldone.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
July 3, 2012, 10:32 am

Thanks :)

superalgae
Level 64
High Grandmaster Blockhead
June 23, 2012, 5:15 am

Excellent skin! The gold trim was a good idea, and the hook hands work out surprisingly well (I mean, not for holding a pen or anything like that, but they look good at least!). The backstory really completes the package.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 23, 2012, 12:01 pm

thanks :) I'm glad you like it!

w5prime
Level 22
Expert Creeper
June 22, 2012, 10:11 pm

craftygfx has just posted ur pirate skin its the same saying its toon link

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 23, 2012, 12:02 pm

I think it was a confusing accident?

w5prime
Level 22
Expert Creeper
June 23, 2012, 8:49 pm

i agree

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 24, 2012, 12:44 am

It's all sorted now, thanks for pointing it out :)

w5prime
Level 22
Expert Creeper
June 24, 2012, 5:03 am

np

danji_x
Level 24
Expert Mage
June 22, 2012, 8:01 am

First of all, awesome skin. Love how it is dark - really matches the theme. Not a bad backstory (though it should be "whose" in the first line) either. Diamonded - hope to see both our skins in the top 100.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 22, 2012, 8:37 am

Thanks :D

(and thanks for pointing out the mistake)

Hope to see you in the top 100 too :D

w5prime
Level 22
Expert Creeper
June 24, 2012, 9:06 am

u are in the top hundred will i hop u win

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 24, 2012, 11:44 am

Nice :D

Thanks for pointing that out to me :)

+mypuppysaber+
Level 34
Artisan Architect
June 13, 2012, 5:30 pm

the hat on his head could look like it was a little ripped up you could also give his cloths more of a drenched or wet look to them

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 13, 2012, 9:38 pm

Hmm, might try making the hat a bit ripped

I also had a go at putting seaweed on him, may upload that to see what people think.

How do you suggest giving him a more drenched look?

+mypuppysaber+
Level 34
Artisan Architect
June 13, 2012, 10:06 pm

some daker shades of brown like from light to dark around the bottem of the sleeves or bottom of the coat to show the water kinda like how when things get wet and you hang them up or something and the bottom is always the darker and more wet part


it would be experimental unsure if it would work i havent attempted it with a small canvas of a minecraft skin yet but you never know try it out see how it goes

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 13, 2012, 10:12 pm

Oh ok, cool!

Thanks for the advice, I will try it out later if I have time :D

Got an exam in 45 mins, so I should revise now xD

Thanks :)

+mypuppysaber+
Level 34
Artisan Architect
June 14, 2012, 10:38 am

true lol and your welcome

rythor101
Level 1
New Crafter
June 12, 2012, 5:06 pm

I liked the story. damn pirate dads.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 9:45 pm

Haha, thanks :D

bmyblake
Level 30
Artisan Herobrine
June 12, 2012, 1:08 pm

The story is so much better

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 9:45 pm

Thanks :)

Jackkoala
Level 5
Apprentice Prince
June 12, 2012, 7:49 am

cool back ground

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 10:08 am

Thanks!

RipClaw
Forum Moderator
Level 57
Grandmaster Skinner
June 12, 2012, 6:31 am

Shoot! I was working on a drowned skeletal pirate for the contest, but now I've seen two of them from talented skinners, so mine would look unoriginal. Back to the drawing board for me.

But great skin! Obviously, I love the concept since I was using it x3

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 10:12 am

Aaw, I know how that feels.

I wrote the story over the weekend, then saw another drowned skeleton, and was like "NOOOO!!" but luckily the backstory was quite different, and so was the other skin.

I find that the hardest part of these contests is coming up with a good, original concept, and I spend a lot of time thinking of ideas beforehand.

Good luck with whatever you end up making and thanks for the nice comment :D

poopingllama
Level 1
New Skinner
June 12, 2012, 5:20 am

nice!
cool story bro

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 6:31 am

Thanks :)

FarGuardian
Level 24
Expert Scribe
June 12, 2012, 1:27 am

A bone full of clatters.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 1:53 am

the clatter of bones

dunkey4
Level 29
Expert Ranger
June 11, 2012, 10:39 pm

great skin and cool story bro

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 12:37 am

Thanks :D

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 11, 2012, 8:36 pm

Cool, great to see you back in action. How did the exams go?

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 9:33 pm

My exams went quite well, thanks for asking :)
Still got 2 exams to go though...

Anyway, thanks :D

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 11, 2012, 10:13 pm

Exams are very scary. Had a few only a while ago, went extremly well, 34/40!!!!

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 10:30 pm

That's good :)

I have A-Level exams at the moment, which basically decide which university I can go to, so very scary, since I want to apply to Cambridge, so I need probably about 95% in every exam.

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 12, 2012, 11:53 am

Yep, good luck, I hope you don't need it! But seriously, I wish you well in those exams to come.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 12:00 pm

Thanks :D

Revising lots of Maths throughout the week. Hopefully the exams should go well :)

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 12, 2012, 8:51 pm

I hate maths, but at least I'm getting an A-.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 10:18 pm

That's good for someone who hates Maths :)

I'm going to do Maths and computer science and university

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 12, 2012, 11:01 pm

Just because I hate maths doesn't mean I suck at it. It's just SO tedious, so I hope you can cope with it. I think this ENTIRE semester only one class has been quick, and that was graphing. I love computers so I wish you (even more) good luck with your exams.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 13, 2012, 12:54 am

Thanks :)

Good luck with any exams you have too :D

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 13, 2012, 11:48 am

Luckily I have no exams left! Yay! But I have two assigments and one is due today! Finished it last night. ;)

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 13, 2012, 12:19 pm

Nice timing xD

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 13, 2012, 8:54 pm

More like procrastinating! XD

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 13, 2012, 9:39 pm

Haha xD

Got to revise now, exam in 1 hour 20 mins

Lepyro
Level 1
New Miner
June 13, 2012, 9:49 pm

K. Good luck. And Bye.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 13, 2012, 10:13 pm

Thanks, and bye :)

Happybandaid
Retired Moderator
Level 38
Artisan Scribe
June 11, 2012, 6:54 pm

Looks very nice!! :]

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 9:32 pm

Thanks :D

KnobleKnives
Chat Moderator
Level 53
Grandmaster Nerd
June 11, 2012, 5:32 pm

Cut off his own hands? Yeek, that's like that movie that came out where the guy's arm gets crushed under a boulder and he has to cut off his own arm to escape. Here's a diamond.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 9:32 pm

Thanks :)

Yeah, the backstory is a little crazy at times xD

Editing Door
Level 10
Journeyman Archer
June 11, 2012, 12:56 pm

like spacemonkie but better ?>.>

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 9:31 pm

I came up with the idea before I saw spacemonkie's skin (since I wrote the story over the weekend)

thanks :)

spacemonkiee
Level 54
Grandmaster Geek
June 11, 2012, 12:30 pm

I love those hooks! Great stuff Will.

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 9:30 pm

Thanks :D

I might redo the hooks a little bit, since the backs of the hands look a bit plain

spacemonkiee
Level 54
Grandmaster Geek
June 12, 2012, 2:25 am

True. Just looked at it from behind and they are all but gone. Maybe shade it a little more and increase the lighting area so that it looks like its got more of a shine to it. Regardless, still love em. ;)

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 2:35 am

Thanks :D

Was just experimenting right now, and I made a version of this skin with a gold trim on the jacket. Should I upload that version as an optional download?

spacemonkiee
Level 54
Grandmaster Geek
June 12, 2012, 2:42 am

Yeah, I'm sure people would appreciate the choices. Maybe even ask people which one they prefer and then change your main skin to that one if you get a good response. I've just removed my entry from the contest and I'm gonna try and think of something new cause I appreciated all the feedback saying the skin was a bit too messy. The PMC community spoke and I listened. ;D

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 12, 2012, 2:49 am

Ok :D

Right now, I'm going to update the skin to a new version with slightly better colours and better hook hands. After that, I might try the gold trimmed version for a bit, and see what people think.

Thanks for the advice.

 

I'm sad to hear that you took down your entry, but I can't wait to see what you come up with next :D

DinowCookie
Level 1
New Miner
June 11, 2012, 9:38 am

Good story ;3 A little like mine

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 10:06 am

Thanks :D

Hey, your's has a story! did you add that recently, or was I just blind the first time round xD
I like your story too :)

DinowCookie
Level 1
New Miner
June 11, 2012, 10:09 am

I wrote my story tonight and uploaded it in an update this afternoon
thanks for linking my story ;3

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 10:23 am

No problem, it's a great story :D

Don't you mean that you wrote it LAST night (unless you went back in time :3)

DinowCookie
Level 1
New Miner
June 11, 2012, 10:26 am

xD true

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 10:29 am

Yay! time travel :D

Aximili
Level 57
Grandmaster Dwarf
June 11, 2012, 9:35 am

Take this diamond, BTW, nice backstory!

WillFrost
Level 50
Grandmaster Pixel Painter
June 11, 2012, 10:04 am

Thanks :)

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